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      lovelight Staff last edited by Rahul Balaggan

      This is the dedicated topic for posting suggested corrections for Social Game Club
      Currently in prepublication: Volume 2!

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      • Terabyte
        Terabyte Premium Member last edited by

        Volume 2 - Part 1:

        • [77%] From illustrations to 3D modelling, they prided ► It should be modeling (US spelling).
        • [81%] “U-Um...?”Kai tried to escape, but despite her ► Missing space.
        • [93%] shoved Aina’s shoulder with all her might. it. ► Remove random it. ?
        • [96%] “I....” Kai could hear the hoarseness in the ► It should be 3 periods.
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        • Terabyte
          Terabyte Premium Member last edited by

          Volume 2 - Part 2:

          • [0%] Chapter 2 (cont): ► I guess this is just a translator or editor note that should be removed?
          • [11%] I think something must have happened there. ► The dialogue's closing double quote is missing.
          • [69%] Nanaka, Aya, and the headphone-wearing Eru ► Missing period.
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          • Terabyte
            Terabyte Premium Member last edited by

            Volume 2 - Part 3:

            • [45%] “...You’re quite beautiful,” Mifei noted, her eyes ► It should be Mirei.
            • [56%] were a good number of people travelling with ► It should be traveling (US spelling).
            • [60%] ‘Will winning against people like us even mean ► It should be them since it's supposedly from Mirei POV?
            • [88%] many people tend to think of them separately. ► The dialogue's closing double quote is missing.
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            • Terabyte
              Terabyte Premium Member last edited by

              Volume 2 - Part 4:

              • [52%] that she had gotten stuck up there, he realized. ► Remove italic format from he.
              • [78%] “...That’s... true....” ► It should be 3 periods.
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              • Terabyte
                Terabyte Premium Member last edited by

                Volume 2 - Part 5:

                • [13%] so he used his better judgement and left that bit out. ► It should be judgment (US spelling).
                • [25%] then we wouldn’t call them Konstopin.” “That’s true.” ► Add a line break?
                • [44%] beside you struggling together beside you is reason ► Maybe with you ?
                • [60%] be expected to study 3D modelling software, as well. ► It should be modeling (US spelling).
                • [61%] CPU, RAM, and GPU were all competent enough for ► I think powerful fits better?
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                • Terabyte
                  Terabyte Premium Member last edited by

                  Volume 2 - Part 6:

                  • [4%] wanna actually go to the fireworks festival with everyone? ► A couple of issues:
                    1. There's a wrong line break, merge this paragraph with the previous one.
                    2. Part 5 text actually is actually wanna (switch around the words).
                  • [25%] “Ahh, Geez! What the heck is with that moron?!” Aina’s voice ► It should be geez (lowercase).
                  • [37%] his phone’s speakers. “I’ll go to look for her,” he promised. ► Remove to.
                  • [86%] because she and him were the slightest bit similar in that ► Missing period.
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                  • Terabyte
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                    Volume 2 - Part 7:

                    • [84%] “If you know that much, that makes it easy to explain! ► The dialogue's starting double quote (alone) is in italic format.
                    • [91%] “This... is a photo of me in middle school. “I’ve cut it ► Remove second/duplicate starting double quote.
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                    • Terabyte
                      Terabyte Premium Member last edited by

                      Volume 2 - Part 9:

                      • [51%] her and others where the girl invited the user ► It should be or where?
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                      • Terabyte
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                        Volume 2 - Part 10:

                        • [Generic] The illustrator's name is Hyuga (single u) on the cover but it's written 2 times as Hyuuga (double u) in the afterword.
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