Chapter 2 page 23, 4th narration bubble: "Entering it with a large group of soldiers could been seen as an act of war.
Chapter 3 page 25: Having "Oh right" starting the sentence for two bubbles in a row is a bit awkward.
Something from the volume 2 epub that I wanted to check:
"The countries close to Gideon are Caldina and Legendaria. The latter signed a treaty of commerce with Altar, while the former is a full ally
For some reason, I had the impression that Legendaria was Altar's ally; and Caldina having a treaty of commerce seems more like a match. Is my impression wrong, or did that get mistakenly flipped in the text?
Also, more generally, I remember Steiner commenting that Gardranda's title was being changed from "Demon" to "Hobgoblin." It was Demon in the (recently downloaded) volume 1 premium epub, but is that just a matter of the epubs not being updated, or did it switch back to Demon?