@terabyte said in Forget Being the Villainess, I Want to Be an Adventurer! - Corrections Topic:

[67%] Hey, come on! This was an act of goddess! ► It should be an act of the goddess or maybe a godly act ?

It parallels the phrase "Act of God," just modified as to gender.

V2p3
[80%] “It won’t open?!” Agness tried pushing, -> Agnes

@Terabyte sankyu!

Volume 4 - Part 11:

[19%] to reveal unfocussed hazelnut-colored eyes. ► It should be unfocused. [79%] So. I handed over the medicine anyway and ► Remove So. or just the period?

Volume 4 - Part 6:

[78%] warmer by the second,” Irma said to sooth her. ► It should be soothe.

v4p8:

19% - “Besides, it wasn’t as if anyone looked at the scepter but so closely anyway.” -> Should that “but” really be there?

The sentence nearly always sounds better in my head when it’s absent, but something almost clicks in my head on occasion when it is there. I’m not sure if I’ve read a similar usage of the word, or it’s just close enough to some other word/usage (“naught but one”?).

Volume 6 - Part 6:

[79%] I trust his word. >> missing closing double quote

Volume 9 part 10

He was making it clear to everyone that he no one else was to lay a hand on her > delete

@pcj said in Girls Kingdom - Corrections Topic:

Volume 4 - Part 8:

[68%] I don’t think there’s anyone else who could Lady Saeko’s Seraph. >> missing be

Fixed, thank you!

@iseguy said in Girls Kingdom - Corrections Topic:

4.9

Even Lady Angelica was audibly shocked by this. “My word!”
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“Why would she do that? It definitely came from Saeko? Matsuri wasn’t the one who wanted to quit?”

These should really be one paragraph, especially if you're forced to use incorrect quotes otherwise.

Yup, this one was just a typo. Thanks!

@iseguy said in Girls Kingdom - Corrections Topic:

4.10

if you’re asking Matsuri to pay the insurance fee,

“deductible”
(You pay the fees before the accident.)

I knew there was a word I was looking for 😅 Thank you!

Volume 8 - Part 11:

[1%] as she walked out the royal castle. >> should be out of [61%] As long as immobilize us >> should be as they

In Volume 4 part 9 around %70 "head made" should be 'head maid'

Part 7:
[39%] That’s my rival, you know. My rival for Rockmann’s love. > Should it be Sir Alois’s love since this is Maris’s line?
[48%] It’s a tiny human! Oh my…” > delete a double quotation mark.
[91%] …but he groans “no!” so I just stop trying … > “No!”

Part 9:
[77%] Who is “Stadal?” > Move quotation mark before the question mark.
[82%] “ ‘Stadal!’ It’s written right here!” > Move single quotation mark before exclamation mark.

Part 10:
[6%] “Oi, you two laggards! Aren’t you supposed to me men?” > Should it be Hey?
[89%] Didn’t it say, “every living creature on the continent?” > Should the double quotation mark be placed before question mark?

Part 11:
[16%] Come on, we should be thinking up ways to squash Stadal, not offer me up to it. > The “ä” in Stadal is tiny.
[16%] … he points up at Stadal floating up in the sky… > The “ä” in Stadal is tiny.
[47%] “In mine own name of Hades, I beseech you…” > It said “In my own name of …” in Volume 2.

Part 12:
[0%] In mine own name of …, I beseech you > It said “In my own name of …” in Volume 2
[4%] “What they ‘really do?’ ” & “ ‘Make connections?’ ”> Move single quotation mark before question mark.
[29%] “Lady**!** Nanalie!” > Should it be “Lady Nanalie!” ?
[75%] …answer her question about “quitting my job:” > Should the quotation mark be placed before the colon?

V6P3
61% - his name meant "nine." I went through a lot of... - Missing opening quote at the start of "I went through...

Volume 5 - Part 10:

[28%] learning how the lady of the manner had suffered ► It should be manor.

Volume 9 - Part 7:

[22%] “That’s me, all right! Your pop-pop!” ► It should be Pop-Pop. (Capitalized). [23%] “You got it—I’m your nana! Oh, that ► It should be Nana (Capitalized).