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    • Terabyte
      Terabyte Premium Member last edited by

      Volume 7 - Part 2:

      • [94%] bastard swords that equalled Gerard’s sword, ► It should be equaled (US spelling).
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      • Terabyte
        Terabyte Premium Member last edited by

        Volume 7 - Part 3:

        • [19%] “Well...all right, sounds good to me.’ ► The dialogue's closing double quote is a single one.
        • [86%] that had been on standy inside the tail ► It should be standby.
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        • G
          GeorgeMTO Premium Member last edited by

          V7P3 12% - assault of the winds and defty used them - deftly

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          • Terabyte
            Terabyte Premium Member last edited by

            Volume 7 - Part 4:

            • [22%] ◇ ◇ ◇> ► Remove extra > character.
            • [47%] before death. Remaining cooltown: 720:00:00 ► It should be cooldown.
            • [97%] shock of the clashes travelled all the way up ► It should be traveled (US spelling).
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            • Terabyte
              Terabyte Premium Member last edited by

              Volume 7 - Part 5:

              • [41%] both sides seemingly cancelling each other ► It should be canceling (US spelling).
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              • Terabyte
                Terabyte Premium Member last edited by

                Volume 7 - Part 6:

                • [9%] a ruckus when Melfina dispeled Celsius Briar and the ► It should be dispelled.
                • [10%] Assassin and Condemner—or Bahl and Ange—Rion’s ► It should be Ange and Bahl (switch around) to sync it with their roles.
                • [17%] much longer do you plan on pretending to be sleep?!” ► It should be asleep.
                • [88%] cheerfully swinging her legs. “ In case you don’t know, ► Remove extra space.
                • [92%] After all, as a descendent of the line of Deramisian ► It should be descendant.
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                • Gamen
                  Gamen Premium Member last edited by Gamen

                  V7p7
                  [11%] Back when I was a slave, I killed my slaver and his lackey. -> I killed my owner and his lackey from back when I was a slave.

                  My talking sword has a point. And is also right.

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                  • Terabyte
                    Terabyte Premium Member last edited by

                    Volume 7 - Part 7:

                    • [21%] To get in,” Ange held out a white key,” you’d need a ► The dialogue's starting double quote is a closing one. And move the space, too.
                    • [33%] we’re in trouble for destroying the coliseum, Kel-nii?” ► Network dialogue. The closing double quote should be :: instead.
                    • [34%] face in the arena,” Ange admitted. “Um...sorry. And ► Network dialogues. Both closing + starting double quotes should be :: instead.
                    • [60%] I could be open to the idea of allowing him to wed G— ► The dialogue's closing double quote is missing.
                    • [64%] “Cancelled...” It makes sense, but still, it’s a shame. ► It should be Canceled (US spelling).
                    • [87%] rewards, awards, and titles granted Kelvin by various ► It should be granted to.
                    • [93%] that had been bothering me ever since I arrived.. ► Duplicate period.
                    • [94%] tournament finals were cancelled, so this works out!” ► It should be canceled (US spelling).
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                    • Terabyte
                      Terabyte Premium Member last edited by Terabyte

                      Volume 7 - Part 9:

                      • [24%] your guard down just yet, Sera, lass! Beasts are ► It should probably be Rion or Ange? Sera isn't around, she's in the capital.
                      • [38%] Right at that moment, Efil dispeled Covert Action, ► It should be dispelled.
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                      • Khaos
                        Khaos Premium Member @Terabyte last edited by

                        @terabyte said in Black Summoner - Corrections Topic:

                        Volume 7 - Part 9:

                        • [24%] your guard down just yet, Sera, lass! Beasts are ► It should probably be Rion? Sera isn't around, she's in the capital.

                        Maybe Ange? I'm probably misremembering, but think lass is how he refers to her and not Rion. But either way shouldn't be Sera.

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                        • Terabyte
                          Terabyte Premium Member @Khaos last edited by

                          @khaos Yeah, Ange's an option, too. I thought I had added the name before posting but looks like I forgot. Updated it.

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                          • Terabyte
                            Terabyte Premium Member last edited by Terabyte

                            Volume 7 - Part 10:

                            • [20%] Shutola gushed. “Rosaria and Huba, you ► It should be Rosalia.
                            • [80%] “I...no longer a way out. I surrender,” Kilto ► It should be see a way out / have a way out?
                            • [99%] working on, Blackiron Mage. Please check ► I've actually seen the fan TL use Black Iron Magician / Black Iron Wizard which seem better(?) choices. Just nitpicking though. 😋
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                            • G
                              GeorgeMTO Premium Member last edited by

                              V7P10 97% - every last fight more intense than the last - using last twice there feels awkward. Perhaps every single fight, or some other retweak.

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                              • Gamen
                                Gamen Premium Member last edited by

                                V8p1
                                [21%] But me the details slowly -> But tell me

                                My talking sword has a point. And is also right.

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                                • Weasalopes
                                  Weasalopes Premium Member @Gamen last edited by

                                  @gamen said in Black Summoner - Corrections Topic:

                                  V8p1
                                  [21%] But me the details slowly -> But tell me

                                  I was thinking "But give me the details slowly", but your thought works as well.

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                                  • Terabyte
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                                    Volume 8 - Part 1:

                                    • [21%] to the Network. But me the details slowly. ► It should be tell me? Already reported.
                                    • [56%] great with alcohol either, ” Rion smiled ► Remove extra space.
                                    • [94%] saying, “It’s a secret!” at the same time ► Missing period.
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                                    • Gamen
                                      Gamen Premium Member last edited by

                                      V8p2
                                      [100%] “Mel, make sure to put it on Arondight and Queen’s Teror too!” -> Terror. Also, that's a much more recent source for why Arondight sounded familiar...

                                      My talking sword has a point. And is also right.

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                                      • Terabyte
                                        Terabyte Premium Member last edited by

                                        Volume 8 - Part 2:

                                        • [61%] our relationship is entire wholesome—” ► It should be entirely.
                                        • [99%] it on Arondight and Queen’s Teror too!” ► It should be Terror. Already reported.
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                                        • Terabyte
                                          Terabyte Premium Member last edited by

                                          Volume 8 - Part 3:

                                          • [4%] gone,” Efil told Ellie and Ruke a slight distance away. ► It should be Ruka.
                                          • [11%] past Deramis’s borders and into Parth’s territories. ► It should be territory (singular)?
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                                          • Gamen
                                            Gamen Premium Member last edited by

                                            V8p3
                                            [56%] Sitting on the throne before a massive status of an angel -> statue

                                            My talking sword has a point. And is also right.

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