A Wild Last Boss Appeared! - Corrections Topic

[lovelight]

This is the dedicated topic for posting suggested corrections for A Wild Last Boss Appeared!.

Currently in prepublication: Volume 4!

[Terabyte]

Volume 4 - Part 1:

• [31%] always, “She's always been dangerous.” ► It should be She’s (different ’ ).
• [42%] attack spell cast by Goddess and aimed ► It should be by the.
• [50%] “M-Miss Luphas!” ► It should be Lufas. (Or is the name wrong on purpose because of the situation?)
• [74%] the Devil King Orm had a goal and was ► It should be The (Capitalized).

[KathleenT]

@Terabyte Thanks for these! They've been updated.

[Terabyte]

Volume 4 - Part 2:

• [Generic] The topic link that redirects to the forum is still broken after the domain: ...j-novel.clubtopic/... (missing /).
• [3%] heretical cults, and their worshippers possibly even ► It should be worshipers (US spelling).
• [27%] was the closest geologically. On the other hand, ► It should be geographically?
• [30%] a bunch of nobodies Tamers release a bunch of ► It should be who release. (Or maybe releasing?)
• [56%] “Naming themselves above Lady Lufas,? Above a ► Remove comma.
• [82%] a way to protect her.now. ... First, I should ask ► A couple of issues:
  1. Remove extra period. (Or is now. the extra part?)
  2. Remove extra space after the 3 periods.

[KathleenT]

@Terabyte Thanks for pointing all these out! They've been updated. The forum link should also be working now.

[Terabyte]

Volume 4 - Part 3:

• [29%] in height and wielding clubs.. There was also ► Duplicate period.
• [53%] I’ll need to get there,grab that girl adventurer, ► Missing space.
• [61%] all aspects of a living thing, making it stronger ► I think living being would fit better the context?
• [84%] “I’ll help! ‘Light Sword!’ ► The dialogue's closing double quote (after the single quote) is missing.

[KathleenT]

@Terabyte Thanks so much for these! Typos have been fixed.

[Terabyte]

Volume 4 - Part 5:

• [19%] always be disguised... Healways hid his true form. ► It should be He always (space).
• [64%] and was taken along with the area to whatever ► It should be with it / with the arrow?
• [69%] Apparently , this place was like a mountain of ► Remove extra space.
• [79%] “Um.... Does anyone else hear that?” ► It should be 3 periods.
• [85%] in here?!” Gantz sounded like he was panicking ► Missing period.

[KathleenT]

@Terabyte Thanks for these! They've been update.

[Terabyte]

Volume 4 - Part 6:

• [6%] an unexpectedly calm judgement of the situation. ► It should be judgment (US spelling).
• [50%] one of them, “Magic Break”, a skill only available ► Move the comma inside the quotes.
• [51%] stopped Sei’s attack and kicked Sei’s jaw as a ► Maybe his jaw to avoid repeating Sei’s?

[KathleenT]

@Terabyte Thanks for these! They've been updated.

[Terabyte]

Volume 4 - Part 7:

• [91%] No, nevermind. it’d still be impossible. ► It should be It’d (Capitalized).

[KathleenT]

@Terabyte Thanks for this! It's been updated.