[Editing/Grammer] How a Realist Hero Rebuilt the Kingdom

  • Premium Member

    Not sure if this already exists in a members only section or if it's not needed as this is "pre-pub" and therefore expected. If not I suppose this will be the start of an editing thread for How a Realist Hero Rebuilt the Kingdom (現実主義勇者の王国再建記).

    Part 1
    10% - The Northern Countries had been laid waste, and the demonic forces, which had until then held only the equivalent of a small county, came to rule a third of the continent.

    66% - Though it felt like at threat, it was not an actual threat, so, to keep up appearances, the Empire would not insist on it any further.

  • Translators

    @redmaw I've rewritten those two sentences and improved their readability IMO.

    Please feel free to point out any other sections you think could use some polish!

  • Member

    Volume 3 Part 11,
    Theres a line with a 0 in it.


  • Translators

    @ruifung In the future just post in the thread in the members section for this particular voilume and it'll be more noticed I think.

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