My Daughter Left the Nest and Returned an S-Rank Adventurer - Corrections Topic

costmuffled

Vol. 01, Part 04, ~10%
"The residents of Turnera were generally self-sufficient. The strain of wheat that served as their staple food took up quite a bit of land, so the villagers would work together on that field in particular. However, they would all have to grow any of the other usual vegetables for themselves."

Wheat isn't a vegetable, so it would be inappropriate to refer to it as an antecedent with "any of the other usual vegetables". Perhaps:

"However, they would have to grow any vegetables they wanted for themselves in their own plots".

Rahul Balaggan

@costmuffled

Hello,

I have moved your post into the S-Rank corrections topic, your post can be found at the following link: https://forums.j-novel.club/post/142627

Thank you for taking the time to post about this, for future reference, all volume discussion topics have a link to the corrections topic in the opening post.

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