By the Grace of the Gods - Corrections Topic

lovelight

This is the dedicated topic for posting suggested corrections for By the Grace of the Gods.

Currently in prepublication: Volume 7!

jcochran

37% ..., it could be baked into something like unfermented bread.

Should be "unleavened".

TheGrimLich

Part 2, 98%:
~~Beck left my base with a hearty shout... —> Gazelle was the one who was drinking tea with Ryoma, not Beck.

Terabyte

Volume 6 - Part 2:

~~[5%] It must have only barely surprised the bite, but as it was ► It should be rat / creature?~~ @mystyk's correction (below) makes much more sense :)
[30%] condition, and its Poison Resistance Level had increased. ► It should be level (lowercase).
[42%] to the best of our abilities, check check on your tools and ► Duplicate check.
[67%] asked my scavenger slimes to get rid of it. Then I cast ► It should be them (filth and bugs; plural)?
[93%] “Right. So you said ’our’ house, but is it just kids ► The starting single quote is wrongly a closing one.
~~[99%] Beck left my base with a hearty shout, unaware that ► It should be Gazelle.~~ Already reported.

mystyk

[Pt.2, ~5%]: "It must have only barely surprised the bite..."
surprised -> survived

[Pt.2, ~10%]: "The bloody slimes were suffering, but I wouldn't say it was in danger.
it was -> they were

thefirstpunicwar

@Terabyte

On the duplicate check at 42%, it's possible it should be

"to the best of our abilities, double check on your tools"

This possibility just makes me smile. A nice little play on the two checks.

Iseguy

Grace 6:2

It must have only barely surprised the bite,

~~“survived”~~ (already reported)
—

The bloody slimes were suffering, but I wouldn’t say it was in danger.

~~“they were”~~ (already reported)
—

they had antibodies against pathogens as well, more than it did for poisons.

“more than they did”
—

They can be used as an insect repellent in clothes and books, though.”

I don't know what you were going for here, but I doubt it was “books”. Maybe “beds”?

missionpoit

Part 2
5%: It must have only barely surprised the bite...
surprised → survived

7%: The bloody slimes were suffering, but I wouldn't say it was in danger. The bush snake poison was weak, and the bloody slimes had resistance to poison. Not as strong as a poison slime's, but it could handle some types of poison. / I decided to watch for a while and see how diluting the poison and providing nutrients helped it.
Subject plurality; are there multiple bloody slimes who consumed poison, or just one? Based on later language, it seems multiple slimes were affected.

41% "...After you've been treated to the best of our abilities, check ~~check~~ on your tools and make sure you're using them right!..."
→Remove doubled word

97%: Beck left my house with a hearty shout, unaware that his target didn't live anywhere around here.
Beck → Gazelle

Hephaestus13

Volume 06 - Part 2:

~~[0%] It must have only barely surprised the bite, but as it was in it's den, ► Correct to rat I think~~ Already reported
~~[7%] The bloody slimes were suffering, but I wouldn't say it was in danger. ► Confirm one or many slimes and correct plurals~~ Already reported
1. 'The bloody slime was suffering, but I wouldn't say it was in danger.'
2. 'The bloody slimes were suffering, but I wouldn't say they were in danger.'
[28%] Even with the realm of snake venom alone, ► Correct to within
[35%] I looked into it and found that they had antibodies against pathogens as well, more than it did for poisons. ► Correct to they or alter the sentence after the comma.
1. 'more than they did for poisons.'
2. 'more so than poisons.'
~~[35%] After you've been treated to the best of our abilities, check check on your tool ► Remove one~~ Already reported

Terabyte

Volume 6 - Part 3:

[2%] students immediately went off, While some stayed ► It should be while (lowercase).

missionpoit

Part 3:
0%: After the morning meeting, some students immediately went off, While some stayed around to talk for a while.
While should bot be capitalized

42%: "I mean, if you do have a disease, you want to know about that sooner than later."
Insert "rather" → Sooner rather than later

69%: He was trying to reduce Howard mobility before he got close enough to attack...
Howard → Howard's

thefirstpunicwar

V6P4

[85%] "Isn't it your first time free?" ► remove it

[94%]
'stop expecting me to be like you. ► should be "Stop with a beginning " quotation mark
Takebayashi, come on. ► needs a beginning quotation " mark
retrain these people all over again!. ► remove the exclamation point or the period

Terabyte

Volume 6 - Part 4:

[96%] ’stop expecting me to be like you. Just because you’re ► A couple of issues:
1. Dialogue. Replace the closing single quote with a starting double quote.
2. It should be Stop (Capitalized).
[97%] Takebayashi, come on. You’re the one who’s supposed ► The dialogue's starting double quote is missing.
[97%] to retrain these people all over again!. You know that, ► Remove extra period.

Iseguy

By the Grace of the Gods: Volume 6 Part 4

The Sea of Trees of Syrus is one of those dangerous places you could go.

Did you mean “one of the most dangerous”? It makes more sense in context.
—

’stop expecting me to be like you.

“Stop

Terabyte

Volume 6 - Part 5:

[9%] and his head on his hands. looking distressed. “Roche, tell ► Wrong punctuation.

Terabyte

Volume 6 - Part 6:

[16%] she explained that ’Bloom’ was a term for a ► The starting single quote is wrongly a closing one.
[16%] that it meant ’Special’ in some old language. ► The starting single quote is wrongly a closing one.
[86%] he formed contracts with the divine beast?” ► It should be a contract (singular; only 1 divine beast).

Terabyte

Volume 6 - Part 7:

[Generic] Is the correct name Manolaioa or Manoailoa?
[63%] -Slime Observation Record- ► It should be wrapped in tildes instead of dashes to keep it consistent?

Terabyte

Volume 6 - Part 8:

[28%] so this is more of a personal than a business issue. ► Maybe a personal issue than a business one?

Jaquobus

Volume 6 - Part 9:

[General]: Funf should probably be either Fünf (correct German) or Fuenf (accepted spelling if umlauts are not available).

Terabyte

Volume 6 - Part 9:

[95%] from Drei, Funf, and Sechs; They’d found something. ► It should be they’d (lowercase).