Min-Maxing My TRPG Build - Corrections Topic
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77% - "...the bewitching pelt that binded him." -> bound
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Also query correction (?):
In volume 1 update the last chapter is titled "One Full Henderson ver0.1"
In volume 2 part 10 the last chapter is titled "1.0 Hendersons ver0.2"
Is the difference in style of titling intentional or does one or the other need to be adjusted for consistency? -
In the published ebooks (both volumes 1 and 2), the Henderson 0.1 chapters are called "Henderson Scale 0.1" in the ebook's navigable table of contents and in the titles of the chapters themselves, but in the table of contents images they are called "0.1 Hendersons".
In volume 2, the table of contents image has an entry for "Postface" but this does not appear in the navigable table of contents.
In volume 2, the navigable table of contents entry for "One Full Henderson Ver0.2" navigates to the start of the chapter text rather than the chapter header image like the equivalent entry does in volume 1.
(Deepest apologies for the nitpicking)
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Thank you
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Hopefully resurrecring this thread isn't going to bite me in the ass, but I kept forgetting to ask this question, and this thread seemed to be the only viable place...
"The Palatial tongue"
Is it Palatial from "Palace", meaning that it's a "court dialect"
Or Palatial from "Pallette", meaning the roof of the mouth?Both technically fit, but the reason I'm asking is pronunciation:
When I read, my inside voice is really, really loud, and this word just feels like sticking a stick in my own bike wheel.In the first example, the "tia" would be closer to a "sha" sound(think like in "action").
While in the second example, the T maintains the pronunciation(Like in the word "History"). -
vol 2, part 3, 48%
Both mistarille and mystarille is used.No, I won't be emailing anyone.
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V3, P1, 25%: “risk stroke in the summer” - heatstroke
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V3P1 17%
After I had firmly refuted her ...
refuted -> refused.
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An analog version of the RPG format ...
Pedantic mode ON:
"Analog" means using continuous variables, such as volume, speed, amount of rotation of an axle, etc. The opposite is "discrete", where everything is measured in integers or is selected from a finite number of possibilities. Every TRPG I've ever met is discrete, not analog. It would be quite challenging to design and play a truly analog TRPG.
Pedantic mode OFF:
But we all know what is meant here, so whatever.
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@libri-liberorum The "not digital" definition of analog shows up in Merriam Webster, definition 1D, so I wouldn't say this is any kind of mistake.
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V3P2
Trialis -> Trialist
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Volume 3 - Part 2:
[26%] As the pillar of theAlready reported.TrialisEmpire’s grip on magic, swaths ► It should be Trialist.- [99%] Thoughts of every kind
bounced slammedinto one another ► It should be bounced / slammed / bounced and slammed / bounced slamming?
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V3P2, 16%: "the like colors" - similar? Light?
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Is it my imagination or did we skip a chapter or two?
We went from the first greeting the Dean to... days later Eric being called the Dean's toy and talk about a "fashion show" the week before?
(I read the webnovel via GT, and remember "something" happening before this. I have no knowledge if the LN is different though)
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@zehd It's not your imagination. I have read the light novels in Japanese, and half the first chapter was skipped. Possibly two parts worth, depending on the pacing.
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Yeah, I feel there's some missing content, too. 👀
EDIT: And there we go. Just as I went and checked the discussion topic now, the right part has been uploaded ~15 minutes ago.
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Volume 3 - Part 3 (?):
[Note] Is part 3 actually part 4 (or 5) perhaps? With how part 2 ended the start of this part is an abrupt change. Just as an example it mentions Erich is the school’s dean pet and model but part 2 ended with their first encounter.It's been fixed.
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48% - hard at work in the fields
might be "field" instead unless her work involved actual fields
62% - the most bourgeois place
the term bourgeois has middle class mercantile/capitalist and professional class implications (i.e. the bourgeoisie as opposed to the aristocracy) that seems to clash with the nature of the store that would turn down the noveau riche and only serve true old money landed nobility
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Volume 3 - Part 3:
- [54%] I
couldn'tcatch a break. I was here to ► It should be couldn’t (different ’ ).
- [54%] I
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@terabyte - I saw that too. I thought 'ricochet' might be a good replacement for bounce-slam, but the next line with boobies kinda needs the call back to the word 'bounced'.
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Volume 3 - Part 4:
- [%] I’d activated one
labelledfor passage to ► It should be labeled (US spelling).
- [%] I’d activated one
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Volume 3 - Part 5:
- [8%] the smell of a
smoulderingstove. Breakfast was ► It should be smoldering (US spelling).
- [8%] the smell of a
