Reborn to Master the Blade: From Hero-King to Extraordinary Squire - Corrections Topic

Terabyte

Volume 2 - Part 8:

[6%] Leone became flustered, Rin nested at her neckline. ► It should be in?
[27%] have had the chance to fight if you had been here.” ► It should be there?
[52%] magicite beast’s chest with unrivalled accuracy, ► It should be unrivaled (US spelling).
[53%] I can tell she’s getting even better,” Ripple said. ► Based on the context/flow this should probably be Rafinha or Eris?

Terabyte

Volume 2 - Part 9:

[29%] the people caught up this mess, not the food! ► It should be in this.
[89%] that balance collapses,” Theodore explained. ► It should be collapsed?
[95%] This might be vermin. The kind of vermin I have ► It should be a vermin.

Iseguy

2.9

If she fired Aether Strike, there was no way to stop the creature from falling on the table.

“Aether Pierce”

Vorthod

2.9:
61%: And if she used ~~Aether Pierce~~, she could we blow half the palace away. -> Aether Strike

Terabyte

Volume 2 - Part 10:

[60%] “That’s the part you focus on? ► The dialogue's closing double quote is missing.

Terabyte

Volume 3 - Part 1:

[10%] Ray and Ban were young nobles themselves. ► Usually it's always Ban and Ray (switched around). Just a minor consistency nitpick. 😋
[52%] “Heh heh.... Don’t have the guts to face me, ► It should be 3 periods.
[93%] and she’s still like this.” By the way, I’m Morris. ► The dialogue continues. Remove the extra closing double quote in the middle.

pcj

@terabyte said in Reborn to Master the Blade: From Hero-King to Extraordinary Squire - Corrections Topic:

[10%] Ray and Ban were young nobles themselves. ► Usually it's always Ban and Ray (switched around). Just a minor consistency nitpick. 😋

so the TL accidentally referenced the sunglasses? :-p

Ingraman

@pcj said in Reborn to Master the Blade: From Hero-King to Extraordinary Squire - Corrections Topic:

@terabyte said in Reborn to Master the Blade: From Hero-King to Extraordinary Squire - Corrections Topic:

[10%] Ray and Ban were young nobles themselves. ► Usually it's always Ban and Ray (switched around). Just a minor consistency nitpick. 😋

so the TL accidentally referenced the sunglasses? :-p

Will we soon be seeing Jim and Maui? ;)

Terabyte

Volume 3 - Part 2:

[3%] while acting as her body guards, the students still had to ► It should be bodyguards (no space).
[13%] why she so frequently slam full-speed into a thoughtfully ► It should be slammed?
[18%] “W-Well...,” Liselotte said, taking a moment to figure ► Remove comma.
[39%] “Ugh... Grrr... It feels different from what I’m used to...! ► The dialogue's closing double quote is missing.

Iseguy

3.2

That was why she so frequently slam full-speed

“would so frequently” or “so frequently slammed”.

Iseguy

2.9

Dredging up something you've tried to correct twice, but

If she fired Aether Pierce, there was no way to stop the creature from falling on the table. And if she used Aether Pierce, she could well blow half the palace away.

“If she fired Aether Pierce, there was no way to stop the creature from falling on the table, and if she used Aether Strike, she could well blow half the palace away.

Terabyte

Volume 3 - Part 4:

[86%] “O-Okay! ► The dialogue's closing double quote is missing.

Elleya

2:4

Leone received the swords of the Two knights slashed from either side, and she blocked their swords [...]

No idea what this should be but it's wrong - maybe 2 sentences mixed up.

2:8
This one might be a bit far fetched but it sounds extremely weird

Rafinha asked, turning her gaze upward.
Leone looked up too. "Yes. What a shock." Rafinha and Leone also looked up at the sky.

Is that supposed to be those two names there?

3:3
This one is hard to see due to the font etc, but I believe there is a space missing.

[...] I'd like a bit more time to find alternatives-"A rapid [...]

3:4

However, the Flygear Port's itself needed to be powered with mana [...]

Flygear Ports themselves or Flygear Port itself imo

Highland had not yet approved large flying ships besides Flygear Ports to be given the surface, so [...]

be given to the surface imo

However, it'd be unfortunate for the forces of both *countries whittle each other down while she wasn't present;

Should be countries to whittle imo.

Terabyte

Volume 3 - Part 5:

[14%] The way he’s treated Inglis and Yua make me ► It should be makes.
[63%] “Hmmm....” Reddas appeared to be swayed. ► It should be 3 periods.
[92%] that would be unthinkable... ” Miriela said, ► Remove extra space.
[99%] “Vef!” ► It should be “Vef! (Yes!)” for consistency?

pcj

Volume 3 - Part 5

[83%] but other Highlands won’t do the same! >> should be Highlanders?

Terabyte

Volume 3 - Part 6:

[10%] she couldn’t idly sit by if Leon ► It should be sit idly by (switch around).
[22%] “Yo, Long time no see, Leone.” ► It should be either a period or long (lowercase).
[80%] “Ah, Silva?” Inglis said ► Missing period.

Iseguy

3.6

a gigantic crow ~~was~~ clawed and pecked at the roof

“crow clawed and pecked”

Ellyonia

Volume 3 - Part 7:

[6%] ... black mask, Sistia, and Leone suggest that the trio ► It should be Leon (Leone is referenced in the beginning, where Leon is in the suspicious Trio).

Terabyte

Volume 3 - Part 7:

[3%] Vrrrm.... Vrrrm... ► It should be 3 periods.
~~[6%] the black mask, Sistia, and Leone suggested ► It should be Leon (the brother, not the sister).~~ Already reported.
[10%] “Ah, His Majesty makes his entrance! ► The dialogue's closing double quote is missing.
[15%] “It's an honor to meet him!” ► It should be It’s (different ’ ).
[70%] “Now, go ahead. please remove my arm.” ► It should be Please (Capitalized).
[81%] Vrrrm.... Vrrrm... Vrrrm... ► It should be 3 periods.
[94%] I’d expect from an archlord of Highland?” ► It should be Archlord (Capitalized).

SomeOldGuy

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