Feedback for round 2 people who didn't make the cut are out, though of course the email filter decides it's spam so I had to go dig it out...
The good news from my perspective is that all of the critiques were centered around things I myself knew were likely to be problematic, and I suspect were also reasons why my second entry didn't get past round 1. Getting confirmation that the overall premise and prose were fine indicates that the foundation was good and is something I can work with for the future. I will have to think a little bit about how to rectify the noted issues, the challenge for me at least is to make sure there's sufficient action and development without also forcibly rushing the resolution as well. The catch I have is that, since I hewed towards a more realistic bent, often times the best solution to a problem is a direct solution (kill 'em all), and direct solutions tend to be quick solutions (no such thing as overkill). So, will need to get creative. Aside from just doubling the length of my next submission if JNC runs the contest again.
I did get a chuckle out of the "running around...committing copyright infringement" description of my main character.