The Master of Ragnarok & Blesser of Einherjar - Corrections Topic

lovelight

This is the dedicated topic for posting suggested corrections for The Master of Ragnarok & Blesser of Einherjar.

Currently in prepublication: Volume 14!

Terabyte

Volume 14 - Part 1:

[7%] she had been careful never to go beyond what was ► Maybe to never?
[51%] I’m now trustworthy because I’m now more insolent.” ► Remove second/duplicate now.

Terabyte

Volume 14 - Part 2:

[92%] if she was okay, but Mitsuki just laughed softly, ► Paragraph ends with a comma, merge the following dialogue?

Terabyte

Volume 14 - Part 3:

[76%] that night without any warning.The furniture in the ► Missing space.

Fyurie

With the exception of the first Part 1 note, I've now addressed all of this correction feedback.

Thanks as ever, Terabyte!

Terabyte

Only nitpicks this time around 😜

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Volume 14 - Part 5:

[20%] I guess that’s possible, yeah.... I suppose ► It should be 3 periods.
[34%] “....” ► It should be 3 periods.

Fyurie

@Terabyte said in The Master of Ragnarok & Blesser of Einherjar - Corrections Topic:

Only nitpicks this time around 😜

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Volume 14 - Part 5:

[20%] I guess that’s possible, yeah.... I suppose ► It should be 3 periods.

[34%] “....” ► It should be 3 periods.

I could have sworn I deleted the original period before adding the triple in these...

Curse you, Docs UI.

Fixed, and thanks.