Fantasy Inbound - Corrections Topic

myskaros

This is the dedicated topic for posting suggested corrections about Fantasy Inbound!

Currently in prepublication: Volume 1!

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Volume 1 - Part 1:

[74%] could have elsewhere. If only they'd had one. ► It should be they’d (different ’ ).

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Volume 1 - Part 2:

[9%] no amount of external judgement would stop her. ► It should be judgment (US spelling).
[66%] candles or lamps fuelled with salad oil if they ► It should be fueled (US spelling).
[74%] must. Believe me,we would have made a grand ► Missing space.
[96%] captivatingly beautiful. It sang, as if reciting a poem, ► It should be a colon? (Or a period?)

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Volume 1 - Part 3:

[21%] in light. “W-What the heck are those things!?” ► It should be ?! for consistency.
[38%] I-It won’t let go! Crap, there’s another one! ► The dialogue's starting double quote is missing.
[56%] “I shall sing the traveller’s hymn. A song for ► It should be traveler’s (US spelling).
[75%] our escape plan doesn’t get out. Play it safe” ► Missing period.
[85%] “Yu,’ she said, “you accessed the Astral Library’s ► The dialogue's closing double quote is a single one.

thefirstpunicwar

V1P1

52% - set with building muscles, boar-like faces ► Should this be bulging.

Canipa

Thank you for the help, all. This is my first time as editor, so it's been a bit of a learning curve.

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Volume 1 - Part 4:

[...] wonders for morale.” The adjutant chuckled derisively. The adjutant chuckled derisively, his unrepentant cruelty [...]

[71%] “Yu!” Aliya exclaimed ► Missing period.
[73%] Yu realized that he wasn't quite as right as ► It should be wasn’t (different ’ ).

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Volume 1 - Part 5:

[53%] perfectly functional!” Aliya assured. “Stay calm, Yu! ► The dialogue's closing double quote is missing.