J-Novel Club
    • Login
    • Search
    • Categories
    • Recent
    • Tags
    • Users

    New WebNovel

    Web Novel Discussion
    1
    1
    44
    Loading More Posts
    • Oldest to Newest
    • Newest to Oldest
    • Most Votes
    Reply
    • Reply as topic
    Log in to reply
    This topic has been deleted. Only users with topic management privileges can see it.
    • Sleepyfoxy
      Sleepyfoxy last edited by Sleepyfoxy

      I’m a new author and I’ve just started working on my first story. I’d really love some feedback on the synopsis to see if it sounds interesting!

      -"The Weight of What If"
      "What if every choice you never made haunted you?"

      Ardyn Veythar is cursed with the ultimate power—the ability to see every "what if."

      What if he had stayed to fight instead of running?

      What if he had shown mercy instead of becoming a tyrant?

      What if he had died a hero instead of living long enough to forget his own name?

      The Paradox Sovereign grants him mastery over fractured time—but at a terrible cost. Every unlived life, every abandoned future, claws at his mind like a starving beast. The world bends unnaturally around him; people’s memories shift when he speaks, his very presence unraveling the seams of reality.

      Now, as the last remnants of a dying world crumble—the angel-sustained paradise, the god-corpses buried beneath the ice, the obelisks holding back the void—Ardyn faces the cruelest truth of all:

      Infinite possibilities, and none of them bring her back.

      Can a man who has lived a thousand lives ever find one where he isn’t alone? Or is peace the one path even the Paradox Sovereign cannot reach?

      1 Reply Last reply Reply Quote 0
      • 1 / 1
      • First post
        Last post