Campfire Cooking - Corrections Topic

trutherford2388

19% in right after chapter 6 starts, the conversation with the random adventurer had him saying, "Don't seem many of you around here." I'm assuming it's meant to say, "Don't see many of you around here" instead since "seem" and "see" are completely different in meaning.

If I'm mistaken and this is intentional, the please ignore me.

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Volume 10 - Part 6:

[5%] were keeping it maintained (Though for what it’s worth ► It should be though (lowercase)?.
[9%] coming from about how it’s been building up, right? ► The dialogue's closing double quote is missing.
[23%] donations they happened to recieve. In practice, all ► It should be receive.
[28%] me too?!》 shouted Dora-chan.Their interest in Fel ► Missing space.
[69%] The childrens’ happy shouts filled the dining hall. ► It should be children’s (move the s).

frosted flaker

Volume 10 Part 6:

[27%]《Hey, hands off, pal! No touching!》 Screeched Dora-chan,” Should be lowercase ‘s’, screeched
[82%] “According to the director, he’d found his back in a dungeon” Should be bag

Terabyte

@frosted-flaker said in Campfire Cooking - Corrections Topic:

Volume 10 Part 6:

[82%] “According to the director, he’d found his back in a dungeon” Should be bag

Since they're already talking about the bag it's implied(?):

he’d found his (magic bag) back in a dungeon

frosted flaker

@terabyte ah that makes sense! But then I’m not sure “back” is needed in the sentence unless it’s linked to time rather than place? Just my two cents as a reader, not a professional :)

“According to the director, he’d found his [bag] back in a dungeon during his adventuring years.”

“According to the director, he’d found his [bag] in a dungeon during his adventuring years.”
“According to the director, he’d found his [bag] in a dungeon back during his adventuring years.”

Terabyte

@frosted-flaker To elaborate some more, since he's a retired adventurer, it could be read as:

he’d found his (magic bag) back (when he was an adventurer) in a dungeon

That's how I read it at least. I'm no professional either. 😋

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Volume 10 - Part 5:

[Generic] The name Isaac (double a) is written 4 times as Issac (double s).

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Volume 10 - Part 7:

[Generic] The name Isaac (double a) is written 10 times as Issac (double s).
[20%] the greatest number of worshippers present at the time ► It should be worshipers (US spelling).
[20%] and start thinking about her disciples one of these days. ► Maybe worshipers / followers fits better in this context?
[47%] Serves him right for not helping us yesterday!》 Grrr... ► Missing line break for Mukohda's dialogue?
[79%] but every once a while I get the urge to cook some up, ► It should be in a while.
[91%] Sui wants second! It really is good, uncle Fel, honest!》 ► It should be Uncle Fel (both Capitalized) for consistency.

frosted flaker

Volume 10 - Part 7:

53% As a natural result, adventures flocked to the city in droves. > should be adventurers
68% I got garlic chives, beansprouts, > should be two words bean sprouts
79% Master, Sui wants second! > should be seconds

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Volume 10 - Part 8:

[12%] though! They’re my dedicated worshippers!＞ ► It should be worshipers (US spelling).
[74%] “Hmm, another fine choice,” He declared as ► It should be he (lowercase).

frosted flaker

Volume 10 Part 8:

[14%]They I suppose you won’t mind going last this time?＞ should be Then
[36%] Supposedly the natural sourness of the plums complimented > should be complemented
[86%] perfectly enhance and compliment the bitterness of the matcha. > should be complement

Revenent

@Ojive Not sure if you're still tracking this thread, but in "The Charms of the Chocolate Fair", there's a typo - "Matster, you decide!" - Master is misspelt.

myskaros

@revenent Please refer to the opening post of this thread:

This topic is for discussion only. Please post suggested corrections in the dedicated correction topic.

Rahul Balaggan

@revenent

Hello,

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Thank you

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Volume 11 - Part 1:

[6%] day to come! Bwa ha ha ha!**》Fel blasted my mind with ► Missing space.
[36%] 《Gaaah, adventurers! What about the adventurers?! 》 ► Remove extra space.
[37%] now that I think about it, that's pretty much true. ► It should be that’s (different ’ ).
[38%] Guess Fel’s a half-decent teacher sometimes after all!” ► Dora's telepathic dialogue. Replace the closing double quote with 》.
[43%] chat wasn’t exactly polite (Not that I had much say in ► It should be not (lowercase).
[70%] around the entire level. WIth no other choice, we set ► It should be With (lowercase i).
[73%] there’d still be a two hour cooldown after they finished, ► It should be two-hour (hyphen).
[73%] we were looking at a four hour wait, bare minimum. ► It should be four-hour (hyphen).
[76%] yeah, well I’m a better attacker than you’ll ever be!”》 ► Dora's telepathic dialogue. Remove extra closing double quote.
[99%] Can’t believe the switch really was hiden up there!” ► It should be hidden.

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Volume 11 - Part 2:

[4%] Appraising the gems, that the red one was a ruby, ► Remove that.
[18%] 《They come!》 ► It should be They came / They’re coming? Or rather, since there's only 1 monster, it should be singular, too?
[85%] about his, and Alex and Axel were very obviously ► It should be Alek.

Terabyte

Volume 11 - Part 3:

[Generic] The party's name Pentagram is written 3 times as Pentacle.
[28%] Brainless mutts, ever one of them.》 Fel brought down his Rending Claws in a single ► It should be every.
[81%] cannot comprehend the way you think...》 ► The closing 》 should be in bold format too.
[86%] reap the rewards of their their insolence!》 ► Duplicate their.

Terabyte

Volume 11 - Part 4:

[29%] flee, but my familiars seemed totally unphased. ► It should be unfazed.
[71%] these to drive away vampire mosquitoes too. ► The dialogue's closing double quote is missing.
[76%] on it, and had been requesting it for every meal ► Missing period.
[84%] some time ago complimented it well, but I see ► It should be complemented.
[86%] I can’t find anything to nitpick about this one." ► The dialogue's closing double quote is a normal one.

Terabyte

Volume 11 - Part 5:

[858] beyond the pale!》he added, slurping back ► Missing space after 》.

Vorthod

15% Please tell me this ~~floow~~ isn't as big as the last one was -> floor
30% Gotta say, though, the ~~beat~~ meat wasn't bad -> bear
37% Of ~~course!"Hey~~ guys -> (missing space)

Terabyte

Volume 11 - Part 6:

~~[19%] Please tell me this floow isn’t as big as the ► It should be floor.~~ Already reported.
[25%] Would the same principals even apply to ► It should be principles.
[32%] 《Yaaay, food!》Sui shouted with glee. The ► Missing space after 》.
~~[33%] 《Gotta say, though, the beat meat wasn’t ► It should be bear.~~ Already reported.
[37%] 《Oooh? Now this is a remarkable find!》 ► The dialogue's starting 《 should be bold too.
[42%] at the monster’s feet.《The one back then ► Missing space before 《.

Terabyte

Volume 11 - Part 7:

[58%] an immediate and ear-piercing squeal of glee.. ► Duplicate period.