A Late-Start Tamer's Laid-Back Life - Corrections Topic

myskaros

This is the dedicated topic for posting suggested corrections for A Late-Start Tamer's Laid-Back Life.

Currently in prepublication: Volume 4!

Terabyte

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Volume 1 - Part 1:

[16%] with your tamed monsters at your side ► Missing period.
[34%] look who decided to call us. Hi, Yuta..” ► Duplicate period.
[39%] Actually, the two weeks weren't that long, ► It should be weren’t (different ’ ).
[92%] in the nearby starting areas . I was a bit ► Remove extra space.

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Volume 1 - Part 2:

[32%] bother to confirm Olto's combat strength, ► It should be Olto’s (different ’ ).
[40%] the avatar which I’d spend so much time ► It should be spent.

Laiska

@terabyte Fixed, thanks a bunch!

Terabyte

Volume 1 - Part 3:

[17%] ► Both 62 & 63 should be Re: 60 since it's 60: Eulenspiegel who's gonna look into it.

62: Ivan
Re: 56
Looking forward to your report. Not that I intend on helping though haha.

63: Ursula
Re: 56
Do give us an update. And I won’t be helping either XD

[32%] the bushes was a poisonous-looking purple plant . ► Remove extra space.
[45%] I ran in a zigzag to throw it off the scent, keeping ► Maybe with the scent?
[80%] item, but a level-up, too!. Could this be my lucky ► Duplicate punctuation.
[81%] without a cord, after all.The wind roared in my ears, ► Missing space.
[91%] players who completely emptying their bowels and ► It should be emptied.
[92%] such accidents from occuring. Regular enforced ► It should be occurring.

Laiska

@terabyte Thanks! Curiously, the apparent error with the post labels (56 vs 60) is actually like that in the original, so we'll have to consult about that.

Terabyte

@laiska said in Late-Start Tamer - Corrections Topic:

@terabyte Thanks! Curiously, the apparent error with the post labels (56 vs 60) is actually like that in the original, so we'll have to consult about that.

Interesting. Chapter 5 of the WN properly uses 60 instead:

62：イワン
>>60
期待してる。手伝わないけどww

63：ウルスラ
>>60
ぜひ続報を。手伝わないけどww

There must have been some kind of error when the content was ported over for the LN. Maybe they removed some messages at first but then re-added them and forgot to update the post ID for the quote?

Laiska

@terabyte Huh, incredibly possible. Thanks for the crosscheck!

GeorgeMTO

V1P4
37% beginner level quests hand landed me
Had, not hand

Terabyte

Volume 1 - Part 4:

[20%] “Phew, I’m really racking ‘em up here. Hm? Hang on...” ► It should be ’em (different ’ ).
[20%] suddenly occurred to me.“Crap! I haven’t completed that ► Missing space.
~~[37%] the beginner-level quests hand landed me in life-or-death ► It should be hand.~~ Already reported.
[74%] There’s something different about you.. I don’t see your ► Duplicate period.
[84%] I assumed this news ought to be at least slightly rare ► Missing period.

KBaggy

Volume 1 - Part 4

[7%] "In order to make poison and paralyzing potions, I needed three poison hemlock and three paralyzing plants each, which was unfortunately less than what I currently had." -> should be more.

Laiska

@GeorgeMTO @Terabyte @KBaggy
Thanks!

Shiroi Hane

V1,P5, 49%: “Rarity: 2Quality: 4★Durability: 100” - missing hyphens between stats (for the Blue Robin Robe; the Silver Robe a little further down has them)

Laiska

@shiroi-hane
Got 'em, thanks!

Terabyte

Volume 1 - Part 5:

[45%] a rearguard, yeah?. Let’s see, how 'bout this one? ► A couple of issues:
1. Remove extra period.
2. It should be ’bout (different ’ ).
[50%] “No can do. Iron is heavy, It’d bump the weight up ► It should be either a period or it’d (lowercase).
[76%] dissatisfaction on his face.. Hang in there, buddy, I’ll ► Duplicate period.

Terabyte

Volume 1 - Part 6:

[24%] ”How did you learn about my secret?” I asked. ► The dialogue's starting double quote is a closing one.
[36%] making the GM call,” I told her Abruptly, she ► Missing period.
[82%] the impression of business person, one who was ► It should be a business.

Laiska

@terabyte
Sharp eye as always! Got both, thanks o/

frosted flaker

Volume 1 - Part 1

[20%]

“Full-dive VR games, by the way….” Rest of the volume uses full dive unhyphenated
“since LJO used full-dive VR technology, a new interface” same comment as above

Shiroi Hane

P1V8, 15%: “this stuff was 500 Ga pop” -presumably “500G a pop”
17%: “t gave the user more HP” - It

Terabyte

Volume 1 - Part 8:

~~[14%] but normally, this stuff was 500 Ga pop —hardly ► It should be 500G a pop (move the space).~~ Already reported.
~~[23%] off the excess water? t gave the user more HP, ► It should be It.~~ Already reported.
[36%] sunny areas sprouted tall.Even the walls had ► Missing space.
[70%] Poison, and Hemorrhaging Potions—. They were ► Remove the dash?
[84%] looking at me strangely , I couldn’t help but grin. ► Remove extra space.

thefirstpunicwar

V1P9

12% - selling weeds. . Who knew ► Remove the extra space and period after the first period.
19% - so I tend to keep 'em in stock.. ► Remove extra period.