Cooking with Wild Game - Corrections Topic
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This is the dedicated topic for posting suggested corrections for Cooking with Wild Game.
Currently in prepublication: Volume 12!
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Volume 11 - Part 1:
- [53%] A
five day
period where neither Cyclaeus nor Melfried ► It should be five-day (hyphen).
- [53%] A
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Volume 11, Part 2
27%: ". . . and brought
her
with knives against my will . . ." -> should be here
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Volume 11 - Part 2:
- [20%] like honey, and
spiralled
all the way down to her hips. ► It should be spiraled (US spelling). [28%] threatened with knives and broughtAlready reported.her
against my will, ► It should be here.- [42%] So
mastermind
behind those ridiculous orders is on the ► It should be the mastermind.
- [20%] like honey, and
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Volume 11 - Part 3:
- [56%] exactly friendly with each
other..
So do westerners ► Duplicateperiod
.
- [56%] exactly friendly with each
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Wild Game 11:3
it was still possible make all this.
possible to make
so around how much time do I have let?
left
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Volume 11 - Part 4:
- [3%] call out to me as I
smouldered
with rage was ► It should be smoldered (US spelling).
- [3%] call out to me as I
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Volume 11 - Part 5:
- [1%] to take a
two day
break starting tomorrow, ► It should be two-day (hyphen).
- [1%] to take a
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Cooking with Wild Game: Volume 11 Part 5
—It took me way too long to figure this sentence out:
“… how much karon milk is left that seems like it’ll last till tomorrow?”
Maybe rearrange it a little:
“how much of the remaining karon milk do you think will last till tomorrow?”or:
“how much of that karon milk will last till tomorrow?”
—Typo:
“Do as you please...” Roy ground outas he started two large pots of water boiling.
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A chef would call this a “ramekin”:
And then I added… each to their own silver container to go alongside the dish.
it seemed best to offer the sauces on the side in separate containers,
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Volume 11 - Part 6:
- [4%] what was real
picatta
like? From what I had heard, ► It should be piccata. - [5%] well with my self-taught
picatta
, which was inspired ► It should be piccata. - [88%]
‘
T-They put up wanted posters in the post town?” ► The dialogue's starting double quote is wrongly asingle
one.
- [4%] what was real
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Volume 11 - Part 8:
- [20%] In
a
eerily bold act, Cyclaeus wet his pale lips with ► It should be an. - [33%] watching that,
Cyclaues
broke out in another eerie ► It should be Cyclaeus. - [90%] your crimes?” Ai Fa
questined
, her voice extremely ► It should be questioned.
- [20%] In
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Volume 11 - Part 9:
- [61%] “
Five
kids, huh? I know it’s the same way with ► Gazraan Rutim just said the main Rutim house has Four children in the previous paragraph. - [62%] “
Roughy
60. We split into pairs of one man and ► It should be Roughly. - [77%] and he’s a sort of cute
17 year old
, while the ► It should be 17-year-old (hyphens).
- [61%] “
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@Terabyte said in Cooking with Wild Game - Corrections Topic:
- [61%] “
Five
kids, huh? I know it’s the same way with ► Gazraan Rutim just said the main Rutim house has Four children in the previous paragraph.
The five includes Gazraan himself.
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@A-James said in Cooking with Wild Game - Corrections Topic:
The five includes Gazraan himself.
“I’m 24. The main Rutim house has four children, and I am the oldest while Morun is the youngest.”
The way it is worded makes me think Gazraan is included in those four children? Or is Gazraan not counted because he's married and has moved out? (If that's the case it should probably be clarified somehow.)
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Volume 12 - Part 1:
- [90%] After seeming
chewing
over my words for a bit ► It should be to chew? - [91%] “Thank you. I don’t
know that
I fully comprehend ► It should be know if or maybe think that?
- [90%] After seeming
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Sorry this is so late, but I found an old note and…
Volume 11 Part 8
“I see. Very well, I will convey your words to the leading clan heads as you stated them,” Ai Fa cool-headedly replied as Mussel was bound with rope by her feet.
Either “by his feet” or “at her feet.”
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Volume 12 Part 2
I really couldn’t think of anything to say that.
to that
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- [6%] knew of her underlings
”
crimes and permitted ► Remove extraclosing double quote
. - [85%] frail little arms you’ve
got.,
” Bartha said with ► Duplicatepunctuation
.
- [6%] knew of her underlings
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Volume 12 part 4.
Right at the beginning it says they prepared 100 meals in total, same as the last time they reopened the business. That sounds slightly confusing, as the last time they reopened they prepared 200 meals? So I'm guessing it should be either 200 in total or 100 for his stall.
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Volume 12 - Part 4:
- [36%] the laws for this town, so
commonors
trying to ► It should be commoners. - [87%] any way inferior to
kimyuss
with the skin still ► It should be kimyuus. - [92%] “
Dying
out baked fuwano, and then grinding it ► It should be Drying.
- [36%] the laws for this town, so