The World's Least Interesting Master Swordsman - Corrections Topic

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This is the dedicated topic for posting suggested corrections for The World's Least Interesting Master Swordsman.

Currently in prepublication: Volume 6!

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Volume 5 - Part 1:

[47%] values don’t seem to phase Tahlan in the slightest. ► It should be faze.
[74%] lowers his head in acknowledgement, as well. It’s a ► It should be acknowledgment (US spelling).
[85%] working without practically no rest until now. ► It should be with practically no rest or practically without rest.

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Volume 5 - Part 2:

[1%] received the same news,it didn’t have as much ► Missing space.
[3%] a little guilty about the fact thatI’m not going to ► It should be that I’m (space).
[76%] “My father is the lord and my mother is wife... ► It should be his wife.

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Volume 5 - Part 3:

[19%] to expect of a five year old to read the mood. ► It should be five-year-old (hyphens).
[84%] she should be doing now acting as a mother to ► It should be is acting?

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Volume 5 - Part 4:

[27%] her features, she’s cancelled out the sheer fright ► It should be canceled (US spelling).
[35%] to my future brother-in-law. Can I borrow him?.” ► Remove period.
[41%] no one would let a ten year old govern a territory. ► It should be ten-year-old (hyphens).
[55%] the center of attention...honestly,she really needs ► Missing space.

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Volume 5 - Part 5:

[43%] the purpose of becoming her bodyguards ► Missing period.
[50%] “It’s not like they can ever hope gain the ► It should be to gain.

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Volume 5 - Part 6:

[0%] The groups travelled in a caravan consisting ► It should be traveled (US spelling).
[1%] While they were hardly an field army in sheer ► It should be a.
[28%] possible, Paulette had travelled to this city, ► It should be traveled (US spelling).

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Volume 5 - Part 7:

[19%] Suiboku’s head. I have travelled this far to ► It should be traveled (US spelling).
[60%] Shouzo Okabe, the Scarred Fool, the ultimate ► It should be Kyoube.
[74%] matter how enhanced his physical abilities were ► Missing period.
[76%] Fukei responded by cancelling the technique ► It should be canceling (US spelling).

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Volume 5 - Part 8:

[13%] wisdom in this world. As such,because they weren’t ► Missing space.
[59%] Shouzo Okabe, the Scarred Fool, the Ultimate Mage. ► It should be Kyoube.
[75%] “...I-Impossible....” ► It should be 3 periods.

(I often see Shouzo's surname wrong. I wonder if there's some kind of reason for it? Just a curiosity though.)

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Volume 6 - Part 2:

[11%] no sign of Suiboku himself.Fukei thought that ► Missing space.
[16%] “Ki-Blade Technique, Hair Nail.” ► It should be Ki Blade (no hyphen).
[32%] the attacks Suiboku had levelled against Fukei ► It should be leveled (US spelling).
[54%] Leaden Body. The technique cancelled Fukei’s ► It should be canceled (US spelling).

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Volume 6 - Part 3:

[4%] noting the size of the forest , guessed at ► Remove extra space.
[48%] Even if each project was a small pebble, ► It should be projectile.
[56%] Absurd... Could such a thing...truly be..?! ► It should be 3 periods.
[61%] Flash Step that I’ve created.I also added ► Missing space.

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Volume 6 - Part 4:

[16%] landed upon himself and used ki collection to scatter it ► It should be Ki Collection (Capitalized).
[61%] “What’s wrong, Oh, Master! You ought to go reclaim Vajra!” ► Wrong punctuation.
[96%] trained by him were certainly evil, vermineven, who should ► It should be vermin even (space).

thefirstpunicwar

V6P4

96% - Yes, Suiboku's apprentices and those who were trained by him were certainly evil ► It should be apprentice as Sansui is Suboku's only apprentice. Also, the him later in the sentence is singular which refers back to apprentices, so apprentices should be singular as well. If apprentices is left alone then him should be changed to them so it is plural.

Iseguy

Swordsman 6.3

he wasn’t pleased at having been thoroughly outmatched in mortal skills,

Did you mean “martial”?

Even if each project was a small pebble,

“projectile” or “missile”

it’s a variation of Flash Step that I’ve created.I also added

Missing space

Iseguy

Swordsman 6.4

“Though their scent lingers, the blossoms have scattered...”

When quoting multiple paragraphs from the same speaker, only the last paragraph gets a closing quotation mark. (Multiple instances.)

It was a part of a shared past that he and Fukei shared,

“It was part of a past that he and Fukei shared,”

After the battle between the, Immortals the terrain no longer looked anything like what it had before.

“between the Immortals,” no comma.
“anything like it had before” or “anything like what it had been before.”

dreamt

As an irregular verb enthusiast, 😃.

were certainly evil, vermineven, who should have been destroyed.

“vermin even,” or “vermin, even,”

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Volume 6 - Part 5:

[5%] but it seemed thatSuiboku having stayed up late ► It should be that Suiboku (space).
[27%] with it,. so I decided it was all a waste.a I put ► A couple of issues:
1. Remove period.
2. Remove extra a after the period.
[52%] Arcana Kingdom’s most powerful swordsman., but ► Remove extra period.
[73%] Blois’s father, Senve Blois, bowed his head to me. ► It should be Senve Wynne.
[73%] but still, it’s best not to offend his lordship, either. ► It should be His Lordship (Capitalized).

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Volume 6 - Part 6:

[1%] living right underneath it,have to crane their heads so ► Missing space. (Or just remove the comma?)
[9%] had been completely correct; If I’d just knocked Chette ► It should be if (lowercase).
[13%] She looks pretty much the same way we feel, really. ► It should be feels.
[22%] The six of hurriedly entered the throne room. It goes ► It should be of us.
[38%] ► This paragraph feels really out of place since Suiboku doesn't mention anything like that until this point. Is there a missing part of text somewhere before it?

I didn’t actually expect the object of Chette’s fervent hopes to actually exist.

[49%] and feeling sated afterward;, at the same time, I’ve ► Duplicate punctuation.
[88%] differently, others look at me with new expressions ► Missing period.

thefirstpunicwar

V6P6

78% - The sudden growth makes it feel me feel odd ► These two words should be removed.

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Volume 6 - Part 7:

[Generic] The chapter titles use both - (normal dash) and — (longer dash) to separate the number from the actual title. Just a minor inconsistency.
[1%] ► Names usually follow the dialogues' order. It should be switched around to Blois and Lain? Just nitpicking though.

“...Wow. It’s like Sansui is an ordinary man.”
“Yeah... Papa’s normal.”
Lain and Blois are both really surprised just by the fact that I ate something.

[4%] it would be even more problematic , if they completely ► Remove extra space.
[12%] bonds and shared experiences between each other.. ► Duplicate period.
[16%] probably higher than anyone’sThe relationships between ► Missing period + space.
[21%] despite being the one probably most in need of restraint ► Missing period.
[21%] be my sister-in-law had, at this late hour, is now starting to ► Either had / started or is / now starting.
[32%] behave correctly. Sansui, you were the one who did that” ► Missing period.
[64%] this for me all the time, Unfortunately my master hadn’t ► It should be a period.
[74%] “mm...” ► It should be Mm (Capitalized).
[77%] students and Ran, Tahlan and Saiga are practicing, but...” ► No dialogue here. Remove the closing double quote.

Iseguy

6.8

Papa has lost weight, I guess.If she had

Spacing.

amused that I had set off this big of a row

“this much of a disturbance”.
This meaning (and pronunciation) of “row” doesn't exist in American English.

Kacho had worried that Fukei end up that way

“would end up that way”