Black Summoner - Corrections Topic

lovelight

This is the dedicated topic for posting suggested corrections for Black Summoner.

Currently in prepublication: Volume 4!

Terabyte

Volume 3 - Part 1:

[94%] ::Indeed. And I’m all ready to catch your heart, honey.” ► Telepathic message. It should end with a double colon (::).

Terabyte

Volume 3 - Part 3:

[Generic] The skill's name Jin Scrimmage is wrongly written 2 times as Jim Scrimmage (without N).
[50%] to Parth together. By “all,”, I mean both Uld’s party ► Remove extra comma after the quote.
[80%] the spell was even greater than Viktor’s had been.. ► Duplicate period.

Terabyte

Volume 3 - Part 4:

[24%] I’ll order the front gate golems to vacant their posts. ► It should be vacate.
[26%] ::Wow, this is super convenient! Thank you, Kel-nii!” ► Telepathic message. It should end with a double colon (::).

Terabyte

Volume 3 - Part 5:

[3%] 3) Acknowledgement from at least two of the four ► It should be Acknowledgment (US spelling).
[92%] borrowed Farsight with Soul Eater — providing ► It should be Skill Eater.

Vorthod

part 5:

7%: the same trouble that was cropping ~~song~~ on all of Trycen's borders -> up

Ellyonia

part 6: [~21%] I'm able to summon the clotho clines anywhere at any time, so just let me know what you need.::
The phrase seems to be missing the word let,

Terabyte

Volume 3 - Part 6:

~~[16%] at any time, so just me know what you need.:: ► It should be let me.~~ Already reported.
[25%] out for a stroll through town.“You’ve got to be ► Missing space.
[30%] ::That’s...well, I do.” ► Telepathic message. It should end with a double colon (::).
[42%] Now you’re screwed, bitch!” screamed Ulfred ► Missing period.
~~[59%] bright red. And it was not the color of blood. ► It should be now.~~ Not an error.
[68%] my shield and the two cancelled each other ► It should be canceled (US spelling).
[94%] “What a egotistical delusion.” ► It should be an.

reesen

Thanks for the reports, as always!

@Terabyte, the 5th suggestion is not a mistake. The monster was starting to burn red like a furnace, so the narration is noting that it was not blood, as would be expected, but something more insidious :-)

Terabyte

Volume 3 - Part 7:

[50%] Tempest Barrier was abruptly dispeled, causing ► It should be dispelled.
[68%] The shockwave caused by the dispeling of the ► It should be dispelling.

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Volume 3 - Part 9:

[73%] ::MY KING!” ► Telepathic message. It should end with a double colon (::).

Terabyte

Volume 3 - Part 10:

[66%] “Gerard, stop worshipping it and start eating ► It should be worshiping (US spelling).
[72%] my eyes flew wide open.“This is delicious!!” ► Missing space.
[94%] and in the shadows lurk Trycen...at least, ► It should be lurks?

Hephaestus13

Volume 03 - Part 9:

[14%] "... Nellas-sama and everyone else have treat me so warmly even though only half of my blood is elven..." ► It should be treated

Terabyte

Volume 4 - Part 1:

[94%] hidden in Gerard’s shadow from the neck down.. ► Duplicate period.