I'll Never Set Foot in That House Again! - Corrections Topic

lovelight

This is the dedicated topic for posting suggested corrections for I'll Never Set Foot in That House Again!

Currently in prepublication: Volume 2!

Terabyte

Volume 1 - Part 1:

[74%] inside with the box, so he headed for the entrance ► It should be we (Glen and Chelsea)?

pcj

Volume 2 - Part 1

[31%] Currently or not, I couldn’t make any mistakes when meeting with the former Emperor of Radzuel. → this doesn't make sense to me. Is "currently" supposed to be a different word?
[41%] “We’ll be waiting, okay!” → should the ! be a ? ?
[41%] In his hands was a paper bag the size of both of mine. → this reads like the size of both of my bags... I'm guessing it means both of my hands?
[64%] Really, when nobles went on trips, they’d get a warm welcome in the territories they passed through → from the context 2 paragraphs later, I think this should have been Normally
[64%] would buy lots of different things in the territories villages and towns as thanks. → either needs a comma after territories or an apostrophe, depending on the intended meaning.

Terabyte

Volume 1 - Part 2:

[22%] “I’m sorry, Chelsea. Jake insisted that he ► The starting double quote alone is in italic format.
[55%] “And that was just last year. The famines ► The starting double quote alone is in italic format.

pcj

Volume 2 - Part 2

[91%] The flower, just as bright blue as the seed it was grown for, swayed in the breeze. → from

Hephaestus13

Volume 02 - Part 2:

[63%] "It is I, Felixford. Would Chelsea happen to be with you?" ► Correct to Felixfort
[72%] "... We'd just been taking a break, but...Felixford, let me ask you for your opinion." ► Correct to Felixfort and consider a space before

Terabyte

Volume 1 - Part 3:

[Generic] There's 2 paragraphs that start with the double quote (alone) in italic format : “. 😋
[28%] and Emperor Bearsley the bearman won~’’ This time, ► The dialogue's closing double quote is wrongly a double single one.
[40%] The Spirits disappeared, and the miasma unleashed ► Missing punctuation.
[90%] but it’s the King of the Spirit’s temporary form, huh... ► It should be Spirits’ (move the s).
[94%] looked away from me, not answering, Did he not want ► It should be a period.

japzone

Volume 02 - Part 3:
Did I miss something? How did we go from numbers Chapter 2 and Interlude 2 in Part 2 to the numbers Chapter 5 and Chapter 6 in Part 6? We didn't miss any content as far as I can tell at least.

gmkz

@japzone Thank you for pointing that out! It was a mistake on my part.

Terabyte

Volume 1 - Part 4:

[13%] I’d get healed up and beat ‘em up,” Lord Royz ► It should be ’em (different ’ ).
[20%] and refreshing, so everyone thinks it‘s good.” ► It should be it’s (different ’ ).
[48%] Tamagoyaki... Nikkorogashi... Pickled veggies... ► The dialogue's closing double quote is missing.
[52%] a little bit of each thing, but it was all delicious ► Missing period.
[61%] “He also had ‘Worshipper of the Proxy, Driven ► It should be Worshiper (US spelling).
[79%] how we managed a fifteen day carriage ride ► It should be fifteen-day (hyphen).
[83%] them to the ends of the earth and beat ‘em up~!” ► It should be ’em (different ’ ).

pcj

Volume 2 - Part 4

[1%] My Skill, [Seed Creation], lets me make any seed I wish for any seed... → needs some kind of punctuation here after "wish for". Probably either a colon or period and capitalize Any.

Terabyte

Volume 1 - Part 5:

[4%] “Sorry about that. Make ‘em feel welcome!” ► It should be ’em (different ’ ).
[55%] “That must’ve been tough,” I mumbled ► Missing period.

pcj

Volume - 2 Part 5

[10%] the fortune teller had stuck with him until the end had said: >> should be teller who had

Terabyte

Volume 1 - Part 6:

[49%] “Seems like it. Class: Swindler/Worshipper of the Proxy, ► It should be Worshiper (US spelling).

MFDelta

A little bit before the above, "A little bit away, the knights had apprehended the man who summoned him, slapping a Mana Sealing Bracelet on his wrist."

Should probably be "who summoned them," unless the scorpion was singular, identified as male, and could summon shadow clones

Terabyte

Volume 1 - Part 7:

[32%] “I can’t just forget it without getting her ► The starting double quote (alone) is in italic format : “.
[33%] “Your Highness, As I told you before, you ► It should be as (lowercase).

SomeOldGuy

V2 P8 32%:
slowly came to the stop.
a would seem more appropriate, as it wasn't a planned stop.

38%:
It is about more than
Suggest dropping about, since the estimated size was approximate anyway.

Terabyte

Volume 1 - Part 8:

~~[33%] the main road, slowly came to the stop. It wasn’t ► It should be a.~~ Already reported.
[59%] “Simple steak, grind it up into hamburger, stuff it ► The starting double quote (alone) is in italic format.
[68%] she plans on cooking it, huh?. The fog covering ► Remove period.

HarmlessDave

V2 P8

Liquorice (British English) should be licorice (American English).

(Panda is the best, red vines and twizzlers are tasty enough but aren't in the same league.)

Hephaestus13

Volume 02 - Part 3:

[90%] who had been standing behind the sofa, pull her lips tight as if she was trying not to cry. ► Should be pulled