At 8% of Part 7/Chapter 3, you're still alternating between Tiffes and Majic in the narration and dialogue with Claiomh. Majic currently isn't with Claiomh in this Part and has been accompanying Orphen and Leticia throughout the third chapter. At 85% of Part 7, the line "Krylancelo has no self-control these days, huh.." should be italicized since it's written as Leticia's thoughts. In Part 5 at 71%, There's a line in Forte's dialogue that doesn't make sense. He states to Orphen that "Yes. I'm Wall Kahlen of the Wall Kahlen classes now, I'm sure you haven't forgotten that." I don't know if this was meant as sarcasm on his part or if this is a botched line. Shouldn't it be: "Yes. It's Wall Kahlen of the Wall Kahlen classes now."?

@terabyte Thank you.

3/4 I need to catch up with, so this is good. I just haven't read one volume in Clockwork iirc.

I just noticed the v4 p1 synopsis is mistakenly the text for v3.