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    • myskaros
      myskaros Staff last edited by lovelight

      This is the dedicated topic for posting suggested corrections for The Epic Tale of the Reincarnated Prince Herscherik.

      Currently in prepublication: Volume 5!

      Whoever said nothing's impossible never tried slamming a revolving door.

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      • B
        BunnyFuFu Premium Member last edited by

        Book 3 - Part 4
        89%
        ... objects packed with a library's worth of . These things ...
        sentence just ends.

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        • Libri Liberorum
          Libri Liberorum Premium Member last edited by

          part 5 39%

          According to another guard's testimony at a later date, spent a lot of time staring into space that day , too.

          There is at least one word missing somewhere. Perhaps "spent" -> "he spent"?

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            KBaggy Premium Member last edited by

            Book 3 - Part 5
            92%
            The prince has become some as important to you as I am, -> should be The prince has become someone as important to you as I am,

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            • K
              KBaggy Premium Member last edited by

              Book 3 - Part 6
              63% - Because of experiences like that in his previous life, Herscherik had revered any god in his other life, either. -> Because of experiences like that in his previous life, Herscherik had not revered any god in his other life, either. (Missing not inverting the meaning of the sentence, I think)
              63% - Thathero -> That hero (Missing space)

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              • Libri Liberorum
                Libri Liberorum Premium Member last edited by

                part 6 80% "if that had been a concert" -> "concern".
                I've noticed a couple of others e.g. "uind" -> "wind" that will be picked up by spellchecker.

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                • Libri Liberorum
                  Libri Liberorum Premium Member last edited by

                  Part 7 85%

                  This is called blackmail, by the way...

                  I think "extortion" would be a more accurate word here.

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                  • K
                    KBaggy Premium Member last edited by

                    Part 7 20%
                    Kuro was an outside dog who spent most of his time in the yard, but he never went [ast the gate, -> went past the gate.

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                    • K
                      KBaggy Premium Member last edited by

                      Part 8 8%
                      At worst, it might overload and take this entire with it." -> entire what? room, building, city, country, world, universe? (Probably building)

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                      • Libri Liberorum
                        Libri Liberorum Premium Member last edited by

                        96%

                        Like the previous, volume I won't include any spoilers here.

                        Misplaced comma.

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                        • Libri Liberorum
                          Libri Liberorum Premium Member last edited by Libri Liberorum

                          Vol 5 part 1 10%

                          The Principality of Parche ... With the Grand Duke of Parche as its head of state ...

                          Shouldn't the head of state of a principality be a prince? It is right there in the name, like "king" in "kingdom".

                          Edit: Wikipedia says:

                          The term principality is also sometimes used generically for any small monarchy, especially for small sovereign states ruled by a monarch of a lesser rank than a king, such as a Fürst (usually translated in English as "prince"), as in Liechtenstein, or a Grand Duke.

                          So it turns out to be OK after all, if a bit confusing.

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                          • unsynchedcheese
                            unsynchedcheese Premium Member last edited by

                            Volume 5 part 1

                            [about 18%] His name was Herschelik Gracis, the Seventh Prince of the Gracis Kingdom. - Herscherik

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                            • Lily Garden
                              Lily Garden Member last edited by

                              90%

                              I hope to see you again in the text volume.

                              Shouldn't it say next volume

                              “There’s always a story. It’s all stories, really. The sun coming up every day is a story. Everything’s got a story in it. Change the story, change the world.” ― Terry Pratchett, A Hat Full of Sky

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                              • I
                                Ingraman Premium Member last edited by Ingraman

                                Re: v5p7

                                [76%] along with his own wims.

                                I haven’t looked up that spelling, but shouldn’t it be whims?

                                Or has the book been published already? I should double check. ^^;

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