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      lovelight Staff last edited by lovelight

      This is the dedicated topic for posting suggested corrections for The Master of Ragnarok & Blesser of Einherjar.

      Currently in prepublication: Volume 21!

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      • Terabyte
        Terabyte Premium Member last edited by

        Volume 14 - Part 1:

        • [7%] she had been careful never to go beyond what was ► Maybe to never?
        • [51%] I’m now trustworthy because I’m now more insolent.” ► Remove second/duplicate now.
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        • Terabyte
          Terabyte Premium Member last edited by

          Volume 14 - Part 2:

          • [92%] if she was okay, but Mitsuki just laughed softly, ► Paragraph ends with a comma, merge the following dialogue?
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          • Terabyte
            Terabyte Premium Member last edited by

            Volume 14 - Part 3:

            • [76%] that night without any warning.The furniture in the ► Missing space.
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            • Fyurie
              Fyurie Editors last edited by

              With the exception of the first Part 1 note, I've now addressed all of this correction feedback.

              Thanks as ever, Terabyte!

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              • Terabyte
                Terabyte Premium Member last edited by

                Only nitpicks this time around 😜

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                Volume 14 - Part 5:

                • [20%] I guess that’s possible, yeah.... I suppose ► It should be 3 periods.
                • [34%] “....” ► It should be 3 periods.
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                • Fyurie
                  Fyurie Editors @Terabyte last edited by

                  @Terabyte said in The Master of Ragnarok & Blesser of Einherjar - Corrections Topic:

                  Only nitpicks this time around 😜

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                  Volume 14 - Part 5:

                  • [20%] I guess that’s possible, yeah.... I suppose ► It should be 3 periods.
                  • [34%] “....” ► It should be 3 periods.

                  I could have sworn I deleted the original period before adding the triple in these...

                  Curse you, Docs UI.

                  Fixed, and thanks.

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                  • Terabyte
                    Terabyte Premium Member last edited by

                    Volume 14 - Part 6:

                    • [31%] Kristina’s rune, Veðrfölnir, the Silencer of the Winds, ► It should be Silencer of Winds (remove the). Unless the name's been changed?
                    • [61%] “I know, right?. I look forward to getting to know you ► Remove period.
                    • [66%] “Right, right! her song is amazing!” ► It should be Her (Capitalized).
                    • [75%] “Sheesh, just as we things were getting cheerful and fun, ► Remove we.
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                    • Fyurie
                      Fyurie Editors @Terabyte last edited by

                      @Terabyte said in The Master of Ragnarok & Blesser of Einherjar - Corrections Topic:

                      Volume 14 - Part 6:

                      • [31%] Kristina’s rune, Veðrfölnir, the Silencer of the Winds, ► It should be Silencer of Winds (remove the). Unless the name's been changed?
                      • [61%] “I know, right?. I look forward to getting to know you ► Remove period.
                      • [66%] “Right, right! her song is amazing!” ► It should be Her (Capitalized).
                      • [75%] “Sheesh, just as we things were getting cheerful and fun, ► Remove we.

                      Fixed, thanks!

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                      • Terabyte
                        Terabyte Premium Member last edited by

                        Volume 14 - Part 6:

                        • [Generic] There are 5 instances of the name Rífa being written as Rifa (missing accent on the i).

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                        Volume 14 - Part 7:

                        • [12%] forcing this wedding upon her. Rifa, especially, ► It should be Rífa (accent on the i).
                        • [60%] is the best outcome I could have hoped for,” ► It should be a period.
                        • [78%] settled in for Yuuto, he said in a quavering voice, ► Paragraph ends with a comma, merge the following dialogue?
                        • [85%] has married the þjóðann Sigridrifa and has ► It should be Sigrdrífa.
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                        • Fyurie
                          Fyurie Editors @Terabyte last edited by

                          @Terabyte said in The Master of Ragnarok & Blesser of Einherjar - Corrections Topic:

                          Volume 14 - Part 6:

                          • [Generic] There are 5 instances of the name Rífa being written as Rifa (missing accent on the i).

                          ===

                          Volume 14 - Part 7:

                          • [12%] forcing this wedding upon her. Rifa, especially, ► It should be Rífa (accent on the i).
                          • [60%] is the best outcome I could have hoped for,” ► It should be a period.
                          • [78%] settled in for Yuuto, he said in a quavering voice, ► Paragraph ends with a comma, merge the following dialogue?
                          • [85%] has married the þjóðann Sigridrifa and has ► It should be Sigrdrífa.

                          Should all be addressed for the upcoming ebook version. Thanks!

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                          • Terabyte
                            Terabyte Premium Member last edited by

                            Volume 15 - Part 1:

                            • [18%] ► Both dialogues' closing double quotes are wrongly single ones.
                            “So Brother Ská, what about you?’
                            “What about me, exactly?’
                            
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                            • Fyurie
                              Fyurie Editors @Terabyte last edited by

                              @Terabyte said in The Master of Ragnarok & Blesser of Einherjar - Corrections Topic:

                              Volume 15 - Part 1:

                              • [18%] ► Both dialogues' closing double quotes are wrongly single ones.
                              “So Brother Ská, what about you?’
                              “What about me, exactly?’
                              

                              Fixed, thanks!

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                              • Terabyte
                                Terabyte Premium Member last edited by

                                Volume 15 - Part 2:

                                • [53%] three Gleipnirs—two from Lady Rífa and one from me— ► Shouldn't it be one from Lady Rífa, one from Lady Mitsuki, and one from me? At this point Yuuto and Felicia don't know Mitsuki is Rifá's reincarnation.
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                                • Fyurie
                                  Fyurie Editors @Terabyte last edited by Fyurie

                                  @Terabyte said in The Master of Ragnarok & Blesser of Einherjar - Corrections Topic:

                                  Volume 15 - Part 2:

                                  • [53%] three Gleipnirs—two from Lady Rífa and one from me— ► Shouldn't it be one from Lady Rífa, one from Lady Mitsuki, and one from me? At this point Yuuto and Felicia don't know Mitsuki is Rifá's reincarnation.

                                  As per the source material, what's there is correct.

                                  EDIT: I decided to go back to check continuity for full confirmation and that supports the current line.

                                  spoiler
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                                  • Terabyte
                                    Terabyte Premium Member @Fyurie last edited by

                                    @Fyurie Oh, I completely forgot about that detail. Thanks for checking ☺️

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                                    • Terabyte
                                      Terabyte Premium Member last edited by

                                      Volume 15 - Part 4:

                                      • [3%] as a high-pitched squeak—highly unusual for her ► Missing period.
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                                      • Fyurie
                                        Fyurie Editors @Terabyte last edited by

                                        @Terabyte said in The Master of Ragnarok & Blesser of Einherjar - Corrections Topic:

                                        Volume 15 - Part 4:

                                        • [3%] as a high-pitched squeak—highly unusual for her ► Missing period.

                                        I'm a bit late to the party, but it should be fixed now.

                                        Thanks!

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                                        • Terabyte
                                          Terabyte Premium Member last edited by

                                          Volume 15 - Part 5:

                                          • [70%] but deeply satisfied looking Mitsuki smiling at him. ► It should be satisfied-looking (hyphen)?
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                                          • Fyurie
                                            Fyurie Editors @Terabyte last edited by

                                            @Terabyte said in The Master of Ragnarok & Blesser of Einherjar - Corrections Topic:

                                            Volume 15 - Part 5:

                                            • [70%] but deeply satisfied looking Mitsuki smiling at him. ► It should be satisfied-looking (hyphen)?

                                            Fixed, thanks!

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