Currently in prepublication: Volume 2!

Same error at 93%… and 98%. The jewelry is brooch , a broach is used to make holes .

“Hi, um...” Nodoka began.“E-Excruse me!”

Missing space? began.“E-Excruse ->began. “E-Excruse

"It is a pleasure to meet you. My name is Freesia Salt. I hope we'll be well acquainted from now on," I I said with a curtsy.

I I said -> I said.

Also, the view selection button is somewhat unintuitive, there are 3 modes, a button is used to cycle through them, and the button displays a graphic and has alt text indicating what the next one is. This is a weird way to select multiple choices and I probably would have gone with 3 buttons with the current one highlighted or a drop down or something that makes it more obvious that there are 3 options and what they are.

Currently in prepublication: Volume 1!

“The pair's lips parted, andInami's hands followed the outline of Aoi's body, caressing him all over.”

Missing space

One Saturday after everything calmed down,Maya down, Maya and I were visiting our parents’ graves.

Missing space.

Around 78%:

Ruka hurriedly shook her head, denying what RInne Rinne had said.

Capitalization mistake.

[...] glowing in the moonlight With a small altar at its center [...]

With the way the sentence is currently written, with should be lower case.

[...] brought about various reactions from the other Guild members But once they'd shared a drink [...]

Should probably be members, but or members. But

V2P2
~10%

Given how I’d been born to a poor noble house in the midst of a terrible downfall in my previous life, the expensive clothes and bag made me reel.

Wrong word? (Because that is describe how her new life is start and if it is isekai old life is probably not have noble house?) previous->new

I think that you misunderstood the description of her previous life. In her previous life, she was a noble from a poorer house, and her parents sent her to social events with wealthier, more powerful houses where she always felt out of place, because her clothes weren't as expensive as those from the other noble families, since her family wasn't rich. She then died at one of those social events when an earthquake occurred and wished that she hadn't just always obediently done what her parents wanted (and thus decided in her new life to try to be like the villainess in one of her favorite books).

In her current life, she has once again been born into a noble family, but her noble family this time around is doing quite well.

“Gift Unleashed. Gloam’s Grand Finale: Punishing Eternal End.”

Other gift in part are use — not .?; Gift Unleashed. Gloam’s->Gift Unleashed—Gloam’s

~42%

“The only path left is to put our faith in a ruler that has earned our trust and confidence—one none other than Lettie Ungaria.

Extra word(s)?; one none other than Lettie Ungaria->none other than Lettie Ungaria
(or one none other than Lettie Ungaria->one Lettie Ungaria)

~42%

We must preserve the knowledge of our fallen researchers and scholars, lest they may rot in oblivion.”

Maybe extra word? lest they may->lest they

V2P4
~62%

While the beasts enjoyed their false banquet, a man was drinking alone from a gourd in the palace rooftop.

Maybe wrong word? in->on

V2P5
~0%

Zacks forcefully wrapped his arms around the masked man’s shoulders—the masked man whose very existence turns small events into large-scale conflicts.

Maybe wrong tense? turns->turned

~55%

I’ m gonna eat more sushi in your face!

Extra space?; I’ m->I’m

~55%

“It’s something I don’t consome enough of... The recent cultural transformations have made our lives far easier, but food from across the sea isn’t to my tastes.”

[...] training sessions, " I murmured [...]

Has a stray space after the comma.

@karasutengu that just means it's been a while since they made any mistakes for anyone to report.

That, or that anyone felt engaged enough to report something. :p I’ve stopped reporting missed spaces for the most part, unless there were other things to report and I remembered where those missed spaces were. ^o^

[…] not by Bael, but by the true Demon King. Not against some summoned child, but by a true Hero of the world.

Shouldn't this be the same word also in the second sentence, so both against or both by?

[…] no one cared of its true meaning […]

Should be about or for.

~91%

[…] do you think Gurba's going to be much longer?"

The direct meaning would be Gurba's about to die, but the following dialog seems to imply he's just away in his workshop, so maybe going to be away or going to need?

[...] to a dungeon together and clear it together!"

is bad to read.

~88%

Has a character encoding error in

[...], and it'll be just the two of us

~92%

[...] A lot's happened

Would be much better as A lot has happened.