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    • AnthonyA
      Anthony
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      I'm not sure where to put this, so I'm putting it here. Towards the end of Chapter 5 of Grimgar of Fantasy and Ash there's a typo.

      It says "Summon a demon!" Ranta clenched his had into a fist...

      Unless I'm reading it wrong, shouldn't "had" be "hand"?

      Also, I tried to upload a picture (I'm on my phone) to show you guys the mistake but it said I didn't have permission.

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      • S
        Sean McCann Translators
        last edited by

        Thanks for the report. Fixed!

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        • AnthonyA
          Anthony
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          Chapter 11

          About 75% on mobile. "They were coming over is way now"

          "is" should be "his"

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          • S
            Sean McCann Translators
            last edited by

            Thanks again. Fixed.

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            • AnthonyA
              Anthony
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              Chapter 16

              About 34% on mobile. "Haruhiro her envied for that".

              I believe it should be "Haruhiro envied her for that"

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              • S
                Sean McCann Translators
                last edited by

                Fixed. :)

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                • AnthonyA
                  Anthony
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                  Chapter 16

                  For these ones I'm not to sure, but the sentencing seemed weird, so I thought I'd mention it.

                  About 50% "Ranta forcibly kicked the a goblin away from himself"

                  "the a goblin"?

                  About 82% "He wore a long asymmetrical skirt his lower body..."

                  "skirt his lower"?

                  Sorry in advance if that's how it's supposed to be, they just seemed weird to me.

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                  • AnthonyA
                    Anthony
                    last edited by

                    Again like my previous post, I'm not to sure about this one, it just seemed weird to me. Sorry in advance if it's supposed to be like that.

                    Chapter 20

                    The 4th paragraph before the chapter ends.

                    "First her machete knock away its spear..."

                    Should "knock" be "knocked"?

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