My Daughter Left the Nest and Returned an S-Rank Adventurer - Corrections Topic
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Vol. 01, Part 04, ~10%
"The residents of Turnera were generally self-sufficient. The strain of wheat that served as their staple food took up quite a bit of land, so the villagers would work together on that field in particular. However, they would all have to grow any of the other usual vegetables for themselves."Wheat isn't a vegetable, so it would be inappropriate to refer to it as an antecedent with "any of the other usual vegetables". Perhaps:
"However, they would have to grow any vegetables they wanted for themselves in their own plots".
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