[Editing/Grammer] How a Realist Hero Rebuilt the Kingdom



  • Not sure if this already exists in a members only section or if it's not needed as this is "pre-pub" and therefore expected. If not I suppose this will be the start of an editing thread for How a Realist Hero Rebuilt the Kingdom (現実主義勇者の王国再建記).

    Part 1
    10% - The Northern Countries had been laid waste, and the demonic forces, which had until then held only the equivalent of a small county, came to rule a third of the continent.

    66% - Though it felt like at threat, it was not an actual threat, so, to keep up appearances, the Empire would not insist on it any further.


  • Translators

    @redmaw I've rewritten those two sentences and improved their readability IMO.

    Please feel free to point out any other sections you think could use some polish!


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