Der Werwolf: The Annals of Veight - Corrections Topic

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This is the dedicated topic for posting suggested corrections for Der Werwolf: The Annals of Veight.

Currently in prepublication: Volume 11!

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Volume 11 - Part 1:

[14%] to Fahn, I said,” Please call the three girls in.” ► The dialogue's starting double quote is wrongly a closing one. Also, move the space before the quote.
[56%] bothered to come all the way out the front lines, ► It should be to the ?
[57%] Neither Pajam nor Veight was scared of Zagar. ► It should be were.

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Volume 11 - Part 2:

[3%] ‘I command thee with my meagre will, destroy ► It should be meager (US spelling).
[52%] methods he had. niacin was water-soluble, ► It should be Niacin (Capitalized).

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Volume 11 - Part 3:

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Volume 11 - Part 3:

[19%] "I am certain... The royal physician used diving magic that has been passed down for generations..."► Should this be divining?