Der Werwolf: The Annals of Veight - Corrections Topic

lovelight

This is the dedicated topic for posting suggested corrections for Der Werwolf: The Annals of Veight.

Currently in prepublication: Volume 12!

Terabyte

Volume 11 - Part 1:

[14%] to Fahn, I said,” Please call the three girls in.” ► The dialogue's starting double quote is wrongly a closing one. Also, move the space before the quote.
[56%] bothered to come all the way out the front lines, ► It should be to the ?
[57%] Neither Pajam nor Veight was scared of Zagar. ► It should be were.

Terabyte

Volume 11 - Part 2:

[3%] ‘I command thee with my meagre will, destroy ► It should be meager (US spelling).
[52%] methods he had. niacin was water-soluble, ► It should be Niacin (Capitalized).

Terabyte

Volume 11 - Part 3:

[96%] came to an end, I stepped into the moonlight ► Missing period.

Robert Rodriguez

Volume 11 - Part 3:

[19%] "I am certain... The royal physician used diving magic that has been passed down for generations..."► Should this be divining?

Terabyte

Volume 11 - Part 5:

[8%] the few that did have were infiltrating the ► Remove have. Or maybe he did have?
[37%] well, I should say I believe, since he’s ► It should be he believes. Amani's talking about her father here, not herself.
[38%] “Ah, that’s true..” ► Duplicate period.
[50%] “Here you, Balkel...or rather, Valkel.” ► It should be Here you go?
[59%] all the way to Mount. Kayankaka. Now ► Remove extra period.

Terabyte

Volume 11 - Part 6:

[34%] used this exact same method to trail people back on Earth. ► It should be trial.
[73%] Zagar understood now that any position he might have had in high society was gone now. ► Duplicate now.

Terabyte

Volume 11 - Part 7:

[32%] Honestly, though,, ever since that battle ► Duplicate comma.
[75%] as we can and away seal their powers.” ► It should be seal away (switch around).
[91%] “Uhh....” ► It should be 3 periods.

Robert Rodriguez

Volume 11 - Part 7:

[14%] "You couldn't. It's not worth trying," I said. "Making even a thousand crossbows is a difficult feat... ► New paragraph after I said.

xdrfiredogx

32% "Honestly though,," double comma

Terabyte

Volume 11 - Part 8:

[34%] gave birth to Kuwol’s new prince while you were gone. ► The dialogue's closing double quote is missing.
[48%] “Umm...Professor?” Myurie asked tentatively, looking ► It should be Myurei.
[57%] “Hey there Myurie, Ryuunie! Welcome to the sweet ► It should be Myurei.

Terabyte

Volume 11 - Part 9:

[Generic] There are 8 paragraphs that have the starting double quote (alone) in italic format: “.
[10%] to my surprise, Master didn’t seem phased at all. ► It should be fazed.
[15%] Airia in the meantime.”Master nodded and started ► Missing space.
[50%] “Mmm..., I know.” ► Remove comma?
[83%] hid his presence so well I couldn’t even smell him. ► The dialogue's closing double quote is missing.
[90%] something similar to any other pregnant woman, ► It should be on?

Terabyte

Volume 11 - Part 10:

[Generic] There are 3 paragraphs that have the starting double quote (alone) in italic format: “.
[18%] Also, I’ll take care of any ’shady dealings’ as well. ► The starting single quote is wrongly a closing one.
[36%] by many of the nobles started whispering frantically ► It should be starting?
[45%] from this alliance as well.”Grinning, Mao ended his ► Missing space.

saskir

Wonder how even Terabyte didn't see it. The daughter of Veight/Airia got once called Freide in there. I think it was around the 30% mark but need to re-read it.

Gamen

@saskir "Veight watched Freide play with his finger"; more like 70%

Ingraman

Vol. 11, part 10:

~48%

“After making sure the nobles had been sufficiently shook, ...” — shaken, perhaps? Or shook up. Or blend the two, and go with shooken. :p

As written, it might still be correct, but it doesn’t sound right to me.

saskir

@Gamen said in Der Werwolf: The Annals of Veight - Corrections Topic:

@saskir "Veight watched Freide play with his finger"; more like 70%

Opps yeah. Was thinking about another error that Terabyte already mentioned.

saskir

In the Premium Edition of Volume 11 said the signature of the Demon Lord Friendensrichter. Should be Friedensrichter

Weasalopes

@terabyte said in Der Werwolf: The Annals of Veight - Corrections Topic:

Volume 11 - Part 1:

[14%] to Fahn, I said,” Please call the three girls in.” ► The dialogue's starting double quote is wrongly a closing one. Also, move the space before the quote.

Still reads: to Fahn, I said," Please call the three girls in."
It's still a closing double curly quote, and it's still out of position.

to Fahn, I said, "Please call the three girls in."

is how it should read.

Weasalopes

Volume 11, Part 10 40%

A space is lacking.

Currently:
we need to gain from this alliance as well."Grinning, Mao ended his speech there.

Should be:
we need to gain from this alliance as well." Grinning, Mao ended his speech there.