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      lovelight Staff last edited by yuzumori

      This is the dedicated topic for posting suggested corrections for Black Summoner.

      Currently in prepublication: Volume 10!

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      • Terabyte
        Terabyte Premium Member last edited by

        Volume 3 - Part 1:

        • [94%] ::Indeed. And I’m all ready to catch your heart, honey.” ► Telepathic message. It should end with a double colon (::).
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        • Terabyte
          Terabyte Premium Member last edited by

          Volume 3 - Part 3:

          • [Generic] The skill's name Jin Scrimmage is wrongly written 2 times as Jim Scrimmage (without N).
          • [50%] to Parth together. By “all,”, I mean both Uld’s party ► Remove extra comma after the quote.
          • [80%] the spell was even greater than Viktor’s had been.. ► Duplicate period.
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          • Terabyte
            Terabyte Premium Member last edited by

            Volume 3 - Part 4:

            • [24%] I’ll order the front gate golems to vacant their posts. ► It should be vacate.
            • [26%] ::Wow, this is super convenient! Thank you, Kel-nii!” ► Telepathic message. It should end with a double colon (::).
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            • Terabyte
              Terabyte Premium Member last edited by

              Volume 3 - Part 5:

              • [3%] 3) Acknowledgement from at least two of the four ► It should be Acknowledgment (US spelling).
              • [92%] borrowed Farsight with Soul Eater — providing ► It should be Skill Eater.
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                Vorthod Premium Member last edited by

                part 5:

                7%: the same trouble that was cropping song on all of Trycen's borders -> up

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                  Ellyonia Premium Member last edited by

                  part 6: [~21%] I'm able to summon the clotho clines anywhere at any time, so just let me know what you need.::
                  The phrase seems to be missing the word let,

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                  • Terabyte
                    Terabyte Premium Member last edited by Terabyte

                    Volume 3 - Part 6:

                    • [16%] at any time, so just me know what you need.:: ► It should be let me. Already reported.
                    • [25%] out for a stroll through town.“You’ve got to be ► Missing space.
                    • [30%] ::That’s...well, I do.” ► Telepathic message. It should end with a double colon (::).
                    • [42%] Now you’re screwed, bitch!” screamed Ulfred ► Missing period.
                    • [59%] bright red. And it was not the color of blood. ► It should be now. Not an error.
                    • [68%] my shield and the two cancelled each other ► It should be canceled (US spelling).
                    • [94%] “What a egotistical delusion.” ► It should be an.
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                      reesen Editors last edited by

                      Thanks for the reports, as always!

                      @Terabyte, the 5th suggestion is not a mistake. The monster was starting to burn red like a furnace, so the narration is noting that it was not blood, as would be expected, but something more insidious :-)

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                      • Terabyte
                        Terabyte Premium Member last edited by

                        Volume 3 - Part 7:

                        • [50%] Tempest Barrier was abruptly dispeled, causing ► It should be dispelled.
                        • [68%] The shockwave caused by the dispeling of the ► It should be dispelling.
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                          • Terabyte
                            Terabyte Premium Member last edited by

                            Volume 3 - Part 9:

                            • [73%] ::MY KING!” ► Telepathic message. It should end with a double colon (::).
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                            • Terabyte
                              Terabyte Premium Member last edited by

                              Volume 3 - Part 10:

                              • [66%] “Gerard, stop worshipping it and start eating ► It should be worshiping (US spelling).
                              • [72%] my eyes flew wide open.“This is delicious!!” ► Missing space.
                              • [94%] and in the shadows lurk Trycen...at least, ► It should be lurks?
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                              • Hephaestus13
                                Hephaestus13 Premium Member last edited by

                                Volume 03 - Part 9:

                                • [14%] "... Nellas-sama and everyone else have treat me so warmly even though only half of my blood is elven..." ► It should be treated
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                                • Terabyte
                                  Terabyte Premium Member last edited by

                                  Volume 4 - Part 1:

                                  • [94%] hidden in Gerard’s shadow from the neck down.. ► Duplicate period.
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                                  • Terabyte
                                    Terabyte Premium Member last edited by

                                    Volume 4 - Part 2:

                                    • [9%] “I see now. I suppose that makes sense” ► Missing period.
                                    • [34%] Is this an active place for worshipping someone ► It should be worshiping (US spelling).
                                    • [40%] ::Uh-oh, my Danger Detection is off the charts!: ► Telepathic dialogue. It should end with a double colon (::).
                                    • [49%] the power to absorb magic like Clotho does?” ► Telepathic dialogue. It should end with a double colon (::).
                                    • [68%] ”I’ll stop it!” Gerard shouted. ► The dialogue's starting double quote is wrongly a closing one.
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                                    • Terabyte
                                      Terabyte Premium Member last edited by

                                      Volume 4 - Part 3:

                                      • [73%] Sera’s stats now rivalled Melfina’s, ► It should be rivaled (US spelling).
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                                      • Gamen
                                        Gamen Premium Member last edited by

                                        [50%] It was clear in her eyes that she had the hots for Sylvia. - I'm confused, should this instead be he as in Nagua? Neither Ema nor Ariel make sense... though I suppose it could be "It was clear from her eyes" if it's Ema... Still, it seemed like her train of thought was "Nagua has the hots for Sylvia so he's showing off for her"...

                                        My talking sword has a point. And is also right.

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                                        • Terabyte
                                          Terabyte Premium Member last edited by

                                          Volume 4 - Part 4:

                                          • [Generic] The name Sylvia is also written 13 times as Silvia (double i). And there's also 1 instance of it in part 3.
                                          • [26%] and she seems to have gotten into it. She couldn’t ► It should be to?
                                          • [40%] have a bit now and then if it compliments what she’s ► It should be complements.
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                                            Vorthod Premium Member last edited by

                                            20%: Sorry, Kel-nee. I couldn't stop them -> Unless Kelvin got a gender change while I wasn't looking, this should probably be Kel-nii
                                            50%: It was clear in her eyes that she had the hots for Sylvia -> "he" I'm pretty sure this is about Nagua who had a male pronoun previously.
                                            90%: "Hmm...Gerard." "Yes, my king?" -> This was a telepathic conversation. Replace quotes with double-colons

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