Mapping: The Trash-Tier Skill That Got Me Into a Top-Tier Party - Corrections Topic

lovelight

This is the dedicated topic for posting suggested corrections for Mapping: The Trash-Tier Skill That Got Me Into a Top-Tier Party.

Currently in prepublication: Volume 4!

Vorthod

82%: At first he'd thought we were just ~~someone~~ on floor 17 -> somewhere

Terabyte

Volume 3 - Part 1:

[51%] “Hahh... You really are dungeon-obsessed weirdo.” ► It should be a dungeon-obsessed.
[69%] There were productions lines running throughout the ► It should be production (singular).
~~[78%] At first he’d thought we were just someone on floor 17, ► It should be somewhere.~~ Already reported.
[98%] Since you kept them activate for two whole months ► It should be active.

Hephaestus13

Volume 3 - Part 1:

[63%] I asked if she'd every worked with a crystal or if she could, ► Correct to ever
~~* [72%] There were productions lines running throughout the place, ► Correct to production~~

Terabyte

Volume 3 - Part 3:

[85%] “So you misled and innocent young lady on purpose!” ► It should be an.

thefirstpunicwar

V3P4

12% - "Wow, are you intent to destroy the Arrivers with your party-wrecking ways, too?" -> I just feel that this doesn't work well. I think the one following will flow better, but I don't know how far you want to get from the original Japanese.
are you intending to destroy
are you intent on destroying
do you intend to destroy

56% - No matter hard anyone trains -> should be matter how hard; add in the how

88% - I too had once almost betrayed the party over Roslia. I couldn't hound Force but so much without being hypocrite.
-> Just like my first suggestion this feels off.
But I couldn't hound Force so much without being a hypocrite.
I couldn't hound Force so much without being a hypocrite.
I couldn't hound Force, but so much, without being a hypocrite."

I think one the the above would work better without feeling clunky. Also, at the end of the sentence being hypocrite needs to be changed to being a hypocrite thus adding in the a which is contained in each of the three suggestions.

Terabyte

Volume 3 - Part 5:

[58%] With a little room to breath, I took a moment ► It should be breathe.
[63%] His judgement was always rapid and precise. ► It should be judgment (US spelling).

Terabyte

[74%] I said it was the clencher. That wasn’t ► It should be clincher.
[87%] “Why not? We can but it behind us and ► It should be put.
[88%] the more their victims begrudge them.” ► Remove the closing double quote. Hugel's dialogue keeps going in the next paragraph.
[92%] my own resolution to the walk the path ► Remove first/duplicate the.

Terabyte

Volume 3 - Part 8:

[58%] Lastly, the acknowledgements. Shizuki, thank you ► It should be acknowledgments (US spelling).

Hephaestus13

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Volume 3 - Part 4:

[27%] "Where you usually spare with Jin should be fine, right?" ► Correct to spar

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Volume 3 - Part 8:

[45%] "... I may have failed this job, but I suppose that doesn't hurt on rare occasion..." ► Consider adding a
1. '"... I may have failed this job, but I suppose that doesn't hurt on a rare occasion..."'

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Terabyte

Volume 4 - Part 1:

[37%] the gargoyle poked at me two or thee more ► It should be three.
[38%] wasn’t working like normal. It less effective ► It should be It was.
[53%] “Well... ► The dialogue's closing double quote is missing.

Terabyte

Volume 4 - Part 2:

[20%] deferred to our judgement and said nothing. ► It should be judgment (US spelling).
[71%] “Same as Force. After hearing what I said, ► It should be he (what Force said)?

Gamen

[82%] If had healed Jin or Force -> If I had healed Jin or Force