The Magician Who Rose From Failure - Corrections Topic

Iseguy

Volume 1 Part 1

The window looked out on the Raytheft’s well-kempt garden, — 8%

“ Raythefts' ”
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The Raycrafts only held a viscountcy among the gentry, — 10%

“Raythefts”, although “Raycraft” is less of a tongue twister and you should totally go with that if the katakana supports it.
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Missing space:

He wasbullied through elementary school, — 25%

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Missing end quote:

“This is just one volume, by the way.… — 55%

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Missing space:

“You are nothing but a nuisance!”Joshua spat, enraged. — 95%

Iseguy

Volume 1 Part 2

It wasn’t just his face, either--his unusual silvery hair also gave off an feminine impression of femininity. — 0%

“an impression of femininity” or “a feminine impression.”

Also, consideer the emdash: “either—his”.
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most of the brick-and-stone buildings were three or four storeys high. — 16%

“stories”
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There was a bookstore, too, which sold everything from novels, technical books, to magic magazines, textbooks, and spellbooks. There was as much variation among the most popular magic magazines as fashion magazines, — 16%

“from novels and technical books, to”

“variety”?
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Magic-users were rare—e had hoped to catch his opponent — 37%

“rare—he”
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The three walls of this dead end belonged to three- and four-storey buildings. — 47%

“story”
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Flustered, Lecia began to gather it all lup. — 89%

“all up.”

Iseguy

Volume 1 Part 3

“He especially hates more talented magicians.” — 24%

more-talented

Iseguy

Volume 1 Parts 4–6 & 8

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Iseguy

Volume 1 Part 7

You couldn’t have done that without a decent amount of study and practise.” — 25%

“practice.”

Terabyte

Volume 1 - Part 9:

[11%] sneaking through, and we won’t be able to to fight.” ► Duplicate to.

Terabyte

Volume 1 - Part 10:

[76%] in the way of your good judgement.” Charlotte ► It should be judgment (US spelling).
[97%] before anything ‘goes missing’. Go get what ► Move the period inside the quotes.

Terabyte

Volume 1 - Part 11:

[14%] was affecting her judgement, from her words, ► It should be judgment (US spelling).
[35%] permit me to endureyour harebrained schemes.” ► It should be endure your (space).

LIbri Liberorum

Vol 1 part 11 60%

Lisa looked up at the moon.

Given what follows, should this be 'moons'? It looks like Chain and Wedge are the names of moons.

Will Holcomb

@LIbri-Liberorum I'm not sure how much detail I should go into, as it concerns unreleased material, but I can assure you that Chain and Wedge aren't moons. It's a peculiarly placed bit of worldbuilding that likely won't be followed up on until next volume at the earliest.

Terabyte

Volume 1 - Part 12:

[0%] chair which clashed with its bleak surroundings. . ► Duplicate period.
[1%] everything fell under the king’s judgement. Despite ► It should be judgment (US spelling).
[8%] an egregious error of judgement; however, if I might ► It should be judgment (US spelling).
[50%] the “Ten Fables” inThe Birth of Heaven and Earth. ► It should be in The (space).
[51%] Crosellode; Godwald “Vajra” Sylvester;; and the ► Duplicate semicolon.
[54%] Craib’s speciality was molten iron. One of his ► It should be specialty (US spelling).
[75%] to draw breath and completely defenceless. I had ► It should be defenseless (US spelling).