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      lovelight Staff last edited by yuzumori

      This is the dedicated topic for posting suggested corrections for Mapping: The Trash-Tier Skill That Got Me Into a Top-Tier Party.

      Currently in prepublication: Volume 8!

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      • V
        Vorthod Premium Member last edited by

        82%: At first he'd thought we were just someone on floor 17 -> somewhere

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        • Terabyte
          Terabyte Premium Member last edited by

          Volume 3 - Part 1:

          • [51%] “Hahh... You really are dungeon-obsessed weirdo.” ► It should be a dungeon-obsessed.
          • [69%] There were productions lines running throughout the ► It should be production (singular).
          • [78%] At first he’d thought we were just someone on floor 17, ► It should be somewhere. Already reported.
          • [98%] Since you kept them activate for two whole months ► It should be active.
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          • Hephaestus13
            Hephaestus13 Premium Member last edited by

            Volume 3 - Part 1:

            • [63%] I asked if she'd every worked with a crystal or if she could, ► Correct to ever
              * [72%] There were productions lines running throughout the place, ► Correct to production
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            • Terabyte
              Terabyte Premium Member last edited by

              Volume 3 - Part 3:

              • [85%] “So you misled and innocent young lady on purpose!” ► It should be an.
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                thefirstpunicwar Premium Member last edited by thefirstpunicwar

                V3P4

                12% - "Wow, are you intent to destroy the Arrivers with your party-wrecking ways, too?" -> I just feel that this doesn't work well. I think the one following will flow better, but I don't know how far you want to get from the original Japanese.
                are you intending to destroy
                are you intent on destroying
                do you intend to destroy

                56% - No matter hard anyone trains -> should be matter how hard; add in the how

                88% - I too had once almost betrayed the party over Roslia. I couldn't hound Force but so much without being hypocrite.
                -> Just like my first suggestion this feels off.
                But I couldn't hound Force so much without being a hypocrite.
                I couldn't hound Force so much without being a hypocrite.
                I couldn't hound Force, but so much, without being a hypocrite."

                I think one the the above would work better without feeling clunky. Also, at the end of the sentence being hypocrite needs to be changed to being a hypocrite thus adding in the a which is contained in each of the three suggestions.

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                • Terabyte
                  Terabyte Premium Member last edited by

                  Volume 3 - Part 5:

                  • [58%] With a little room to breath, I took a moment ► It should be breathe.
                  • [63%] His judgement was always rapid and precise. ► It should be judgment (US spelling).
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                  • Terabyte
                    Terabyte Premium Member last edited by

                    • [74%] I said it was the clencher. That wasn’t ► It should be clincher.
                    • [87%] “Why not? We can but it behind us and ► It should be put.
                    • [88%] the more their victims begrudge them.” ► Remove the closing double quote. Hugel's dialogue keeps going in the next paragraph.
                    • [92%] my own resolution to the walk the path ► Remove first/duplicate the.
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                    • Terabyte
                      Terabyte Premium Member last edited by

                      Volume 3 - Part 8:

                      • [58%] Lastly, the acknowledgements. Shizuki, thank you ► It should be acknowledgments (US spelling).
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                      • Hephaestus13
                        Hephaestus13 Premium Member last edited by

                        ===

                        Volume 3 - Part 4:

                        • [27%] "Where you usually spare with Jin should be fine, right?" ► Correct to spar

                        ===

                        Volume 3 - Part 8:

                        • [45%] "... I may have failed this job, but I suppose that doesn't hurt on rare occasion..." ► Consider adding a
                          1. '"... I may have failed this job, but I suppose that doesn't hurt on a rare occasion..."'

                        ===

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                        • Terabyte
                          Terabyte Premium Member last edited by

                          Volume 4 - Part 1:

                          • [37%] the gargoyle poked at me two or thee more ► It should be three.
                          • [38%] wasn’t working like normal. It less effective ► It should be It was.
                          • [53%] “Well... ► The dialogue's closing double quote is missing.
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                          • Terabyte
                            Terabyte Premium Member last edited by

                            Volume 4 - Part 2:

                            • [20%] deferred to our judgement and said nothing. ► It should be judgment (US spelling).
                            • [71%] “Same as Force. After hearing what I said, ► It should be he (what Force said)?
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                            • Gamen
                              Gamen Premium Member last edited by

                              [82%] If had healed Jin or Force -> If I had healed Jin or Force

                              My talking sword has a point. And is also right.

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                              • Terabyte
                                Terabyte Premium Member last edited by

                                Volume 4 - Part 3:

                                • [19%] You’ve gotta let ‘em go at a certain age. ► It should be ’em (different ’ ).
                                • [54%] with the Arrivers, but I spend most of it on ► It should be spent.
                                • [65%] the day, why not out for another round?” ► It should be go out.
                                • [67%] “Make sure you become a pathetic adult ► It should be don’t become?
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                                  basuga Premium Member @Terabyte last edited by basuga

                                  Volume 3 - Part 3:
                                  [21%] "... top-tier parties like the Arrives" ► should be "Arrivers", I think. Missing letter R.

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                                    basuga Premium Member last edited by

                                    Volume 4 - Part 3
                                    [43%] A Promised Exchanged - strange title (at least for me with English not native)

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                                    • Terabyte
                                      Terabyte Premium Member last edited by

                                      Volume 4 - Part 4:

                                      • [77%] That’d be all right, wouldn’t it, Master Hugel? ► The dialogue's closing double quote is missing.
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                                      • Terabyte
                                        Terabyte Premium Member last edited by

                                        Volume 4 - Part 5:

                                        • [5%] She’d learn to master fighting with her own ► It should be learned.
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                                        • Terabyte
                                          Terabyte Premium Member last edited by

                                          Volume 4 - Part 6:

                                          • [94%] As poof the request was completed, we scavenged ► It should be proof.
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                                          • V
                                            Vorthod Premium Member last edited by

                                            I'm a bit late catching up to the series, so here's a delayed post

                                            V4P2
                                            73%: If had healed Jin or Force -> If I had
                                            73%: I spread my arms wide and went to wrapp them around her shoulders -> wrap

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