Part 8

48%
The base of operations of the Area 2 Fleet, the star system known as the Secar Viscountdom was virtually a war plant.
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67%
As a result, the military succeeded in taking Lahkfacar, and gained control of the three
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67%
There will be a different mission or you."
--for

95%
Its territory has been torn apart, with no ability to contact each other.
--seems like odd phrasing