Hell Mode - Corrections Topic
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This is the dedicated topic for posting suggested corrections for Hell Mode.
Currently in prepublication: Volume 4!
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Volume 1 - Part 1:
- [5%] as he read the despair-inducing text that
appeared..
► Duplicateperiod
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Volume 1 - Part 2:
- [31%] “He’o. My
name ’s
A’en.” ► It should be name’s (nospace
). Or is it on purpose? - [42%] ► The Holder has 2 insects (Endurance +2; Agility +2) and 8 beasts (HP +8; Attack +8). Mousey's status around 3% lists
Endurance 1, Attack 1
as buffs though rather than HP 1, Attack 1.
HP: 4 (40) + 8 MP: 0 (20) Attack: 1 (10) + 8 Endurance: 1 (10) + 2 Agility: 2 (25) + 2
- [56%]
“
Wait, is that it? Even my max MP isn’t enough. Um, ► This is a thought. Remove extrastarting double quote
. - [67%] Creation {2}, Synthesis {1},
Enlargement
{1}, Deletion ► It should be Expansion.
- [5%] as he read the despair-inducing text that
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Part 3:
Number of Throws Made (Cumulative)
10,000
0,000
120,000Assume all the rest of the text not copied is good.
What's with the 2nd line? Based upon further reading, it should be 10,000 (Edit: oops, 20,000 as pointed out below!)Effects of Leveling Up
orrects the body's posture
Increases the damage dealtAgain, the first character of a line is missing.
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Volume 1 - Part 3:
- [14%] had both heard from
Greda
that Krena was ► It should be Gerda. - [14%] to their place every day instead of
Allen..
► Duplicateperiod
. - [17%]
0,000
times → Lvl. 2 ► It should be 20,000. (Based on the text later and also WN.) - [18%] behind obtaining
skills .
These specific ► Removeextra space
. [28%]Already reported.orrects
the body’s posture ► It should be Corrects.- [31%] derived from
“albaheron”,
Mash’s name ► Move the comma inside the quotes. - [38%] “Don’t make trouble for
the father
, okay?” ► It should be your father? - [55%] behind to watch the other
childrens’
results. ► It should be children’s (move the s). - [73%] just like that?
Ater
all the fuss they made ► It should be After. - [79%] maximum value a stat could cap out
at. .
► Duplicateperiod
.
- [14%] had both heard from
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Volume 1 - Part 2:
[~15%] Allen's MP recoveres to full after sleeping for half a day (i.e., 6 hours).
This may be correct, but half a day is 12 hours, and 6 hours being a quarter of a day, right? Assuming 6 h/MP × 2 MP = 12 h that may be correct, but I don't know what it originally is, so...
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Are we sure his brother's name is "Mash"? Is it マシュー? As that's a common katakana for Matthew.
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@mlindner said in Hell Mode Vol. 1 Discussion!:
Are we sure his brother's name is "Mash"? Is it マシュー? As that's a common katakana for Matthew.
This would probably be better in corrections.
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Volume 1 - Part 4:
- [13%] time to meet the knights.
Greda
walked forward, ► It should be Gerda.
- [13%] time to meet the knights.
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@terabyte said in Hell Mode - Corrections Topic:
Volume 1 - Part 4:
- [13%] time to meet the knights.
Greda
walked forward, ► It should be Gerda.
Dang, Gerda's twin brother "Greda" making another appearance. Thanks for catching!
- [13%] time to meet the knights.
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Volume 1 - Part 5:
- [89%] studying the Rank F Summons to
the the
extent ► Duplicatethe
.
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Volume 1 - Part 6:
- [60%] the +20 buffs, rather than
the the
+10 offered ► Duplicatethe
. - [74%] The same bird that
signalled
the passing of the ► It should be signaled (US spelling).
- [89%] studying the Rank F Summons to
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Volume 1 - Part 7:
- [18%] nodded to show his
acknowledgement
. He adjusted ► It should be acknowledgment (US spelling).
- [18%] nodded to show his
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Volume 1 - Part 8:
- [33%] to recover MP does exist but is very
experience
. ► It should be expensive. - [45%] received official
acknowledgement
as a full-fledged ► It should be acknowledgment (US spelling). - [90%] “Gerda and I
discuss
increasing the frequency of ► It should be discussed. - [95%] after all, a
six year old
boy who had never even ► It should be six-year-old (hyphens).
- [33%] to recover MP does exist but is very
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V1P8, 6%: "Rodin knew better [than] to say no"
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Volume 1 - Part 9:
- [14%] double the number of great
boar
hunted. Both ► It should be boars. - [32%] When
Team 2
managed to lock the great boar’s ► It should be Team Two (in letters) for consistency. - [54%] Allen nodded in
acknowledgement
, then began ► It should be acknowledgment (US spelling). - [60%] was stopped, then
Team 3
stepped forward to ► It should be Team Three (in letters) for consistency.
- [14%] double the number of great
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V1, P10, 77%: “Deboji had sent a messenger To Rodin’s surprise” - missing fullstop
80%: “fiststoo” - missing space -
Volume 1 - Part 10:
- [10%] in arm wrestling now
?I’m
so glad this level up came ► Missing space. [75%]Already reported.Deboji had sent a messenger
To Rodin’s surprise, ► Missing period.[77%] as Gerda would resort to using hisAlready reported.fiststoo
quickly. ► It should be fists too (space).
- [10%] in arm wrestling now
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V1P10
48% - However, this was a proper
fleshed
-and-blood world, not a game. ► Should be flesh-and-blood Only two saying I know would work for this. Either flesh-and-blood or fleshed out. -
Volume 1 - Part 11:
- [40%] dented the shields, but they otherwise held
fast..
► Duplicateperiod
. - [52%] the price of a large steel shield
swas
astronomical..
► A couple of issues:- It should be was.
- Duplicate
period
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- [83%] in fact, virtually every one of the village’s
menfolk
► Missing period. - [84%] one that was
frantic.Many
had ended up severely ► Missing space.
- [40%] dented the shields, but they otherwise held
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Volume 1, Part 11
[43%] With the monster properly locked down, it was Rodin's team of spearmen to shine. ➡ maybe add time for between was and Rodin's? -
There's a bunch of stuff this week that I'm sure someone with a keyboard will be better able to type out, but the one I wanted to inquire about was...
In the middle of that phase in my life, I suddenly came across Reincarnated as a Dragon's Egg
I'm sure this is a valid translation of the Japanese name for this series, but shouldn't this be Reincarnated as a Dragon Hatchling to match the english name for the series?