Volume 4 - Part 4: [44%]: "Yeah, I know, sounds like a fishy story." (missing Y) [63%]: "(...) shooting four thread-like peals(...)" No dictionary definition I could find has anything for "peal" as a noun that would fit here, so I assume this is some kind of typo. [66%]: "No duh, bro!" Maybe it's just me, but "bro" sounds a bit weird coming from Lina's mouth (or thoughts). Or I'm just hopelessly old. XP [66%] "(...)fury written across his face." [75%] "An ecstatic smile on his face(...)" and also [86%] "A broad smile flashed across his lips." A page ago Kanzel was described as no longer having a mouth. Could be an issue with the original description though.