Guide to the Perfect Otaku Girlfriend - Corrections Topic

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This is the dedicated topic for posting suggested corrections for Guide to the Perfect Otaku Girlfriend: Roomies and Romance!

Currently in prepublication: Volume 1!

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Volume 1 - Part 1:

[18%] the “Otaku Meetup & Matchmaking Party”. My reason ► Move the period inside the quotes.
[22%] about the “Otaku Meetup & Matchmaking Party”. ► Move the period inside the quotes.
[35%] She'd stood out from the very first day of school. ► It should be She’d (different ’ ).
[63%] to “literally translate your name into English”. ► Move the period inside the quotes.

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Volume 1 - Part 2:

[95%] IMS, short for “IdolMaster Station”, was a gacha ► Move the comma inside the quotes.
[98%] YS—what did it stand for? ‘Yumeno☆Saki’, was it?” ► Move the comma inside the quotes.

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Volume 1 - Part 3:

[15%] and hotpants that showed off her pale thighs.. ► Duplicate period.
[20%] floral scent of her shampoo. it was more than ► Either comma or It (Capitalized)?
[22%] It took every fibre of my being to keep myself ► It should be fiber (US spelling).
[76%] “It’s called ‘PopKing’. It’s the anime that boys ► Move the period inside the quotes.

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Volume 1 - Part 4:

[0%] Takeshi, literally meant “fierce”, but he looked, ► Move the comma inside the quotes.
[11%] cosplay. He was what people called a “crossplayer”. ► Move the period inside the quotes.
[31%] “Yeah! It was great! I replied, finally noticing ► The dialogue's closing double quote is missing.
[48%] on an app I’d never heard of: “SNOW”. Kokoro ► Move the period inside the quotes.
[72%] Now this looks delicious! And it’s full of meat! ► Remove the italic format from the starting t of this.
[78%] “RIP headphone users”, “Emily? More like Screamily”, “A lady of fine yuri taste indeed”, ► Move all 3 commas inside the quotes.
[80%] even meet a boy like that! That’s total garbage!” ► Remove the closing double quote. Kokoro's dialogue continues in the next paragraph.
[99%] the incoming call from “Up-Load”. That was the ► Move the period inside the quotes.