The Master of Ragnarok & Blesser of Einherjar - Corrections Topic
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This is the dedicated topic for posting suggested corrections for The Master of Ragnarok & Blesser of Einherjar.
Currently in prepublication: Volume 21!
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Volume 14 - Part 1:
- [7%] she had been careful
never to
go beyond what was ► Maybe to never? - [51%] I’m now trustworthy because I’m
now
more insolent.” ► Remove second/duplicatenow
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- [7%] she had been careful
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Volume 14 - Part 2:
- [92%] if she was okay, but Mitsuki just
laughed softly,
► Paragraph ends with acomma
, merge the following dialogue?
- [92%] if she was okay, but Mitsuki just
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Volume 14 - Part 3:
- [76%] that night without any
warning.The
furniture in the ► Missing space.
- [76%] that night without any
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With the exception of the first Part 1 note, I've now addressed all of this correction feedback.
Thanks as ever, Terabyte!
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Only nitpicks this time around 😜
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Volume 14 - Part 5:
- [20%] I guess that’s possible,
yeah....
I suppose ► It should be 3 periods. - [34%]
“....”
► It should be 3 periods.
- [20%] I guess that’s possible,
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@Terabyte said in The Master of Ragnarok & Blesser of Einherjar - Corrections Topic:
Only nitpicks this time around 😜
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Volume 14 - Part 5:
- [20%] I guess that’s possible,
yeah....
I suppose ► It should be 3 periods. - [34%]
“....”
► It should be 3 periods.
I could have sworn I deleted the original period before adding the triple in these...
Curse you, Docs UI.
Fixed, and thanks.
- [20%] I guess that’s possible,
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Volume 14 - Part 6:
- [31%] Kristina’s rune, Veðrfölnir, the
Silencer of the Winds
, ► It should be Silencer of Winds (removethe
). Unless the name's been changed? - [61%] “I know,
right?.
I look forward to getting to know you ► Removeperiod
. - [66%] “Right, right!
her
song is amazing!” ► It should be Her (Capitalized). - [75%] “Sheesh, just as
we
things were getting cheerful and fun, ► Removewe
.
- [31%] Kristina’s rune, Veðrfölnir, the
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@Terabyte said in The Master of Ragnarok & Blesser of Einherjar - Corrections Topic:
Volume 14 - Part 6:
- [31%] Kristina’s rune, Veðrfölnir, the
Silencer of the Winds
, ► It should be Silencer of Winds (removethe
). Unless the name's been changed? - [61%] “I know,
right?.
I look forward to getting to know you ► Removeperiod
. - [66%] “Right, right!
her
song is amazing!” ► It should be Her (Capitalized). - [75%] “Sheesh, just as
we
things were getting cheerful and fun, ► Removewe
.
Fixed, thanks!
- [31%] Kristina’s rune, Veðrfölnir, the
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Volume 14 - Part 6:
- [Generic] There are
5 instances
of the name Rífa being written asRifa
(missing accent on thei
).
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Volume 14 - Part 7:
- [12%] forcing this wedding upon her.
Rifa
, especially, ► It should be Rífa (accent on thei
). - [60%] is the best outcome I could have hoped
for,
” ► It should be a period. - [78%] settled in for Yuuto, he said in a
quavering voice,
► Paragraph ends with acomma
, merge the following dialogue? - [85%] has married the þjóðann
Sigridrifa
and has ► It should be Sigrdrífa.
- [Generic] There are
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@Terabyte said in The Master of Ragnarok & Blesser of Einherjar - Corrections Topic:
Volume 14 - Part 6:
- [Generic] There are
5 instances
of the name Rífa being written asRifa
(missing accent on thei
).
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Volume 14 - Part 7:
- [12%] forcing this wedding upon her.
Rifa
, especially, ► It should be Rífa (accent on thei
). - [60%] is the best outcome I could have hoped
for,
” ► It should be a period. - [78%] settled in for Yuuto, he said in a
quavering voice,
► Paragraph ends with acomma
, merge the following dialogue? - [85%] has married the þjóðann
Sigridrifa
and has ► It should be Sigrdrífa.
Should all be addressed for the upcoming ebook version. Thanks!
- [Generic] There are
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Volume 15 - Part 1:
- [18%] ► Both dialogues' closing double quotes are wrongly
single
ones.
“So Brother Ská, what about you?’ “What about me, exactly?’
- [18%] ► Both dialogues' closing double quotes are wrongly
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@Terabyte said in The Master of Ragnarok & Blesser of Einherjar - Corrections Topic:
Volume 15 - Part 1:
- [18%] ► Both dialogues' closing double quotes are wrongly
single
ones.
“So Brother Ská, what about you?’ “What about me, exactly?’
Fixed, thanks!
- [18%] ► Both dialogues' closing double quotes are wrongly
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Volume 15 - Part 2:
- [53%] three Gleipnirs—
two from Lady Rífa and one from me
— ► Shouldn't it be one from Lady Rífa, one from Lady Mitsuki, and one from me? At this point Yuuto and Felicia don't know Mitsuki is Rifá's reincarnation.
- [53%] three Gleipnirs—
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@Terabyte said in The Master of Ragnarok & Blesser of Einherjar - Corrections Topic:
Volume 15 - Part 2:
- [53%] three Gleipnirs—
two from Lady Rífa and one from me
— ► Shouldn't it be one from Lady Rífa, one from Lady Mitsuki, and one from me? At this point Yuuto and Felicia don't know Mitsuki is Rifá's reincarnation.
As per the source material, what's there is correct.
EDIT: I decided to go back to check continuity for full confirmation and that supports the current line.
- [53%] three Gleipnirs—
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@Fyurie Oh, I completely forgot about that detail. Thanks for checking ☺️
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Volume 15 - Part 4:
- [3%] as a high-pitched squeak—highly unusual for
her
► Missing period.
- [3%] as a high-pitched squeak—highly unusual for
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@Terabyte said in The Master of Ragnarok & Blesser of Einherjar - Corrections Topic:
Volume 15 - Part 4:
- [3%] as a high-pitched squeak—highly unusual for
her
► Missing period.
I'm a bit late to the party, but it should be fixed now.
Thanks!
- [3%] as a high-pitched squeak—highly unusual for
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Volume 15 - Part 5:
- [70%] but deeply
satisfied looking
Mitsuki smiling at him. ► It should be satisfied-looking (hyphen)?
- [70%] but deeply
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@Terabyte said in The Master of Ragnarok & Blesser of Einherjar - Corrections Topic:
Volume 15 - Part 5:
- [70%] but deeply
satisfied looking
Mitsuki smiling at him. ► It should be satisfied-looking (hyphen)?
Fixed, thanks!
- [70%] but deeply