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      lovelight Staff last edited by morgenstern

      This is the dedicated topic for posting suggested corrections for Monster Tamer.

      Currently in prepublication: Volume 10!

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      • Jon Mitchell
        Jon Mitchell Premium Member last edited by

        not to be too impatient- but it's not up yet/for me top read/comment/correct?

        I read banned books

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        • Lily Garden
          Lily Garden Member @lovelight last edited by

          @lovelight said in Monster Tamer - Corrections Topic:

          This is the dedicated topic for posting suggested corrections for Slayers.

          Currently in prepublication: Volume 3!

          Slayers? Methinks this is a typo or we have a case of quantum entanglement of narratives 😁

          “There’s always a story. It’s all stories, really. The sun coming up every day is a story. Everything’s got a story in it. Change the story, change the world.” ― Terry Pratchett, A Hat Full of Sky

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          • Rahul Balaggan
            Rahul Balaggan Staff last edited by

            I edited the opening post.

            Sorry but J-Novel Club does not publicly comment on any potential licensing decision or acquisitions.
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            • Terabyte
              Terabyte Premium Member last edited by

              Volume 3 - Part 1:

              • [66%] center stage. Both The students and the knights â–ș It should be the (lowercase).
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              • Terabyte
                Terabyte Premium Member last edited by

                Volume 3 - Part 2:

                • [47%] A powerful sense of discomfort shook my brian. â–ș It should be brain.
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                • Terabyte
                  Terabyte Premium Member last edited by

                  Volume 3 - Part 3:

                  • [60%] returning her gaze to LIly. “You know Takaya Jun, â–ș It should be Lily (lowercase i).
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                  • Terabyte
                    Terabyte Premium Member last edited by

                    Volume 3 - Part 4:

                    • [45%] a similar ring, although her’s was a different color. â–ș It should be hers.
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                    • Iseguy
                      Iseguy Member last edited by

                      Volume 3 Part 5

                      “It’s fine, it’s fine. We’ve got nothing to do anyway,” he said as he pushed Shiran’s back into the hallway.

                      “pushed Shiran back”

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                      • Terabyte
                        Terabyte Premium Member last edited by

                        Volume 3 - Part 6:

                        • [15%] show it to him one day. I no longer had a choice.. â–ș Duplicate period.
                        • [19%] to picture from her meagre change in expression, â–ș It should be meager (US spelling).
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                        • Iseguy
                          Iseguy Member last edited by

                          Volume 3 Part 6

                          Mana cocked her head then answered me in a content manner.

                          contented

                          Mana’s face was tinged a faint red as she held her own body over her somewhat disheveled clothes.

                          Gave me the wrong visual. Maybe “through”?

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                          • Terabyte
                            Terabyte Premium Member last edited by

                            Volume 3 - Part 7:

                            • [44%] So, didn’t it make perfect sense to doubt her Wasn’t it â–ș Missing question mark.
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                            • Iseguy
                              Iseguy Member last edited by

                              Volume 3 Part 7

                              Back during the fight with the then nameless Gerbera,

                              “then-nameless”

                              “You need to put in the effort to realize your dreams. Your’s is one which can be fulfilled, after all.”

                              “Yours”

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                              • Terabyte
                                Terabyte Premium Member last edited by

                                Volume 3 - Part 8:

                                • [15%] “Guh....” â–ș It should be 3 periods.
                                • [17%] “Wha—?! â–ș The dialogue's closing double quote is missing.
                                • [86%] Her puppet feet tread through the soft earth. â–ș It should be treaded?
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                                • Iseguy
                                  Iseguy Member last edited by

                                  Volume 3 Part 8

                                  She couldn’t say anymore.

                                  “any more.”

                                  Even she, who had lived far longer than I, had no idea what was going.

                                  “going on.”

                                  she was able to take chase while remaining out of visible range.

                                  “give chase”

                                  Her puppet feet tread through the soft earth. The way she dragged along was similar to a plow reclaiming ground.

                                  “trod through”.
                                  “plodded” or “stomped” would also be better than “dragged”, unless Mana was being dragged. The metaphorical meaning, if any, is getting lost in context.

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                                  • Terabyte
                                    Terabyte Premium Member last edited by

                                    Volume 4 - Part 1:

                                    • [55%] we visitors possessed really all that impressive...?” â–ș No dialogue here. Remove the extra closing double quote.
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                                    • Iseguy
                                      Iseguy Member last edited by

                                      Volume 4 part 1

                                      Shiran was the first human I met since being teleported here—

                                      “First local human”, technically. Can we still use the word “native”?

                                      I got to hear about another amusing story too.

                                      “story, too.”

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                                      • Khaos
                                        Khaos Premium Member last edited by

                                        Volume 4 - Part 2:

                                        • [80%] Gooseflesh ran down my skin,

                                        Not sure if the term 'gooseflesh' was used for a specific reason, but with the way this is worded, I think 'goosebumps' is the better fit.

                                        Otherwise if it was something like, 'Suddenly I had gooseflesh'. I think it would work.

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                                        • Terabyte
                                          Terabyte Premium Member last edited by

                                          Volume 4 - Part 3:

                                          • [27%] “From what I can see, Takahira was engaged in combat â–ș It should be Takahiro.
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                                          • Terabyte
                                            Terabyte Premium Member last edited by

                                            Volume 4 - Part 4:

                                            • [General] When referring to sprite(s) the wrong(?) word spirit(s) is used 5 times.
                                            • [68%] down? Any hope of defeating him was still meagre, however. â–ș It should be meager (US spelling).
                                            • [83%] surpassed a rare specimen of another magical puppet, Rose. â–ș It should be a rare magical puppet specimen?
                                            • [97%] also no telling if this “someone’ was tying together more than just â–ș The closing double quote is wrongly a single one.
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