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59% "I think it's highly likely they surrender." - "I think it's highly likely they will surrender."
Volume 6 Part 4
If the enemy detected the fleet moving to the Spohtnebryoov Astrobase, the enemy
mayconcentrate its forces in Lahkfacar.
Volume 6 Part 5
However, theyhad to extend the distance of their course due to avoiding contact with the enemy, they would run out of fuel before they reached the supply point.
The remaining four monarchies, separated as they were from the "main body," could not contact each other
,and were completely isolated.
The Sfagnoff Marquessate, where Lafier and Jint had once lived, the Countdom of Hyde, Jint's home system, and the Countdom of Vorlash, which could be considered Jint's second home, were stolen away from the Empire for the second
time (they had been occupied by the enemy for the first time in the early days of the war).
--because the part in parentheses is a complete sentence, it should be treated as such and separated from the preceding sentence. So,
time. (They had been occupied by the enemy for the first time in the early days of the war.)
so they tentatively named it the Byrec Scirr (Skeer Fleet)
,and endeavored to get a grasp of their present situation.
beckoned Chiefof Staff beside the Commander's Seat.
but Redic 102 was still retreating
,and was already too far away now to catch up.
so simply putting just anybody who
canpilot a conveyance ship on the job
"If they looked to be unfit to be Liason Officers,
then they could never get by going forward.
"Though it is not my duty to analyze the intent of Hania's core," said Cnataü, "
butthere are some
As such, I imagine the land faction had forced the space faction into a bet."
Space-time bubbles had strict mass limits
,and only fit one battle-line ship inside,
She got the new-post greetings over with quickly
,and issued her orders.
"Roger that," Gnomboch replied for both of them. "We will get on it right away."
And Gnomboch set about creating a unit formation plan on the double.
--seems like an odd paragraph break
but they would have to get the
government Habamerito bend the knee later.
"but please allow me to notify you of the changes
in theaterof operations that have occurred over the past twenty-four hours."
the Habameri portal lay on the left
,and the Saudec Nobh Cinchasr (Nohv Kinshass Portal) on the right.
hadtaken place there of which we
hadyet to receive any report.
Lafier saw herself as having gained her fair share of experience
,and as having matured.
Scorn resounded in
herthe Command Center Abdicant's voice when she uttered Lafier's title.
The Thunderpeal fleet clumped
together, and was headingstraight for the Nohv Kinshass Portal;
together and headed?
It would cause them to lose power
,and war-weariness to inundate the Federation.
They crashed into the enemy fleet almost the instant they outdistanced said bubbles, and they
fusingwith those of the enemy.
The Thunderpeal Fleet had hewn the Right and Front Divisions to pieces.
Leftbased on context, since it then goes on to say that the pieces of the two joined up into the Joint Division, the last PSSU fleet, but the Right Fleet is the Hania fleet that was fleeing.
The patrol ships of a squadron within Fleet 1 were sent out
,and passed through the Nohv Kinshass Portal.
The base of operations of the Area 2 Fleet, the star system known as the Secar
Viscountdom wasvirtually a war plant.
As a result, the military succeeded in taking Lahkfacar
,and gained control of the three
There will be a different mission
Its territoryhas been torn apart, with no ability to contact
--seems like odd phrasing