A Wild Last Boss Appeared! - Corrections Topic
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This is the dedicated topic for posting suggested corrections for A Wild Last Boss Appeared!.
Currently in prepublication: Volume 7!
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Volume 4 - Part 1:
- [31%] always, “
She's
always been dangerous.” ► It should be She’s (different ’ ). - [42%] attack spell cast
by
Goddess and aimed ► It should be by the. - [50%] “M-Miss
Luphas
!” ► It should be Lufas. (Or is the name wrong on purpose because of the situation?) - [74%]
the
Devil King Orm had a goal and was ► It should be The (Capitalized).
- [31%] always, “
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Volume 4 - Part 2:
- [Generic] The topic link that redirects to the forum is still broken after the domain:
...j-novel.clubtopic/...
(missing /). - [3%] heretical cults, and their
worshippers
possibly even ► It should be worshipers (US spelling). - [27%] was the closest
geologically
. On the other hand, ► It should be geographically? - [30%] a bunch of nobodies Tamers
release
a bunch of ► It should be who release. (Or maybe releasing?) - [56%] “Naming themselves above Lady
Lufas,?
Above a ► Removecomma
. - [82%] a way to protect
her.
now.... First
, I should ask ► A couple of issues:- Remove extra
period
. (Or isnow.
the extra part?) - Remove extra
space
after the 3 periods.
- Remove extra
- [Generic] The topic link that redirects to the forum is still broken after the domain:
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@Terabyte Thanks for pointing all these out! They've been updated. The forum link should also be working now.
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Volume 4 - Part 3:
- [29%] in height and wielding
clubs..
There was also ► Duplicateperiod
. - [53%] I’ll need to get
there,grab
that girl adventurer, ► Missing space. - [61%] all aspects of a
living thing
, making it stronger ► I think living being would fit better the context? - [84%] “I’ll help! ‘Light
Sword!’
► The dialogue's closing double quote (after the single quote) is missing.
- [29%] in height and wielding
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@Terabyte Thanks so much for these! Typos have been fixed.
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Volume 4 - Part 5:
- [19%] always be disguised...
Healways
hid his true form. ► It should be He always (space). - [64%] and was taken along
with the area
to whatever ► It should be with it / with the arrow? - [69%]
Apparently ,
this place was like a mountain of ► Remove extraspace
. - [79%] “
Um....
Does anyone else hear that?” ► It should be 3 periods. - [85%] in here?!” Gantz sounded like he was
panicking
► Missing period.
- [19%] always be disguised...
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Volume 4 - Part 6:
- [6%] an unexpectedly calm
judgement
of the situation. ► It should be judgment (US spelling). - [50%] one of them,
“Magic Break”,
a skill only available ► Move the comma inside the quotes. - [51%] stopped Sei’s attack and kicked
Sei’s jaw
as a ► Maybe his jaw to avoid repeatingSei’s
?
- [6%] an unexpectedly calm
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Volume 4 - Part 7:
- [91%] No, nevermind.
it’d
still be impossible. ► It should be It’d (Capitalized).
- [91%] No, nevermind.
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Volume 4 - Part 8:
- [75%] having somewhat helped
repulsed
—Sei and the group ► It should be repulse.
- [75%] having somewhat helped
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@Terabyte Thanks for this! It's been changed.
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V4 pt. 10
32% you have the bearing a -> bearing of a
82% Lufas had stopped a blow the dragon, which had returned, threw with all its might with one hand -> I feel like the commas break this up too much; it took me a few rereads to realize it wasn't saying something like "Lufas had stopped a blow from the dragon which had returned, and threw it with all her might with one hand". Also had thrown perhaps? (And do dragons have hands? or paws?)
89% active twenty -four hours a day -> extra space before hyphen. -
Volume 4 - Part 10:
- [Generic] The author's name Firehead (single word) is wrongly written
2 times
asFire Head
in the afterword. - [0%] Then, Aries
and and
Libra joined in, too, their faces ► Duplicateand
. - [32%]
He,Phecda
, was a halfling. He was employed as a ► Missing space. - [52%] including Alphecca, as they
focussed
on what they ► It should be focused (US spelling). - [66%] returned his sword to his
sheathe
before looking ► It should be sheath. - [67%] with possibilities open to
them,so
much so that ► Missing space. - [74%] the center of the nation any time
they
pleased. ► It should be it (the dragon; singular). [86%] who was activeAlready reported.twenty -four
hours a day with ► It should be twenty-four (no space).- [90%] —Finally, the
four hour
mark had passed since ► It should be four-hour (hyphen).
- [Generic] The author's name Firehead (single word) is wrongly written
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Volume 5 - Part 1:
- [87%] and the
zombies
were the working class. ► It should be ghouls?
- [87%] and the
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@terabyte Thanks for this! It's been changed.