Volume 5 - Part 6:

[12%] Ketty was there along with a Kefin’s team. His men ► Remove extra a. [22%] been awaiting my judgement: whether to slay the ► It should be judgment (US spelling). [40%] sir, anything but that.”Verdel, however, seemed to ► Missing space. Already reported. [51%] in the middle of building the adventurer housing.” ► It should be adventurers’? [71%] “Gotcha.”She left the room. ► Missing space. Also, change it to she said as she left? [96%] “Have anything, Ketty? ► The dialogue's closing double quote is missing.