Black Summoner - Corrections Topic

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Volume 8 - Part 4:

• [9%] “Whyyyy?!” Sister Ria wailed, equally surprised ► Given the contex that seems wrong. Should it be Shutola?
• [10%] of the Goddess! I musn’t go beyond having ► It should be mustn’t.
• [11%] yelped, then gasped. “Huh? What was I..” ► It should be 3 periods.
• [58%] affectionately hugging Georgius. Although ► The name was Georgios (double o, no u) before.
• [72%] “No, you musn’t! You can’t leave me behind!” ► It should be mustn’t.

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Volume 8 - Part 5:

• [45%] Heroes come up with, she’ll be able to deal with it.” ► It should be them (strategies; plural).
• [58%] “Mun-chan!?” ► It should be ?! for consistency.
• [81%] not believe his eyes. “She’s...complete unharmed?!” ► It should be completely.

[Gamen]

V8p5
[12%] However, none of them had yet to realize that the opponents waiting to fight him had been among the hostages they had saved in Toraj. -> none of them had realized or they had yet to realize or something I'm not clever enough to formulate.

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Volume 8 - Part 6:

• [6%] “Why the rush? It’s not like the bath will run away,” ► It should be a period.
• [74%] tell when you’re about do it from your breathing.” ► It should be about to.
• [100%] girl nodded in acknowledgement and gave him a ► It should be acknowledgment (US spelling).

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Volume 8 - Part 7:

• [Generic] The name Georgios is written 3 times as Georgius. (Or has it been changed?)

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Volume 8 - Part 8:

• [3%] as a knight, however, and braced by throwing every ► It should be braced himself?

[Weasalopes]

v8p8:

• It's still hundreds of time better letting him be disappointed by how weak they are.
  It's still hundreds of time better than letting him be disappointed by how weak they are.

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Volume 8 - Part 9:

• [59%] ► Is that “Rawr...” supposed to be Mdofarak? If yes it should be wrapped in doubler colons (::) since she's in Kelvin's magic pool.

“Rawr...”
Every once in a while, I felt thoughts about wanting to eat something sweet coming through. I supposed it couldn’t be helped with her being a girl and all. [...]

• [63%] a dragon king’s acknowledgement to usurp their seat— ► It should be acknowledgment (US spelling).

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Volume 8 - Part 10:

• [33%] as to convince herself was her true self. ► It should be it was?

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Volume 9 - Part 1:

• [75%] Beside her were Shutola on Georgius and ranks of ► It should be Georgios. (Or was the name changed? @Kamishiro_Taishi)

[Kamishiro_Taishi]

@terabyte Thanks for picking up on it. Fixed!

[lighthawk96]

Part 2 is 404 not found.

[Weasalopes]

V9P2:

• making the ones that had hidden her earlier get up
  At the simplest, replace 'her' with 'there', but if you look over the whole sentence within the paragraph that may still result in something that doesn't totally make sense.
  I mean, it's not like the corpses had deliberately hidden there themselves, they're dead dead, not undead dead.

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Volume 9 - Part 2:

• [29%] reposit it within a descendent of the true bloodline of ► It should be descendant.
• [49%] “Your Holiness, how is Sister Atra is your child?” ► It should be how come / how is it possible that?

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Volume 9 - Part 3:

• [9%] the goddess she worshipped continued stuffing ► It should be worshiped (US spelling).

[pachogamez]

Vol 8 epub came out today, but there is an error in the character chart at the start

[BartzBB]

@pachogamez
I know it's wrong but the description perfectly matches the expression of the characters. Especially without context.

Slave = Sad
Happy = Smile

[Gamen]

V9p6
[43%] “Question: may I participate in this match? ::
:: Sure thing. We were ready to give you a handicap and do this two-on-three from the start.” -> double colons instead of quotes

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Volume 9 - Part 6:

• [2%] But it’s recent. It’s, like, years ago. ► Given the context it should be not recent?
• [39%] “Huh? Um, u-un..uncle?” ► It should be 3 periods.
• [49%] ► Both dialogue's have a double quote and a telepathic :: starting/closing. Both should be normal dialogues. Already reported.

“Question: may I participate in this match?::
::Sure thing. We were ready to give you a handicap and do this two-on-three from the start.”

[WaterDweller]

Volume 9 Part 7
There were a couple of instances where Dahak was described as looking for "unique fauna", and even planting it on his scales. The word "fauna" refers to the animal world, though. The word referring to the world of plants is "flora". As in the collocation "flora and fauna".

Edit: Which, come to think of it, the translator probably already knows. It's an easy slip-up.