Oversummoned, Overpowered, and Over It! - Corrections Topic

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This is the dedicated topic for posting suggested corrections for Oversummoned, Overpowered, and Over It!

Currently in prepublication: Volume 1!

SomeOldGuy

V1 P2, 24%:
But they're the ones who summoned us!
T needs to be put inside the italics.

Terabyte

Volume 1 - Part 1:

[Generic] All other JNC novels keep commas/periods inside quotes but this LN isn't following that style. Example: [...] like “Imagination Magic”, or “Limit Breaker”, or [...].
[49%] goddess resided. Man, just how many times ► The part Man, j should be in italic format too.
[59%] top priority. Besides, this is a million times ► The t character in this should be in italic format too.
[73%] appreciate it and all, but this kindness is so ► The t character in this should be in italic format too.
[95%] What, couldn’t think of a better retort, dear ► The c character in couldn’t should be in italic format too.

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Volume 1 - Part 2:

~~[25%] But they’re the ones who summoned us!”* ► The t character in they’re should be in italic format too.~~ Already reported.
[25%] Ryuto. Now, while their actions were expected, ► Remove the italic format from the t character in their.
[34%] [Armament Craft] [Level Up] [Skill Acquisition] ► A skill it missing. It should be [Detect] [Level Up].
[52%] looked completely refreshed. How shameless. ► The s character in shameless should be in italic format too.
[57%] Hey, don’t compare me to those superhumans. ► The part Hey, d should be in italic format too.
[80%] “I’ll take ‘em,” I said. ► It should be ’em (different ’ ).

Weasalopes

v1p2:

Now I needed to drain someone's blood instead of just touching them.

Given that there is an in-novel difference between drink and drain, and that the text describing the skill did say drink, is this really what the raws used here?

Drink some blood, sure, no prob.
Drain applies to drinking all of their blood, turning them into an undead.
He'd be showing a stronger reaction if the change were going from touching them to turning them into an undead; that's a tad further than "Oh, midnight snack? Grab a skill at the same time? Don't mind if I do!"

Terabyte

Volume 1 - Part 3:

[9%] To this, The second princess had no ► It should be the (lowercase).
[34%] ► Maybe add a space between the stats themselves and the parentheses?

HP: 1351/1351(+400+120) / MP: 10445/12067(+4000+0)
STR: 1507(+400+133) / VIT: 1457(400+89) / DEX: 1403(+4000+60)
AGI: 1625(+400+149) / INT: 3356(+800+0)

[49%] Here’s what I’d figured out so far.. ► Duplicate period.
[69%] and asked her a question of my own.. ► Duplicate period.
[95%] met during my “travels”, she was the ► Move the comma inside the quotes.

Momo Momo

@Terabyte ty as usual!!

Hylebos

Part 4, final sentence:

WIth that thought, I stepped towards the illusory space.

WIth -> With :P

mattashii

One consistency issue in V1P4:

At 44% he has the Ham Actor title in his status (according to that section it's at the night of the banquet, which is mentioned at 48%), but he mentions that he just received the Ham Actor title after the meeting with the queen 2 days later (starting 72%, title gain mentioned at 88%)

Geirrlon Dunn.syrjh4g

@mattashii Good eye! You're absolutely right. The source text had it like that too, so we decided to stay consistent with how it had things.

Terabyte

Volume 1 - Part 2:

[Generic] The surname Takafuji is written 2 times as Takafuki.

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Volume 1 - Part 4:

[24%] She recalled the ruckus that Inori Takafuki had caused. ► It should be Takafuji.
[44%] ► Maybe add a space between the stats themselves and the parentheses?

HP: 2325/2325(+300+674) / MP: 15070/15070(+3000+3)
STR: 2487(+300+680) / VIT: 2233(+300+476) / DEX: 1961(+300+258)
AGI: 2711(+300+786) / INT: 3968(+600+12)

[90%] but I’d gained the title “Ham Actor.” Shut up, stats. ► This is wrong. Takafuji already has the Ham Actor title before the 'duel' when his status is shown before around 44-45%. This sentence is either translated wrongly or the status shown before was mistakenly added the Ham Actor title. Already reported.
~~[100%] All right, let’s do it. WIth that thought, I stepped towards ► It should be With (lowercase i).~~ Already reported.

Terabyte

Volume 1 - Part 5:

[Generic] ► The last image was insert2.jpg in part 2 and now we have insert4.jpg. There's a missing insert3.jpg somewhere.
[60%] “Raaargh” ► Missing punctuation.

Kotenmaru

Volume 1, Part 6, 86% In Inori's skill list, it says Poise, but he calls it Composure immediately after that. Not sure if the mismatch is intentional or not.

Terabyte

Volume 1 - Part 6:

[43%] Black Blood Shirt (Creator: Inori Takafuji) ► This paragraph isn't indented like the following ones.
[87%] / VIT: 2827(+500+94) / DEX: 2513(+500+52) / ► Remove extra / at the end.
~~[92%] Trapper, Flight, Evasion, Composure, and String ► It was Poise in the status. Update either one for consistency.~~ Already reported.

Loreamire Nhymryedel

Vol 1 part 6 27% in, Inori is experimenting with knives made from different materials. Notes mithril and iron has little effect and silver does not heal right away.

46% in, Inori states that silver really healed up fast to actually cause no damage.

This may all be correct but I found it contradictory.