Our Crappy Social Game Club Is Gonna Make the Most Epic Game - Corrections Topic
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This is the dedicated topic for posting suggested corrections for Social Game Club
Currently in prepublication: Volume 2! -
Volume 2 - Part 1:
- [77%] From illustrations to 3D
modelling
, they prided ► It should be modeling (US spelling). - [81%] “U-Um...?
”Kai
tried to escape, but despite her ► Missing space. - [93%] shoved Aina’s shoulder with all her might.
it.
► Remove randomit.
? - [96%] “
I....
” Kai could hear the hoarseness in the ► It should be 3 periods.
- [77%] From illustrations to 3D
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Volume 2 - Part 2:
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Chapter 2 (cont):
► I guess this is just atranslator or editor note
that should beremoved
? - [11%] I think something must have happened
there.
► The dialogue's closing double quote is missing. - [69%] Nanaka, Aya, and the headphone-wearing
Eru
► Missing period.
- [0%]
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Volume 2 - Part 3:
- [45%] “...You’re quite beautiful,”
Mifei
noted, her eyes ► It should be Mirei. - [56%] were a good number of people
travelling
with ► It should be traveling (US spelling). - [60%] ‘Will winning against people like
us
even mean ► It should be them since it's supposedly from Mirei POV? - [88%] many people tend to think of them
separately.
► The dialogue's closing double quote is missing.
- [45%] “...You’re quite beautiful,”
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Volume 2 - Part 4:
- [52%] that she had gotten stuck up there,
he
realized. ► Removeitalic format
from he. - [78%] “...That’s...
true....
” ► It should be 3 periods.
- [52%] that she had gotten stuck up there,
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Volume 2 - Part 5:
- [13%] so he used his better
judgement
and left that bit out. ► It should be judgment (US spelling). - [25%] then we wouldn’t call them Konstopin.
” “
That’s true.” ► Add a line break? - [44%] beside you struggling together
beside you
is reason ► Maybe with you ? - [60%] be expected to study 3D
modelling
software, as well. ► It should be modeling (US spelling). - [61%] CPU, RAM, and GPU were all
competent
enough for ► I think powerful fits better?
- [13%] so he used his better
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Volume 2 - Part 6:
- [4%]
wanna actually
go to the fireworks festival with everyone? ► A couple of issues:- There's a wrong
line break
, merge this paragraph with the previous one. - Part 5 text actually is actually wanna (switch around the words).
- There's a wrong
- [25%] “Ahh,
Geez
! What the heck is with that moron?!” Aina’s voice ► It should be geez (lowercase). - [37%] his phone’s speakers. “I’ll go
to
look for her,” he promised. ► Removeto
. - [86%] because she and him were the slightest bit similar in
that
► Missing period.
- [4%]
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Volume 2 - Part 7:
- [84%]
“
If you know that much, that makes it easy to explain! ► The dialogue'sstarting double quote
(alone) is initalic format
. - [91%] “This... is a photo of me in middle school.
“
I’ve cut it ► Remove second/duplicatestarting double quote
.
- [84%]
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Volume 2 - Part 9:
- [51%] her and others
where
the girl invited the user ► It should be or where?
- [51%] her and others
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Volume 2 - Part 10:
- [Generic] The illustrator's name is Hyuga (single u) on the cover but it's written
2 times
asHyuuga
(doubleu
) in the afterword.
- [Generic] The illustrator's name is Hyuga (single u) on the cover but it's written