Our Crappy Social Game Club Is Gonna Make the Most Epic Game - Corrections Topic

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This is the dedicated topic for posting suggested corrections for Social Game Club
Currently in prepublication: Volume 2!

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Volume 2 - Part 1:

• [77%] From illustrations to 3D modelling, they prided ► It should be modeling (US spelling).
• [81%] “U-Um...?”Kai tried to escape, but despite her ► Missing space.
• [93%] shoved Aina’s shoulder with all her might. it. ► Remove random it. ?
• [96%] “I....” Kai could hear the hoarseness in the ► It should be 3 periods.

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Volume 2 - Part 2:

• [0%] Chapter 2 (cont): ► I guess this is just a translator or editor note that should be removed?
• [11%] I think something must have happened there. ► The dialogue's closing double quote is missing.
• [69%] Nanaka, Aya, and the headphone-wearing Eru ► Missing period.

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Volume 2 - Part 3:

• [45%] “...You’re quite beautiful,” Mifei noted, her eyes ► It should be Mirei.
• [56%] were a good number of people travelling with ► It should be traveling (US spelling).
• [60%] ‘Will winning against people like us even mean ► It should be them since it's supposedly from Mirei POV?
• [88%] many people tend to think of them separately. ► The dialogue's closing double quote is missing.

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Volume 2 - Part 4:

• [52%] that she had gotten stuck up there, he realized. ► Remove italic format from he.
• [78%] “...That’s... true....” ► It should be 3 periods.

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Volume 2 - Part 5:

• [13%] so he used his better judgement and left that bit out. ► It should be judgment (US spelling).
• [25%] then we wouldn’t call them Konstopin.” “That’s true.” ► Add a line break?
• [44%] beside you struggling together beside you is reason ► Maybe with you ?
• [60%] be expected to study 3D modelling software, as well. ► It should be modeling (US spelling).
• [61%] CPU, RAM, and GPU were all competent enough for ► I think powerful fits better?

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Volume 2 - Part 6:

• [4%] wanna actually go to the fireworks festival with everyone? ► A couple of issues:
  1. There's a wrong line break, merge this paragraph with the previous one.
  2. Part 5 text actually is actually wanna (switch around the words).
• [25%] “Ahh, Geez! What the heck is with that moron?!” Aina’s voice ► It should be geez (lowercase).
• [37%] his phone’s speakers. “I’ll go to look for her,” he promised. ► Remove to.
• [86%] because she and him were the slightest bit similar in that ► Missing period.

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Volume 2 - Part 7:

• [84%] “If you know that much, that makes it easy to explain! ► The dialogue's starting double quote (alone) is in italic format.
• [91%] “This... is a photo of me in middle school. “I’ve cut it ► Remove second/duplicate starting double quote.

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Volume 2 - Part 9:

• [51%] her and others where the girl invited the user ► It should be or where?

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Volume 2 - Part 10:

• [Generic] The illustrator's name is Hyuga (single u) on the cover but it's written 2 times as Hyuuga (double u) in the afterword.