Perry Rhodan NEO - Corrections Topic
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This is the dedicated topic for posting suggested corrections for Perry Rhodan NEO.
Currently in prepublication: Volume 6!
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Volume 1 - Parts 6:
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Flippedswallowed and was about to reply, >> should be Flipper.
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Volume 1, Part 7, 74%:
That lecture is supposed to have happened two days BEFORE the Stardust landed in the Gobi desert, yet the professor is talking about what happened in the Gobi desert. At this point nothing should have happened there yet... -
@mirage_gsm I suspect that's exactly why the secret service is after him. They want to know how he knew about it before it happened.
Volume 1 - Part 7:
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Witha doubt, he was one of those cases where Homeland Security would have shown no mercy. >> should be Without
Volume 1 - Part 8:
- [47%] He did not exchange a single word with the high-ranking people on
sight; >> should be site
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@pcj said in Perry Rhodan NEO - Corrections Topic:
@mirage_gsm I suspect that's exactly why the secret service is after him. They want to know how he knew about it before it happened.
I doubt that. Even if he had a precognitive ability, it would make no sense for him to mention it like that in one of his lessons.
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At the beginning of part 3, a part of chapter 7 is missing. Can this missing text be added?
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@zodiacm Thank you for catching that! Something must have gone wrong when it was transferred to the prepub format. I've gone in and added the missing portion myself.
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@reesen Thanks for the speedy repair-job! And I just want to say thanks for the great translation. As a long-time dutch Perry Rhodan fan it’s great to be able to read the Neo-series!
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Mercant was called Mercenary in Part 10 heh.
Part 11: “The whole nation is relying on
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Volume 3, Part 7, 42%:
"The Russian, who had destroyed the returning Stardust with a bomb,..."
Probably "tried to destroy", because he didn't do it in the end. -
Volume 3 Part 5: 14%
sobbed so loudly that SId was sure->Sid.
Volume 3 Part 5: 31%You've sharp Jian-Dong->You're.
Volume 3 Part 7: 29%with his sleeve and looked at the intricate .Intricate what? Model?
Volume 3 Part 7: 90%Tha hail became weaker and then...->The hail became weaker and then...
Volume 3 Part 7: 95%There was only one thing to dot.->There was only one thing to do.
Volume 3 Part 8: 17%An Erthly virus may have...->An Earthly virus may have...
Volume 3 Part 8: 18%Even more than that, Marshall;thought...->Even more than that, Marshall thought...
Volume 3 Part 8: 55%he then checked his watch->He then checked his watch
Volume 3 Part 8: 79%You almost get the feeling tit can read your thoughts.->You almost get the feeling it can read your thoughts.
Volume 3 Part 9: 07%...door using a checking card,and had no more...->...door using a checking card, and had no more...
Volume 3 Part 10: 03%IT opened and a small...->It opened and a small...
Volume 3 Part 10: 05%Yes, thank you!"->"Yes, thank you!"
Volume 3 Part 12: 13%looked like glass but was made of energy.->looked like glass, but was made of energy.
Volume 3 Part 12: 33%come to appreciate over the last few daysdays.->come to appreciate over the last few days.Volume 3 Part 10: 05%
"But?"In the year..."->"But?" In the year...
Volume 3 Part 10: 48%"So hat's the problem?"->"So what's the problem?"
Volume 3 Part 11: 45%heard the words "crazy" and "freaky--and then...->heart the words "crazy" and "freaky"--and then...
Volume 3 Part 11: 82%He had not managed to do what he'dwanted to.->He had not managed to do what he'd wanted to. -
Volume 5, part10, 33%:
600 km per hour is not a rate of acceleration but a velocity/speed.Also, I forgot to comment on that, but back in part six (56%) it says that the Good Hope accelerated to just below the speed of light "within half a second", which if true means that ship maneuverability is increased by several orders of magnitude compared to the original series where the ship had a rate of acceleration of 500km/s², at which rate it would take more than 10 minutes to reach relativistic speeds.
It is possible that this is an error in the original, but if true it would render almost all space battles infeasible:
If an antique ship like the Good Hope is capable of such accelerations, that would mean that all modern ships in the series henceforth also are. -
Volume 6 part 1, cahpter 2 (75%):
"Perhaps that would be the last time she ever saw her face."
Since this is from Tako's perspective it should be "he"88%:
"Breath evenly."
->BreathePart 2, 0%:
"He sweat and drank,..."
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Volume 6 part 9:
"Qué bueno," Caroline said...
"I'm Bernhard Frank," her father added in German.Is it intentional that the lines where someone speaks Spanish are left in Spanish, but the lines where someone speaks German have been translated to English?
