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    • AnimeMayhem
      AnimeMayhem Premium Member @lovelight last edited by

      The synopsis blurb for Volume 4 and 5 are the same on the series page.

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      • Terabyte
        Terabyte Premium Member last edited by

        Volume 5 - Part 2:

        • [Generic] Lufas's status back in volume 1 was: ・Body: Queen of Heaven’s Dress / ・Status condition nullification / ・HP regeneration / ・Legs: Swift Horse Boots while this part uses ・Body: Heavenly Queen’s Dress / ・Status Ailment Nullification / ・HP Regeneration / ・Legs: Boots of Swiftness instead. The new translation (all Capitalized, too) seems better though, so just a reminder to update volume 1 to be the same if you haven't already. 🙃
        • [64%] That’s not me.That’s Lufas. Oh no. I’m losing ► Missing space.
        • [71%] call, but it was perfect for Us. I believed that you ► It should be us (lowercase).
        • [80%] even under a full moon?!) Benetnasch wiped ► Remove extra ).
        • [86%] ・Right arm:— ► Missing space after the colon. 😋
        • [89%] had made for the world.And that ability was ► Missing space.
        • [91%] 【 LUK (Luck)】: 10282 ► Remove extra space.
        • [91%] ・HP regeneration ► There are two instances of it in Benetnasch's status. Both should be Regeneration (Capitalized) for consistency.
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          KathleenT Editors @Terabyte last edited by

          @terabyte Thanks for these. Typos have been fixed.

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          • Libri Liberorum
            Libri Liberorum Premium Member last edited by

            Part 3, near start:

            ... whomever managed to flaunt common sense the most would decide the battle.

            I think 'flaunt' -> 'flout'.

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            • Terabyte
              Terabyte Premium Member last edited by

              Volume 5 - Part 3:

              • [Generic] The name Benetnasch is written 2 times as Benetnash (missing c).
              • [Generic] On another nome, the name Benetnasch keeps getting constantly repeated (~2/3/4 times) in the same paragraph. Maybe replacing some instances with she/her might make the whole part flow better?
              • [3%] whomever managed to flaunt common sense the most ► It should be flout. Already reported.
              • [11%] easily lost an arm from just a light counterfrom Lufas. ► It should be counter from (space).
              • [20%] ► Part of the text about not being picky on how she won is duplicate. (Or is it duplicate on purpose?)
              At this point, she wasn’t going to be picky about using underhanded or unfair tricks. In the end, winning was everything. Whether it was blinding, deceiving, or ambushing, everything was on the table as long as it was viable. At this point, Benetnasch wasn’t going to be picky about how she won; her opponent wasn’t someone she could afford to care about things like that with while fighting.
              • [30%] especially if I have to lower myself to their puppet in ► It should be to be?
              • [89%] pause as Benetnasch gathered the strength to speak.” ► No dialogue here. Remove the closing double quote.
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                KathleenT Editors @Terabyte last edited by

                @Libri-Liberorum @terabyte Thanks for these! Typos should be updated.

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                  KathleenT Editors @AnimeMayhem last edited by

                  @animemayhem Thanks for pointing this out! Both volumes should have their proper blurbs now.

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                  • Terabyte
                    Terabyte Premium Member last edited by

                    Volume 5 - Part 4:

                    • [39%] known as the Demon King awaygand bust straight ► It should be away and (remove extra g).
                    • [62%] “Okay,” Sagittarius responded,drawing his bow. ► Missing space.
                    • [79%] on a different level,as were his rank, base stats, ► Missing space.
                    • [80%] everyone around him worshipped and obeyed him ► It should be worshiped (US spelling).
                    • [95%] noticed, he was being worshipped by bug people ► It should be worshiped (US spelling).
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                      KathleenT Editors @Terabyte last edited by

                      @terabyte Thanks for pointing these out! Typos have been updated.

