I Shall Survive Using Potions! - Corrections Topic
[19%] Leia had to reason to help us -> no
[27%] iIn middle school form?! -> In
[57%] in the insert image the action lines from Kauro's hand seem to have JPEG artifacts... and only the action lines. Don't know if that is how it is originally, or some layering issue (or both :P)
[88%] how many people sought after her genes -> I think sought after is intransitive... e.g. "it was pointless to think about how her genes were sought after by so many people." ....or just drop after to make "just how many people sought her genes" :P (or coveted)
@gamen You've already listed everything I've found this time around. I'm not even gonna bother posting my list. 😋
@terabyte Now if only it was here freezing over instead of Hell....
That meathead... the attendants spat internally with a bitter expression.
Should that space be there before that 'the'? Not sure if the cursive text changes it in your guidelines.
I guess the space makes sense but maybe capitalising that 'the' makes sense then? Idk