Black Summoner - Corrections Topic
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Volume 7 - Part 2:
- [94%] bastard swords that
equalled
Gerard’s sword, ► It should be equaled (US spelling).
- [94%] bastard swords that
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Volume 7 - Part 3:
- [19%] “Well...all right, sounds good to me.
’
► The dialogue's closing double quote is asingle
one. - [86%] that had been on
standy
inside the tail ► It should be standby.
- [19%] “Well...all right, sounds good to me.
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V7P3 12% - assault of the winds and defty used them - deftly
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Volume 7 - Part 4:
- [22%] ◇ ◇ ◇
>
► Remove extra>
character. - [47%] before death. Remaining
cooltown
: 720:00:00 ► It should be cooldown. - [97%] shock of the clashes
travelled
all the way up ► It should be traveled (US spelling).
- [22%] ◇ ◇ ◇
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Volume 7 - Part 5:
- [41%] both sides seemingly
cancelling
each other ► It should be canceling (US spelling).
- [41%] both sides seemingly
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Volume 7 - Part 6:
- [9%] a ruckus when Melfina
dispeled
Celsius Briar and the ► It should be dispelled. - [10%] Assassin and Condemner—or
Bahl and Ange
—Rion’s ► It should be Ange and Bahl (switch around) to sync it with their roles. - [17%] much longer do you plan on pretending to be
sleep
?!” ► It should be asleep. - [88%] cheerfully swinging her legs.
“ In
case you don’t know, ► Removeextra space
. - [92%] After all, as a
descendent
of the line of Deramisian ► It should be descendant.
- [9%] a ruckus when Melfina
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V7p7
[11%] Back when I was a slave, I killed my slaver and his lackey. -> I killed my owner and his lackey from back when I was a slave. -
Volume 7 - Part 7:
- [21%] To get in,” Ange held out a white key,
” you’d need a
► The dialogue's starting double quote is aclosing
one. And move the space, too. - [33%] we’re in trouble for destroying the coliseum, Kel-nii?
”
► Network dialogue. Theclosing double quote
should be :: instead. - [34%] face in the arena,
”
Ange admitted.“
Um...sorry. And ► Network dialogues. Bothclosing + starting double quotes
should be :: instead. - [60%] I could be open to the idea of allowing him to
wed G—
► The dialogue's closing double quote is missing. - [64%] “
Cancelled
...” It makes sense, but still, it’s a shame. ► It should be Canceled (US spelling). - [87%] rewards, awards, and titles
granted
Kelvin by various ► It should be granted to. - [93%] that had been bothering me ever since I
arrived..
► Duplicateperiod
. - [94%] tournament finals were
cancelled
, so this works out!” ► It should be canceled (US spelling).
- [21%] To get in,” Ange held out a white key,
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Volume 7 - Part 9:
- [24%] your guard down just yet,
Sera
, lass! Beasts are ► It should probably be Rion or Ange? Seraisn't around
, she's in the capital. - [38%] Right at that moment, Efil
dispeled
Covert Action, ► It should be dispelled.
- [24%] your guard down just yet,
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@terabyte said in Black Summoner - Corrections Topic:
Volume 7 - Part 9:
- [24%] your guard down just yet,
Sera
, lass! Beasts are ► It should probably be Rion? Seraisn't around
, she's in the capital.
Maybe Ange? I'm probably misremembering, but think lass is how he refers to her and not Rion. But either way shouldn't be Sera.
- [24%] your guard down just yet,
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@khaos Yeah, Ange's an option, too. I thought I had added the name before posting but looks like I forgot. Updated it.
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Volume 7 - Part 10:
- [20%] Shutola gushed. “
Rosaria
and Huba, you ► It should be Rosalia. - [80%] “I...no longer
a way out
. I surrender,” Kilto ► It should be see a way out / have a way out? - [99%] working on,
Blackiron Mage
. Please check ► I've actually seen the fan TL use Black Iron Magician / Black Iron Wizard which seem better(?) choices. Just nitpicking though. 😋
- [20%] Shutola gushed. “
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V7P10 97% - every last fight more intense than the last - using last twice there feels awkward. Perhaps every single fight, or some other retweak.
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V8p1
[21%] But me the details slowly -> But tell me -
@gamen said in Black Summoner - Corrections Topic:
V8p1
[21%] But me the details slowly -> But tell meI was thinking "But give me the details slowly", but your thought works as well.
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Volume 8 - Part 1:
[21%] to the Network. ButAlready reported.me
the details slowly. ► It should be tell me?- [56%] great with alcohol
either, ”
Rion smiled ► Removeextra space
. - [94%] saying, “It’s a secret!” at the same
time
► Missing period.
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V8p2
[100%] “Mel, make sure to put it on Arondight and Queen’s Teror too!” -> Terror. Also, that's a much more recent source for why Arondight sounded familiar... -
Volume 8 - Part 2:
- [61%] our relationship is
entire
wholesome—” ► It should be entirely. [99%] it on Arondight and Queen’sAlready reported.Teror
too!” ► It should be Terror.
- [61%] our relationship is
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Volume 8 - Part 3:
- [4%] gone,” Efil told Ellie and
Ruke
a slight distance away. ► It should be Ruka. - [11%] past Deramis’s borders and into Parth’s
territories
. ► It should be territory (singular)?
- [4%] gone,” Efil told Ellie and
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V8p3
[56%] Sitting on the throne before a massive status of an angel -> statue