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      lovelight Staff last edited by yuzumori

      This is the dedicated topic for posting suggested corrections for A Wild Last Boss Appeared!.

      Currently in prepublication: Volume 7!

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        Volume 4 - Part 1:

        • [31%] always, “She's always been dangerous.” ► It should be She’s (different ’ ).
        • [42%] attack spell cast by Goddess and aimed ► It should be by the.
        • [50%] “M-Miss Luphas!” ► It should be Lufas. (Or is the name wrong on purpose because of the situation?)
        • [74%] the Devil King Orm had a goal and was ► It should be The (Capitalized).
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          KathleenT Editors @Terabyte last edited by

          @Terabyte Thanks for these! They've been updated.

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            Volume 4 - Part 2:

            • [Generic] The topic link that redirects to the forum is still broken after the domain: ...j-novel.clubtopic/... (missing /).
            • [3%] heretical cults, and their worshippers possibly even ► It should be worshipers (US spelling).
            • [27%] was the closest geologically. On the other hand, ► It should be geographically?
            • [30%] a bunch of nobodies Tamers release a bunch of ► It should be who release. (Or maybe releasing?)
            • [56%] “Naming themselves above Lady Lufas,? Above a ► Remove comma.
            • [82%] a way to protect her.now. ... First, I should ask ► A couple of issues:
              1. Remove extra period. (Or is now. the extra part?)
              2. Remove extra space after the 3 periods.
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              KathleenT Editors @Terabyte last edited by

              @Terabyte Thanks for pointing all these out! They've been updated. The forum link should also be working now.

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                Volume 4 - Part 3:

                • [29%] in height and wielding clubs.. There was also ► Duplicate period.
                • [53%] I’ll need to get there,grab that girl adventurer, ► Missing space.
                • [61%] all aspects of a living thing, making it stronger ► I think living being would fit better the context?
                • [84%] “I’ll help! ‘Light Sword!’ ► The dialogue's closing double quote (after the single quote) is missing.
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                  KathleenT Editors @Terabyte last edited by

                  @Terabyte Thanks so much for these! Typos have been fixed.

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                    Terabyte Premium Member last edited by

                    Volume 4 - Part 5:

                    • [19%] always be disguised... Healways hid his true form. ► It should be He always (space).
                    • [64%] and was taken along with the area to whatever ► It should be with it / with the arrow?
                    • [69%] Apparently , this place was like a mountain of ► Remove extra space.
                    • [79%] “Um.... Does anyone else hear that?” ► It should be 3 periods.
                    • [85%] in here?!” Gantz sounded like he was panicking ► Missing period.
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                      KathleenT Editors @Terabyte last edited by

                      @Terabyte Thanks for these! They've been update.

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                        Terabyte Premium Member last edited by

                        Volume 4 - Part 6:

                        • [6%] an unexpectedly calm judgement of the situation. ► It should be judgment (US spelling).
                        • [50%] one of them, “Magic Break”, a skill only available ► Move the comma inside the quotes.
                        • [51%] stopped Sei’s attack and kicked Sei’s jaw as a ► Maybe his jaw to avoid repeating Sei’s?
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                          KathleenT Editors @Terabyte last edited by

                          @Terabyte Thanks for these! They've been updated.

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                            Volume 4 - Part 7:

                            • [91%] No, nevermind. it’d still be impossible. ► It should be It’d (Capitalized).
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                              KathleenT Editors @Terabyte last edited by

                              @Terabyte Thanks for this! It's been updated.

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                                Volume 4 - Part 8:

                                • [75%] having somewhat helped repulsed—Sei and the group ► It should be repulse.
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                                  KathleenT Editors @Terabyte last edited by

                                  @Terabyte Thanks for this! It's been changed.

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                                    Gamen Premium Member last edited by

                                    V4 pt. 10
                                    32% you have the bearing a -> bearing of a
                                    82% Lufas had stopped a blow the dragon, which had returned, threw with all its might with one hand -> I feel like the commas break this up too much; it took me a few rereads to realize it wasn't saying something like "Lufas had stopped a blow from the dragon which had returned, and threw it with all her might with one hand". Also had thrown perhaps? (And do dragons have hands? or paws?)
                                    89% active twenty -four hours a day -> extra space before hyphen.

                                    My talking sword has a point. And is also right.

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                                      Volume 4 - Part 10:

                                      • [Generic] The author's name Firehead (single word) is wrongly written 2 times as Fire Head in the afterword.
                                      • [0%] Then, Aries and and Libra joined in, too, their faces ► Duplicate and.
                                      • [32%] He,Phecda, was a halfling. He was employed as a ► Missing space.
                                      • [52%] including Alphecca, as they focussed on what they ► It should be focused (US spelling).
                                      • [66%] returned his sword to his sheathe before looking ► It should be sheath.
                                      • [67%] with possibilities open to them,so much so that ► Missing space.
                                      • [74%] the center of the nation any time they pleased. ► It should be it (the dragon; singular).
                                      • [86%] who was active twenty -four hours a day with ► It should be twenty-four (no space). Already reported.
                                      • [90%] —Finally, the four hour mark had passed since ► It should be four-hour (hyphen).
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                                        KathleenT Editors @Terabyte last edited by

                                        @Gamen & @Terabyte Thanks for pointing these out! Typos should all be fixed and updated now! The section with the dragon fight should be clearer too.

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                                          Volume 5 - Part 1:

                                          • [87%] and the zombies were the working class. ► It should be ghouls?
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                                            KathleenT Editors @Terabyte last edited by

                                            @terabyte Thanks for this! It's been changed.

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