A Wild Last Boss Appeared! - Corrections Topic

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This is the dedicated topic for posting suggested corrections for A Wild Last Boss Appeared!.

Currently in prepublication: Volume 5!

Terabyte

Volume 4 - Part 1:

[31%] always, “She's always been dangerous.” ► It should be She’s (different ’ ).
[42%] attack spell cast by Goddess and aimed ► It should be by the.
[50%] “M-Miss Luphas!” ► It should be Lufas. (Or is the name wrong on purpose because of the situation?)
[74%] the Devil King Orm had a goal and was ► It should be The (Capitalized).

KathleenT

@Terabyte Thanks for these! They've been updated.

Terabyte

Volume 4 - Part 2:

[Generic] The topic link that redirects to the forum is still broken after the domain: ...j-novel.clubtopic/... (missing /).
[3%] heretical cults, and their worshippers possibly even ► It should be worshipers (US spelling).
[27%] was the closest geologically. On the other hand, ► It should be geographically?
[30%] a bunch of nobodies Tamers release a bunch of ► It should be who release. (Or maybe releasing?)
[56%] “Naming themselves above Lady Lufas,? Above a ► Remove comma.
[82%] a way to protect her.now. ... First, I should ask ► A couple of issues:
1. Remove extra period. (Or is now. the extra part?)
2. Remove extra space after the 3 periods.

KathleenT

@Terabyte Thanks for pointing all these out! They've been updated. The forum link should also be working now.

Terabyte

Volume 4 - Part 3:

[29%] in height and wielding clubs.. There was also ► Duplicate period.
[53%] I’ll need to get there,grab that girl adventurer, ► Missing space.
[61%] all aspects of a living thing, making it stronger ► I think living being would fit better the context?
[84%] “I’ll help! ‘Light Sword!’ ► The dialogue's closing double quote (after the single quote) is missing.

KathleenT

@Terabyte Thanks so much for these! Typos have been fixed.

Terabyte

Volume 4 - Part 5:

[19%] always be disguised... Healways hid his true form. ► It should be He always (space).
[64%] and was taken along with the area to whatever ► It should be with it / with the arrow?
[69%] Apparently , this place was like a mountain of ► Remove extra space.
[79%] “Um.... Does anyone else hear that?” ► It should be 3 periods.
[85%] in here?!” Gantz sounded like he was panicking ► Missing period.

KathleenT

@Terabyte Thanks for these! They've been update.

Terabyte

Volume 4 - Part 6:

[6%] an unexpectedly calm judgement of the situation. ► It should be judgment (US spelling).
[50%] one of them, “Magic Break”, a skill only available ► Move the comma inside the quotes.
[51%] stopped Sei’s attack and kicked Sei’s jaw as a ► Maybe his jaw to avoid repeating Sei’s?

KathleenT

@Terabyte Thanks for these! They've been updated.

Terabyte

Volume 4 - Part 7:

[91%] No, nevermind. it’d still be impossible. ► It should be It’d (Capitalized).

KathleenT

@Terabyte Thanks for this! It's been updated.

Terabyte

Volume 4 - Part 8:

[75%] having somewhat helped repulsed—Sei and the group ► It should be repulse.

KathleenT

@Terabyte Thanks for this! It's been changed.

Gamen

V4 pt. 10
32% you have the bearing a -> bearing of a
82% Lufas had stopped a blow the dragon, which had returned, threw with all its might with one hand -> I feel like the commas break this up too much; it took me a few rereads to realize it wasn't saying something like "Lufas had stopped a blow from the dragon which had returned, and threw it with all her might with one hand". Also had thrown perhaps? (And do dragons have hands? or paws?)
89% active twenty -four hours a day -> extra space before hyphen.

Terabyte

Volume 4 - Part 10:

[Generic] The author's name Firehead (single word) is wrongly written 2 times as Fire Head in the afterword.
[0%] Then, Aries and and Libra joined in, too, their faces ► Duplicate and.
[32%] He,Phecda, was a halfling. He was employed as a ► Missing space.
[52%] including Alphecca, as they focussed on what they ► It should be focused (US spelling).
[66%] returned his sword to his sheathe before looking ► It should be sheath.
[67%] with possibilities open to them,so much so that ► Missing space.
[74%] the center of the nation any time they pleased. ► It should be it (the dragon; singular).
~~[86%] who was active twenty -four hours a day with ► It should be twenty-four (no space).~~ Already reported.
[90%] —Finally, the four hour mark had passed since ► It should be four-hour (hyphen).

KathleenT

@Gamen & @Terabyte Thanks for pointing these out! Typos should all be fixed and updated now! The section with the dragon fight should be clearer too.

Terabyte

Volume 5 - Part 1:

[87%] and the zombies were the working class. ► It should be ghouls?

KathleenT

@terabyte Thanks for this! It's been changed.