Lazy Dungeon Master - Corrections Topic
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14.9
seeing what lied ahead made Aidy want to jump forward.
“lay”
Ah, what a lovely Vampire, that so bewitchingly entices me to murder her.
“who so bewitchingly”
Aidy’s disappointment flipped right into souring excitement.
Did you mean “soaring”?
doing so was a traditional greeting in Keima’s work.
“world.”
little reason to send a Core about before the Master.”
“out”
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How could a boob man like me miss the reference to Aidy's
hest
at about 46%?
chestOh, and another missing letter at 75%:
pull anyricks
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tricks -
@someoldguy @Iseguy Forgive the way late fixing on these, but fixed! :)
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Volume 14, Part 10:
- 8%: "Yes, sir! I am hon...honored...what? Avacation?" - Should be "A vacation".
- 8%: "And so began Aidy's reward vacation." - Should be "Rei's".
- 16%: "So, Nerune, what do you think? - Should be "Neruneh".
- 40%: "I have used his services when my hips began to hurt." - Should be "her".
- 56%: "Nikusteeled her resolve." - Should be "Niku steeled".
- 54%: "If it were a small one that didn't hurt, enough casts of {Purification} to peel off the blank junk and a couple of potions or Restoration spells would fix it." - Should be "black".
- 80%: "Rei the Holy Priestess was curing someone's cavity." - Should be "High".
- 80%: "(and the pop, incidentally.) - Should be "Pope".
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@cosmicspear Thank you, I've fixed these! :)
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11%: what?(already reported)Avacation? -> A vacation
17%: She could work on her vacations(already reported)evermore blatantly -> even
23%: one they had borrowed when Keima and theauthorswent to the imperial capital -> others
63%:(already reported)Nikusteeledher resolve -> Niku steeled
80%: (and thepop, incidentally.) -> "pope" and the period should be outside the parenthesis, I think.
86%: Excuse me,Spana-sensei-> Supana-sensei -
@vorthod Thank you, fixed! :)
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@kittytama I noticed another instance of "Spana" at the end of the afterward (when they sign off at the very end). Don't know if that got caught too since it doesn't look like the app has picked up your changes yet.
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@vorthod I did correct it, though it may take a bit to show. ^^;
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About 55%, Rei
welled up
in the onsen. Maybe holed up? -
@someoldguy I agree, I think that sounds better. Fixed!
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Volume 14 - Part 10:
- [6%] Nah, the
Otto family
in town should be better. They just ► Is this a new/random name or a reference to a past character? While I do recall a wedding I don't remember anyone with that name. - [11%] were high, weren’t they? Like,
um,I
just kind of did it.” ► Missing space. - [28%] No doubt it was for
self-defence
, but it was still flagrant ► It should be self-defense (US spelling). - [42%] left me in the dust
‘cause
they can get massages from ► It should be ’cause (different ’ ). - [52%] “Ngh
, You’ve
left me no choice... Oyasuminasai!” Rei ► Either period or you’ve (lowercase). - [73%] “This world has licenses and
stuff..
?” Master thought ► It should be 3 periods. - [93%] going on a rampage after getting taken
oven
drew from ► It should be over.
- [6%] Nah, the
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@terabyte Thank you, I've applied these! Also, yeah, that's a new/random name introduced.
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Volume 14 - Part 5:
- [27%] "Nyahahahaha! The trap's nothing if you just run by the needles before
the
close. Eaaaasy!" ► Should be they - [55%] I don't have anyone to compare myself to, so I'm not even sure how much 34
DP
is, ► Should be GP - [73%] She hadn't seen Aidy at the feast since she had dragged Neruneh away
from
questioning, ► Should this be for?
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Volume 14 - Part 6:
- [25%] Rei was staring at me silently,
clearing
trying to convey she wanted to see Succuma too, but nope. ► Should be clearly - [50%] I came here to check
up my
esteemed visitor, but... ► Add on?
1. '"... I came here to check up on my esteemed visitor, but..."'
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Volume 14 - Part 7:
- [50%] All I could say was, I felt bad for the members of the
Blood
Kraken. ► Should be Bloody
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Volume 14 - Part 8:
- [17%] I had thought there would be a few in the second and third floors
, the labyrinth,
► Consider brackets, two floors but only one description, also using labyrinth and dungeon are often interchangeable (not this novel), so adds more confusion - I had to read it a few times to get it anyway...
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Volume 14 - Part 9:
- [0%] Only three weeks had passed since they returned
from Demon
Realm, and she had already ► Add the
1. 'Only three weeks had passed since they returned from the Demon Realm, and she had already' - [80%] Naturally, a lot of credit went to Niku, Ichika, Kinue, and
Elca's
many copies, ► Should be Elka's - [90%] I could just put her in {Storage} and
used
the [Ivory Beach] to get to ► Should be use
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Volume 14 - Part 10:
- [46%] He had just shown a perfect
master
of the multiplication table, ► Should be mastery
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- [27%] "Nyahahahaha! The trap's nothing if you just run by the needles before
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Volume 15, Part 1:
- 53%: "whom Dolce said she ignored because they weren't assassins," - Should be "an assassin".
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@cosmicspear Whoops, you're right. Fixed...!
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V15P1 21%,
As Rokuko walkeddown
Goren
around or possibly down the road in -
32%,
debutante
is used withoutball
. Maiodore would be a debutante, making her debut at her debutante ball. -
@someoldguy Thanks! Tweaked it a bit.
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@someoldguy Whoops, good catch there; added ball.