v47p8:
~56%: "Having anticipated Kenji's resistance, he pointed the sword at Nalfa once more.Kenji grunted." -> should be more and Kenji grunted. ? ~59%: "She had seen the splattered... the Imperial Solders ;ay unmoving on the ground." -> lay ~74%: "HE wasn't skilled enough to surprise attack the Gray Knight,..." -> He, and maybe it would make sense to word the other part as make a surprise attack on?