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      zwabbit Premium Member last edited by

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      0% - Until the Queen's Navy were defeated - While the Navy is indeed made up of a multitude, the Navy itself is technically singular, so should be "was defeated" here.

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        Roy Nukia Translators @zwabbit last edited by

        @zwabbit Thank you! This correction has been made.

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        • Libri Liberorum
          Libri Liberorum Premium Member last edited by Libri Liberorum

          Volume 9 part 1

          Jessica's gesture had served one important purpose:

          Then two important purposes are described.

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          • pcj
            pcj Premium Member last edited by

            Volume 9 - Part 1

            • [38%] their troops had endured one large-scale battle another >> should be after another
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              Roy Nukia Translators @pcj last edited by

              @pcj Thank you!

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              • Terabyte
                Terabyte Premium Member last edited by

                Volume 9 - Part 2:

                • [71%] “Well, we’ve gotta play it safe....” ► It should be 3 periods.
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                • pcj
                  pcj Premium Member last edited by pcj

                  Volume 9 Part 3 is missing an image:

                  Unable to download image with URL: 'BASTIAN WITH DAGGER GUARDING ELIZE'.

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                  • Terabyte
                    Terabyte Premium Member @pcj last edited by

                    @pcj I reported it earlier in Discord. It's been fixed already. 🙃

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                      hatguy12 last edited by

                      v9 p3 32%: Bastian had made off with the dagger about half a month ago,

                      Maybe I missed something by skipping Loose Threads, but didn't Bastian take the dagger when leaving for his High Britannia study abroad. I'm pretty sure that was longer than 2 weeks ago, so something seems wrong here.

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                      • Roy Nukia
                        Roy Nukia Translators @hatguy12 last edited by

                        @hatguy12 You're right, it should be half a year.

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                        • Shiny
                          Shiny Premium Member @hatguy12 last edited by Shiny

                          @hatguy12 said in Altina the Sword Princess - Corrections Topic:

                          Maybe I missed something by skipping Loose Threads, but

                          It's up to you whether you read it or not, but I'd like to heartily recommend you give Loose Threads a chance if you ever have the time. It doesn't simply contain random filler content but actually shows some good backstory and side-story for various characters and has some hilarious scenes.

                          Stay shiny, y'all.

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                          • pcj
                            pcj Premium Member @Shiny last edited by

                            @shiny I'll concur with shiny and also point out that at least half of it is actually plot-relevant to the main story as well (and there are things in volume 9 that will leave you semi-lost if you didn't read the parts leading up to it in Loose Threads).

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                              Shiny Premium Member @pcj last edited by

                              @pcj said in Altina the Sword Princess - Corrections Topic:

                              @shiny I'll concur with shiny and also point out that at least half of it is actually plot-relevant to the main story as well (and there are things in volume 9 that will leave you semi-lost if you didn't read the parts leading up to it in Loose Threads).

                              Agreed, a good chunk helps explain a lot in terms of past and present plots (and who knows how much it will help with future plot and character points).

                              Stay shiny, y'all.

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                              • Terabyte
                                Terabyte Premium Member last edited by

                                Volume 9 - Part 4:

                                • [62%] Chapter 3: Late-Night Coffee ► The usual title format is missing.
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                                • SomeOldGuy
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                                  At about 67%, there is reference to Regis's tend, which should be tent.

                                  "But the blueprints..."

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                                    Roy Nukia Translators @SomeOldGuy last edited by

                                    @someoldguy Thank you! Correction has been made.

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                                    • Libri Liberorum
                                      Libri Liberorum Premium Member last edited by

                                      Grebeauvoir was a provincial city spread across a steep mountain range, and situated at the base of numerous hills.

                                      This confused me greatly. I think "spread across" needs to say something different. How can it be both on the mountains and yet at the base of the hills? Perhaps the province spreads across mountains but the city is situated at the base of the hills?

                                      Eventually I get a description "The city essentially lay in a basin among the mountains" and a map, which did make sense.

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                                      • Terabyte
                                        Terabyte Premium Member last edited by

                                        Volume 9 - Part 7:

                                        • [22%] before the plan commenced,“ he explained. ► The dialogue's closing double quote is a starting one.
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                                        • Hephaestus13
                                          Hephaestus13 Premium Member last edited by

                                          Volume 09 - Part 7:

                                          • [11%] spread oil around the capital or seawater over the plains. ► Should be freshwater they filled barrels from lakes...
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                                          • Terabyte
                                            Terabyte Premium Member last edited by

                                            Volume 10 - Part 5:

                                            • [27%] already feeling at one with the mare. ► It should be as one?
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