Fantasy Inbound - Corrections Topic

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Volume 2 - Part 7:

[6%] how often you got raked over the calls when you ► It should be coals?

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Volume 2 - Part 8:

[9%] their numbers easily totalling over a thousand. ► It should be totaling (US spelling).

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Volume 2 - Part 9:

[9%] proved consitently effective against the ► It should be consistently.
[34%] Anything could appear without warning ► Missing period.

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Volume 2 - Part 10:

Shiroi Hane

V2P6: "they strided along the ocean" - strode
"wielding viscous-looking tridents" - vicious.
"Grinded a few handfuls of beans" - ground

P9: "they could make antholes out of their foes" - can't make sense of 'antholes'; anthills maybe (as in full of holes)?

P10: "Packing them MUV peek-a-boo bombers" packing them full of/with

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Volume 3 - Part 2:

[15%] parroted. “Don't tell me you're on a ship ► They should be Don’t / you’re (different ’ ).
[15%] city and you don't even know what Asura ► It should be don’t (different ’ ).
[73%] “Astaghfirullah, you can't be serious!” ► It should be can’t (different ’ ).

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Volume 3 - Part 3:

[57%] “Oh, believe me,” Nadal interrupted. “I have every idea,” ► It should be a period.

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Volume 3 - Part 6:

[5%] “Perhaps it's concealing itself with magic,” ► It should be it’s (different ’ ).
[20%] He'd damaged the droid, which must have ► It should be He’d (different ’ ).
[48%] against Rudra's still-burning chestplate, Yu ► It should be Rudra’s (different ’ ).

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Volume 3 - Part 7:

[55%] Yu had quickly given up one seeing any familiar ► It should be on.
[65%] I was even here, they'll have me gunned down. ► It should be they’ll (different ’ ).

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Volume 3 - Part 8:

[37%] their orbit had overlapped with Earths, they had ► It should be Earth’s.

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Volume 3 - Part 10: