Der Werwolf: The Annals of Veight - Corrections Topic
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This is the dedicated topic for posting suggested corrections for Der Werwolf: The Annals of Veight.
Currently in prepublication: Volume 11!
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Volume 11 - Part 1:
- [14%] to Fahn, I said,
” Please
call the three girls in.” ► The dialogue's starting double quote is wrongly aclosing
one. Also, move the space before the quote. - [56%] bothered to come all the way out
the
front lines, ► It should be to the ? - [57%] Neither Pajam nor Veight
was
scared of Zagar. ► It should be were.
- [14%] to Fahn, I said,
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Volume 11 - Part 2:
- [3%] ‘I command thee with my
meagre
will, destroy ► It should be meager (US spelling). - [52%] methods he had.
niacin
was water-soluble, ► It should be Niacin (Capitalized).
- [3%] ‘I command thee with my
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Volume 11 - Part 3:
- [96%] came to an end, I stepped into the
moonlight
► Missing period.
- [96%] came to an end, I stepped into the
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Volume 11 - Part 3:
[19%] "I am certain... The royal physician used diving magic that has been passed down for generations..."► Should this be divining?
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Volume 11 - Part 5:
- [8%] the few that
did have
were infiltrating the ► Removehave
. Or maybe he did have? - [37%] well, I should say
I believe
, since he’s ► It should be he believes. Amani's talking about her father here, not herself. - [38%] “Ah, that’s
true..
” ► Duplicateperiod
. - [50%] “
Here you
, Balkel...or rather, Valkel.” ► It should be Here you go? - [59%] all the way to
Mount.
Kayankaka. Now ► Remove extraperiod
.
- [8%] the few that
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Volume 11 - Part 6:
- [34%] used this exact same method to
trail
people back on Earth. ► It should be trial. - [73%] Zagar understood
now
that any position he might have had in high society was gonenow
. ► Duplicatenow
.
- [34%] used this exact same method to
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Volume 11 - Part 7:
- [32%] Honestly,
though,,
ever since that battle ► Duplicatecomma
. - [75%] as we can and
away seal
their powers.” ► It should be seal away (switch around). - [91%] “
Uhh....
” ► It should be 3 periods.
- [32%] Honestly,
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Volume 11 - Part 7:
- [14%] "You couldn't. It's not worth trying," I said. "Making even a thousand crossbows is a difficult feat... ► New paragraph after I said.
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32% "Honestly though,," double comma
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Volume 11 - Part 8:
- [34%] gave birth to Kuwol’s new prince while you were
gone.
► The dialogue's closing double quote is missing. - [48%] “Umm...Professor?”
Myurie
asked tentatively, looking ► It should be Myurei. - [57%] “Hey there
Myurie
, Ryuunie! Welcome to the sweet ► It should be Myurei.
- [34%] gave birth to Kuwol’s new prince while you were
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Volume 11 - Part 9:
- [Generic] There are
8 paragraphs
that have thestarting double quote
(alone) initalic format
:<p><em>“</em>
. - [10%] to my surprise, Master didn’t seem
phased
at all. ► It should be fazed. - [15%] Airia in the meantime.
”Master
nodded and started ► Missing space. - [50%] “
Mmm...,
I know.” ► Removecomma
? - [83%] hid his presence so well I couldn’t even smell
him.
► The dialogue's closing double quote is missing. - [90%] something similar
to
any other pregnant woman, ► It should be on?
- [Generic] There are
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Volume 11 - Part 10:
- [Generic] There are
3 paragraphs
that have thestarting double quote
(alone) initalic format
:<em>“</em>
. - [18%] Also, I’ll take care of any
’shady dealings’
as well. ► The starting single quote is wrongly aclosing
one. - [36%] by many of the nobles
started
whispering frantically ► It should be starting? - [45%] from this alliance as well.
”Grinning
, Mao ended his ► Missing space.
- [Generic] There are
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Wonder how even Terabyte didn't see it. The daughter of Veight/Airia got once called Freide in there. I think it was around the 30% mark but need to re-read it.
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@saskir "Veight watched Freide play with his finger"; more like 70%
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Vol. 11, part 10:
~48%
“After making sure the nobles had been sufficiently shook, ...” — shaken, perhaps? Or shook up. Or blend the two, and go with shooken. :p
As written, it might still be correct, but it doesn’t sound right to me.
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@Gamen said in Der Werwolf: The Annals of Veight - Corrections Topic:
@saskir "Veight watched Freide play with his finger"; more like 70%
Opps yeah. Was thinking about another error that Terabyte already mentioned.