Black Summoner - Corrections Topic

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Volume 5 - Part 6:

• [Note] The name's again Mdofarak instead of Mdfarak. I'll take it as being an intentional change from now on.
• [46%] then given him free reign. He was currently in ► It should be rein?
• [75%] he’s been a bit help with his Construction skill. ► It should be big.
• [84%] “And Gerard, stop that. You’re scaring Dahak.” ► The paragraph is wrongly indented because it uses <br> instead of a proper line break.
• [90%] We’d be disadvantaged in all respects, not just ► It should be aspects.

[Gamen]

Volume 5 Part 6
[47%] Just checking, but it really is Gemmation and not say Germination, right? ...y'know, 'cause he's a farmer dragon...

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Volume 5 - Part 7:

• [66%] food for the dinner with General Dan. To that ► It should be Clive I think?
• [67%] “What kind of a joke is that, General Tirstan?” ► It should be Tristan.

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Volume 5 - Part 8:

• [92%] Boga nodded to signal his acknowledgement, then ► It should be acknowledgment (US spelling).

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Volume 5 - Part 9:

• [23%] In that case...all of you, give me your MP.:: ► Normal dialogue. It should be the usual closing double quote.

[mlindner]

At 30% in, just before the image, there's a mention of using the "-chan" suffix for a name, but it's not applied to any name. Did the editor delete it?

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Volume 5 - Part 10:

• [9%] to serve as a gong that signalled the start ► It should be signaled (US spelling).
• [28%] so many steaks of light were fired at the ► It should be streaks.
• [37%] ::RRRAAWWRRRR!:: ► Should this dialogue use normal double quotes instead of being telepathic? Before it was mentioned Boga can't use the Network just yet.

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Volume 5 - Part 11:

• [0%] for truly special occasions.Even members of the royal ► Missing space.
• [66%] attempt to use Royal Degree. Analyze Eye informed ► It should be Decree.
• [69%] only thing he could do was again use Royal Decree. ► Maybe use again (switch around).
• [91%] Mara Pisuna/Demon Lord-ification, Concealment ► The previous instance was Lordification (no hyphen). Update either one to match.
• [99%] he’s now gone. So I can’t fulfil that dream of mine ► It should be fulfill (US spelling).

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Volume 5 - Part 12:

• [Generic] I've noticed some of Demon Lord Zel dialogues not having the first and last character capitalized like all others. Here's a list of them:
  • [31%] “(My bodY Is WarninG Me ThaT ThE RedheaD Is ThE ► BodY
  • [32%] “(HeH heH heH. WomaN, WhaT HavE YoU DonE To ► HeH HeH
  • [37%] “(Hng?!)” ► HnG
  • [40%] “(A HigH-tiereD BindinG SpelL. GriM ReapeR, JusT ► HigH-TiereD or High-tiereD
  • [50%] MagiC Rushing Up BehinD Me. No, IT’s RotatinG ► RushinG / It’s (Or It’S?)
  • [54%] I Do Not Feel ThE PaiN, ThE RapiD DraininG Of My ► NoT FeeL
• [8%] a feat achievable by only true gluttons—those ► Maybe only by (switch around)?
• [16%] Sonic Boots was apparently cancelling out the ► It should be canceling (US spelling).
• [36%] be invisible and could now be be seen with the ► Duplicate be.
• [48%] opposite direction, effectively cancelling it out. ► It should be canceling (US spelling).

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Volume 6 - Part 2:

• [26%] “You know as well as I do that beyond me.” ► It should be that it’s beyond me.
• [36%] Deramis who formerly worshipped Elearis, ► It should be worshiped (US spelling).
• [64%] “I know, ri— Wait, Mel?! What about me?! ► The dialogue's closing double quote is missing.

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Volume 6 - Part 1:

• [Generic] Gerard's skill Self Modification is written 2 times as Self-Modification (with a dash). Remove the dash to make it consistent with previous volumes.
• [Generic] Gerard's skill Self Transcendence is written 6 times as Self-Transcendence (with a dash). Remove the dash to make it consistent.

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Volume 6 - Part 3:

• [Generic] The skill Glory Within Mine Hands is written 2 times as Glory in Mine Hands (in instead of Within).

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Volume 6 - Part 4:

• [Generic] The name Gobera is written 4 times as Begora.
• [42%] “I’m not a little girl! I so can fight too!” ► Remove so. (Or is it on purpose?)
• [47%] Ruka picked up the Rank D iron dagger as her ► It should be daggers (plural; there's 2).
• [49%] “All right, then,” I responded.” Let’s get this ► The dialogue's starting double quote is a closing one. Also, move the space before it.

[Elleya]

6:5

Sera, however, clung to be even tighter.

Should this be 'me'?

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Volume 6 - Part 5:

• [Generic] The word Directory (Capitalized) is also used as directory (lowercase). Make its usage consistent.
• [58%] a ‘D’ while he got an ‘A’. How does that figure?” ► Move the period inside the quotes.
• [87%] “You ‘ear me? Hic! Imma win! So ‘eave i’ ta me!” ► Both should be ’ear / ’eave (different ’ )?
• [96%] tighter. “Nooooo! I’m gonna sleep wi’ ‘im tonight!” ► It should be ’im (different ’ )?

[Weasalopes]

Volume 6 part 6:

• Even whileglaring, her almond-shaped eyes looked very cute. | missing space
  Even while glaring, her almond-shaped eyes looked very cute.

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Volume 6 - Part 7:

• [36%] the bare minimum of what’d have done to him.” ► It should be what she’d?
• [46%] people for the job. Rosaria and Huba were here ► It should be Rosalia.
• [90%] Sera, is this girl everyone was talking about? ► It should be the girl.

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Volume 6 - Part 8:

• [40%] had absolutely dominated opposition so far, ► It should be the opposition.
• [68%] ► Kelvin should be using a single sword but these 3 paragraphs below use swords (plural) 4 times.

“What...kind of a joke is this?” Jereol growled, panting as he glared at me. “Why did you put your swords down?!”
“Kelvin-sama just stabbed his swords into the stage and let go?! Wait, he managed to stab his swords into this stage?!”
As she said, I had just let go of my swords. I was now barehanded.

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Volume 6 - Part 9:

• [Generic] Last image was insert6 in Part 7 and now we have insert8. There's a missing insert7 somewhere in between.
• [35%] the fleeting flower blooming in broad daylight here to ► Should Grostina's title be Capitalized like in her status?

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Volume 6 - Part 10:

• [90%] “I could say the same of you,’ Nellas returned. ► The dialogue's closing double quote is a single one.

[GeorgeMTO]

V6 p10 26% Evolved into a daemon - P1 at least spelt it daimon. Not checking other parts to see if there's other inconsistencies.