Otherside Picnic - Corrections Topic
This is the dedicated topic for posting suggested corrections for Otherside Picnic.
Currently in prepublication: Volume 6!
HarunaChieP last edited by HarunaChieP
Previous volumes used DS Lab whenever Sorawo talks about the place via her monologues as well as everyone else who works for the place but Volume 5 translation started using DS Research instead, so what happened here?
@harunachiep It's short for DS Research Encouragement Association, so... basically, I fixed a mistake I'd been carrying for a few volumes. The e-books should be updated, and I believe I got it in for the omnibus, too.
@sean-mccann Ah yeah, can't say the same for the first omnibus though since that one had DS Labs (maybe a reprint in the future?) but I guess you're referring to the second omnibus at this point?
But thank you for clarifying as always :D
@sean-mccann I think it makes sense to refer to the building as “DS lab” and the organization as “DS Research”. Otherwise you get unwieldy descriptions like “the DS Research facility” which don't do anybody any good.
I shook my head.“Do the memories come back
68%: “hibiscus petals were scatter over top of their white blankets” - over the top? Or is this one of those American things like “come with” or “in back”?
being close and actually dating/.. - actually dating?..
I didn't really like the taste., Kozakura commented. - like the taste," Kozakura commented.
V5P3, 48%: “Ninja Casts” - Cats.
honey in Bali
“The Balinese bees?” for the rhyme.
on to deserts
like the taste.,
[like the taste,”]
foreign beer everyday
“every day” (“everyday” is an adjective.)
Would this be considered a correction
For Part 5 prepub, there's a part where the weird text Sorawo was talking about is not seen (even as an image file) vs the Japanese publication. So, I'm not sure what happened there
Under spoiler tag as images may be too big
@harunachiep I'll poke someone about getting those added. By the way, try reading the unfamiliar words upside down.
@harunachiep Sorry about this, it's been fixed in the part now!
Volume 5 - Part 5:
- [26%] “There’s other
cafeteria’s, right? >> should be cafeterias (no apostrophe)
- [26%] “There’s other
Part 5, image under spoiler
Someone else pointed this out for me but the part with "second month of her first year in the university". Unless something changed, doesn't the school year in Japan usually start in April?
But counting backwards from May, it would actually give us February, so maybe this needs to be checked?
@harunachiep Ah, "the second month" should be February there. I'll get that fixed.
Part 6 55%
like a dear, maybe - like a deer
coming in from outside to interrupt up.
on a concrete floor,with creepy movements
P6, nr 80%: they “started up” the AP1 twice on one page. I think of starting a vehicle as igniting the engine so the second is more like starting off [in].
Hi, i think the brackets in the frist sentence from chapter 4 (from part 8) seems off. Thanks for the work!