Full Metal Panic! - Corrections Topic
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Volume 11 - Part 6:
- [27%] “This is nuts...
haha....
” ► It should be 3 periods. - [55%] so much that she
didn’t
even miss sleep. ► Should this be did instead? Going by the context she wasn't sleeping. - [83%] Besides, she thought
next.
are the US Navy ► It should be a comma. - [93%] Tessa felt the same way,
know
that this might ► It should be knowing.
- [27%] “This is nuts...
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Volume 11 - Part 7:
- [42%]
He’d like to have asked
about the status ► Maybe He would have liked to ask? - [48%]
Something
was lying beyond the crumpled ► It should be Someone? - [59%] Sousuke realized. I
won’tbe
able to stop the ► It should be won’t be (space). - [60%] Sousuke stuck him with
a
IV and gave him ► It should be an? - [74%] much room, as
it
just about the size of a ► It should be it was.
- [42%]
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Volume 11 - Part 8:
- [Generic] At first we have 12 missiles (4 missiles * 3 Behemoths); then we have
six missiles
(we lost half somewhere?) once the scene returns to Sousuke; then Sousuke shoots down4 missiles
and destroys the remaining5
with the lambda driver (for a total of9
). The total count keeps changing:12 => 6 => 9
. - [42%] She couldn’t make out the enemy
units.
either. ► It should be a comma. - [50%] 《Right,
》agreed
Al. ► Missing space after》
. - [55%] might have sent him
spiralling
into the ocean. ► It should be spiraling (US spelling). - [79%] 《All machines shot down,
》Al
announced. ► Missing space after》
.
- [Generic] At first we have 12 missiles (4 missiles * 3 Behemoths); then we have
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Volume 12 - Part 1:
- [12%] “The
‘infinite sky’,
eh?” Leonard thought a moment, ► Move the comma inside the single quotes. - [15%] his final words.
You won’t try to see him?
she thought. ► Should this be You won’t go to see him? instead since she's citing Leonard? - [17%] data suit she would use to connect directly to the
TAROS
. ► Chidori's POV. It should be TARTAROS? - [33%] I’m about to
turn
into a mountain of scrap. Plead with me ► It should be a turn it? - [41%] again with the now-bent gun, Al blared another
warning,
► It should be a colon or a period. Or just remove the line break.
- [12%] “The
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Volume 12 - Part 2:
- [11%] This wasn’t some kind of
pre-destined
battle. ► It should be predestined (nohyphen
).
- [11%] This wasn’t some kind of
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Volume 12 - Part 3:
- [1%] the elevator shaft right now?
”
he thought ► Not a dialogue but a thought. Remove the extraclosing double quote
. - [92%] The person I am
now\
, who he—who they ► Remove extra\
.
- [1%] the elevator shaft right now?
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Volume 12 - Part 4:
- [94%] And yet he hadn’t been able
stop
it; ► It should be to stop.
- [94%] And yet he hadn’t been able
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Volume 12 - Part 5:
- [75%] what it did to me at that school.
》Al
apparently ► Missing space after》
.
- [75%] what it did to me at that school.
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Volume 12 - Part 6:
- [31%] “Don’t say that,” Clouseau muttered. “I’ll start
crying,
” ► It should be a period.
- [31%] “Don’t say that,” Clouseau muttered. “I’ll start