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                      • Terabyte
                        Terabyte Premium Member last edited by

                        Volume 5 - Part 5:

                        • [16%] the smoke cleared.Leon charged into Karkinos, ► Missing space.
                        • [38%] hundred years ago.That’s indisputable history. ► Missing space.
                        • [40%] ► The first dialogue implies Sei replied he's fine/alright to Virgo, but there's nothing like that. Either Sei's dialogue should appear first, or a previous one(?) is missing.
                        “Really? You’re not pushing yourself?”
“Y-Yeah, I’m fine. No problems here.”
                        • [42%] that instant, a light tSei and the others couldn’t ► It should be Sei.
                        • [52%] “Um, Mr. Castor... What’s this?” ► The starting double quote alone is in italic format.
                        • [58%] “I wonder....” ► It should be 3 periods.
                        • [89%] do something to give us away?, they wondered. ► Remove the comma?
                        • [99%] a bad feeling about things.But in moments like ► Missing space.
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                          KathleenT Editors @Terabyte last edited by

                          @terabyte Thanks so much for these! They should all be updated now.

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                          • Terabyte
                            Terabyte Premium Member last edited by

                            Volume 5 - Part 6:

                            • [51%] the strongest woman in the world,and tended to make ► Missing space.
                            • [74%] self-confidence and independence,unable to step out ► Missing space.
                            • [89%] of a robot’s eyes from some anime.. They flashed red ► Duplicate period.
                            • [93%] effectively bound together.By following the string, Sei ► Missing space.
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                              KathleenT Editors @Terabyte last edited by

                              @terabyte Thanks for these! They've been updated.

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                              • Terabyte
                                Terabyte Premium Member last edited by

                                Volume 5 - Part 7:

                                • [4%] Castor tried to smile in response,but the next ► Missing space.
                                • [43%] his skin, his expression not even changing.. ► Duplicate period.
                                • [66%] Karkinos’s defence was the highest among all ► It should be defense (US spelling).
                                • [79%] technique had Kross’s draw dropping so far it ► It should be jaw.
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                                  crimilde Member last edited by

                                  Volume 5 - Part 1

                                  [75%] “One clătite”
                                  [87%] “l bought an extra clătite”

                                  Since it’s singular, the correct spelling is clătită. Clătite is the plural form.

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                                  • Terabyte
                                    Terabyte Premium Member last edited by

                                    Volume 5 - Part 8:

                                    • [2%] “Hamal”, one of Aries’s attack skills, was one ► Move the comma inside the quotes.
                                    • [3%] was 200,000 or 100,000,000.Brachium would ► Missing space.
                                    • [28%] casualties Leon wouldcause and the amount ► It should be would cause (space).
                                    • [33%] “You are... Taurus the “Bull.” Why’re you ► Nested double quotes. Use single quotes.
                                    • [39%] web. Then it burst,sounding as if something ► Missing space.
                                    • [41%] Aries’s satisfaction at Tauras’s explanation. ► It should be Taurus’s.
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                                    • Terabyte
                                      Terabyte Premium Member last edited by

                                      Volume 5 - Part 4:

                                      • [39%] Aires was shocked. “Aigokeros?! You...!” ► It should be Aries.

                                      ===

                                      Volume 5 - Part 9:

                                      • [18%] I had pulled him into my ranks on a lark.. ► Duplicate period.
                                      • [27%] thanks to Scorpuis weakening it beforehand. ► It should be Scorpius.
                                      • [41%] known that these humans were massacred?” ► It should be demihumans.
                                      • [63%] “Hmm? Oh, you’re awfully helpful,” ► It should be a period.
                                      • [66%] suddenly pulled out his bow. My arrow can be ► The dialogue's starting double quote is missing.
                                      • [89%] have been rude to Aires and the others who ► It should be Aries.
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                                        KathleenT Editors @Terabyte last edited by

                                        @terabyte Thanks for all of these! Everything's been updated.

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                                          KathleenT Editors @crimilde last edited by

                                          @crimilde Thanks so much for this! It's been updated.

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                                          • pcj
                                            pcj Premium Member last edited by

                                            Volume 5 - Part 2:

                                            • [70%] Her joy at that fact had Benetnasch’s mouths curving upwards >> should be mouth (unless Benet has more than one)
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