My Instant Death Ability - Corrections Topic
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This is the dedicated topic for posting suggested corrections for My Instant Death Ability is So Overpowered, No One in This Other World Stands a Chance Against Me!, AKA "Instant Death Cheat".
Currently in prepublication: Volume 11!
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Volume 3 - Part 1:
- [23%] His name was
Yuuichiro
Kiryuu, one of the four who ► In volume 1 it was Yuuichirou (u at the end).
- [23%] His name was
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V3P2, 15%: "The vice-captain's weapon was a double-bladed longsword, about a meter long". Shouldn't this be a double-edged longsword? Double-bladed would suggest it's something like Darth Maul's weapon, with a blade on each end of the hilt.
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Volume 3 - Part 2:
- [11%] “David! What are you doing
?!”.
► Remove extraperiod
. - [62%] we are supposed to make
accomodations
for you, ► It should be accommodations. - [94%] we’re able to do something we can’t
really do.
► The dialogue's closing double quote is missing.
- [11%] “David! What are you doing
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Volume 3 - Part 3:
- [67%] figure out what the hell this whiny human wanted.
>
► Remove extra>
at the end. - [74%] and began attacking their
neighbouring
countries. ► It should be neighboring (US spelling).
- [67%] figure out what the hell this whiny human wanted.
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Volume 3 - Part 4:
- [68%] easily large enough to
accomodate
all of them. Strictly ► It should be accommodate. - [94%] “Of course that’s what would bother you,
”said
Jiyuna. ► Missing space.
- [68%] easily large enough to
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Volume 3 - Part 5:
- [Generic] Part 5 has insert9.jpg and the last illustration in part 4 was insert7.jpg. Seems
insert8.jpg
is missing somewhere? - [63%] grabbing Carol by the collar. “
”
Listen! That is the ► Remove extraclosing double quote
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- [Generic] Part 5 has insert9.jpg and the last illustration in part 4 was insert7.jpg. Seems
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Volume 3 - Part 6:
- [25%] hasn’t proceeded too far past the second
floor.
► The dialogue's closing double quote is missing. - [28%] other’s powers, so it’s only useful up to a
point.
► The dialogue's closing double quote is missing.
- [25%] hasn’t proceeded too far past the second
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@Terabyte said in My Instant Death Ability - Corrections Topic:
[Generic] Part 5 has insert9.jpg and the last illustration in part 4 was insert7.jpg. Seems insert8.jpg is missing somewhere?
Well that's certainly odd. I just double checked with the original ebook and all the pictures seem to be in the right places. Not sure what's going on with the naming scheme, but as far as I can tell the pictures are all correct.
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Part 7, 52%:
"For those who knew about his power, any information they could acquire about him was worth its weight in gold."
Not sure how the original line goes, but information weighs nearly nothing so this particular analogy probably does not work that well in English. :-) -
Volume 3 - Part 7:
- [9%] “That’s awfully
judgemental
of you, Battle Unit.” ► It should be judgmental (US spelling). - [72%] “I’m home. I assume everything’s about the same? ► The dialogue's closing double quote is missing.
- [82%] told not to interact with
them ,
but it was probably ► Removespace
. - [90%] a launching place for robots...
”Asaka
looked up, ► Missing space.
- [9%] “That’s awfully
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Volume 3 - Part 8:
- [43%] use your
judgement
to act as the situation ► It should be judgment (US spelling). - [54%] Seeing that,
Takoaka
promptly shot the ► It should be Takaoka. - [90%] through Twitter, that’s the character
limit)
► Missing period.
- [43%] use your
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Volume 4 - Part 1:
- [84%] The
counter attack
had come. It seemed this method ► It should be counterattack (no space, or maybe hyphen). - [91%] It seemed safe to say that his
counter attack
against ► It should be counterattack (no space, or maybe hyphen).
- [84%] The
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Volume 4 - Part 2:
- [56%] as she studied the stranger before
them,
► It should be a period. - [63%] would see one of them here, of all
places.
► The dialogue's closing double quote is missing. - [67%]
Tomcohika
remembered that Yogiri hadn’t ► It should be Tomochika.
- [56%] as she studied the stranger before
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Just a quick note to echo my post in the discussion thread for Vol4:
The spelling for the names of two characters has been changed starting with this part:
Teodisia >> Theodisia
Rislie >> RisleyThis is intentional, and not a mistake.
If you have any questions about this change, feel free to drop them in the discussion thread for Volume 4! (https://forums.j-novel.club/topic/4074/instant-death-cheat-vol-4-discussion)
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Volume 4 - Part 3:
- [37%] goddess Vahanato’s plan to
resurrect
Albagarma, ► It should be release (he was sealed, not dead)? - [45%] his essence or whatever. “Ah...
umm..
actually...” He ► It should be 3 periods. - [60%] him grew thicker,
signalling
a stronger forecast of ► It should be signaling (US spelling). - [63%] he had recently become close
to .
However, their ► Remove extraspace
.
- [37%] goddess Vahanato’s plan to
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Volume 4 - Part 4:
- [61%] choosing one
labelled
“Sage Candidate Selection ► It should be labeled (US spelling).
- [61%] choosing one
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Volume 4 - Part 5:
- [32%] began to glow. As if
unravelling
, Masahiro ► It should be unraveling (US spelling). - [96%] across the suit,
unravelling
it in moments ► It should be unraveling (US spelling).
- [32%] began to glow. As if
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Volume 4 - Part 6:
- [27%] done,” Tomochika
sighed.“
Let’s get a move on.” ► Missing space. - [37%] They moved into a smaller
room,
From there, into ► It should be a period. - [58%] “
”
Wait a second! You’re just planning to send me ► Remove extraclosing double quote
. - [90%] saying it’s weird that there are more than one
!”.
► Remove extraperiod
. - [95%]
‘
Urgh...I’m glad I’m not being thrown out there by ► The dialogue's starting double quote is wrongly asingle
one.
- [27%] done,” Tomochika
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Volume 4 - Part 6:
[63%] made their way out.
he ,
Tomochika ► Non capitalized and extra space before the comma